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Script/Movie: Michael’s The Detetive

I am reading a book. My establishing shot
The phone rings I answered and said, “Hello Detectives Agency ok I’ll be right over.”
I interviewed the man he told me someone had stolen his lunchbox”.
Later that day I was playing chess with my best friend John.
The next day I was walking to work and I saw the man with the lunchbox and said,”FREEZE! He started running and I said, STOP!”
And then he finally triped after five minutes and I took him to jail while I returned the lunchbox to the owner.

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15 Comments

  1. Michael’s editing was kinda off but other than that the movie was great. Also I caught the D/A in the scene where Michael was chasing Johnny. I think they could work on the slow motion part when Michael started chasing Johnny.

  2. Some parts weren’t clear and I couldn’t understand your whole movie. But the part I like is when Johnny fells and you take him to jail its funny.

  3. I liked how you used different shots of your movie. Litzy was in your running scene

  4. I liked how you used different shots of your movie. Litzy was in your running scene.

  5. It was funny.

    But there were a part inthe beganing that u and someone is playing you in chess why was that in there

  6. I liked the movie. But it didn’t make sense. I mean if it was about someone doing a crime why did it have a chess scene. I liked the part when Michael caught Johnny and said “He’s going to jail.”. That was a very funny movie.

  7. Why did you have a chess game during the scene? I don’t get it. I could barely see the chase scene and why did Johnny N. fall down? I liked the expression and shots.

  8. There was some great expression used. But you can work on some editing. On a scene you could see the director’s assistant.

  9. When Johnny fell down the camera was still running.
    This the first movie to ever have running in it!

  10. I liked this video – even the random chess scene (passing the time between the interview and chase scene?). The chase scene had good action, I liked the changing perspectives while you both ran. Good job.

  11. I am reading a book. My establishing shot
    The phone rings I answered and said, “Hello Detectives Agency ok I’ll be right over.”
    I interviewed the man he told me someone had stolen his lunchbox”.
    Later that day I was playing chess with my best friend John.
    The next day I was walking to work and I saw the man with the lunchbox and said,”FREEZE! He started running and I said, STOP!”
    And then he finally triped after five minutes and I took him to jail while I returned the lunchbox to the owner.

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