I am reading a book. My establishing shot
The phone rings I answered and said, “Hello Detectives Agency ok I’ll be right over.”
I interviewed the man he told me someone had stolen his lunchbox”.
Later that day I was playing chess with my best friend John.
The next day I was walking to work and I saw the man with the lunchbox and said,”FREEZE! He started running and I said, STOP!”
And then he finally triped after five minutes and I took him to jail while I returned the lunchbox to the owner.
I liked most of the movie. Why did you put a chess game scene?
Michael’s editing was kinda off but other than that the movie was great. Also I caught the D/A in the scene where Michael was chasing Johnny. I think they could work on the slow motion part when Michael started chasing Johnny.
Some parts weren’t clear and I couldn’t understand your whole movie. But the part I like is when Johnny fells and you take him to jail its funny.
I liked how you used different shots of your movie. Litzy was in your running scene
I liked how you used different shots of your movie. Litzy was in your running scene.
It was funny.
But there were a part inthe beganing that u and someone is playing you in chess why was that in there
I liked the movie. But it didn’t make sense. I mean if it was about someone doing a crime why did it have a chess scene. I liked the part when Michael caught Johnny and said “He’s going to jail.”. That was a very funny movie.
Why did you have a chess game during the scene? I don’t get it. I could barely see the chase scene and why did Johnny N. fall down? I liked the expression and shots.
It was a little odd with the chess game. What was it for?:(
There was some great expression used. But you can work on some editing. On a scene you could see the director’s assistant.
I need to work on editing.
When Johnny fell down the camera was still running.
This the first movie to ever have running in it!
I liked this video – even the random chess scene (passing the time between the interview and chase scene?). The chase scene had good action, I liked the changing perspectives while you both ran. Good job.
Thanks Jason for the complment. I apprecate it thank you
I am reading a book. My establishing shot
The phone rings I answered and said, “Hello Detectives Agency ok I’ll be right over.”
I interviewed the man he told me someone had stolen his lunchbox”.
Later that day I was playing chess with my best friend John.
The next day I was walking to work and I saw the man with the lunchbox and said,”FREEZE! He started running and I said, STOP!”
And then he finally triped after five minutes and I took him to jail while I returned the lunchbox to the owner.