What did Lucy think the
courtyard with the statues first
looked like?
Posted November 16, 2015 by mspenrose in category Uncategorized
12 thoughts on “Journal”
Lav3nd3r
Lucy first thought the courtyard looked like a museum.
mspenrose(Post author)
Kevin, you need more sentences. Also,you need more details.
Amanda
Lucy thought that the statues looked like weird people.
Galexycraft aka donny
She thought it looked like just statues of people or fauns like mr.tumnes and they would find him in the statues maybe and that
is what it would look like
mspenrose(Post author)
Donny, you need a peroid at the end of the sentences. And you need more sentences.
Death king or King of the Dead
When Lucy and Susan first saw the court yard Lucy thought It was Extraordinary Place,All the animals and People like it was a Museum.
mspenrose(Post author)
Junior good but you need more sentences.
Monica Mendoza
the first statues Lucy saw was the faun,she got sad because the faun got to get into a statue.AsLan went to the castle of the white witch and blew the ones that got into statue and the faun was alive and he did not got froze ever again. there was a lot of people who got froze by the white witch.the witch was cruel and bad to other people who were the good people that had a good heart like lucy has.the faun and lucy and aslan had a great heart .lucy was the first to see the statue.
Myles
Lucy thought it was awful and sad that every one was a stone even the faun.
mspenrose(Post author)
Monica, you do so good. your sentences are long but don’t forget to use spacing.
mspenrose(Post author)
Myles, you need more sentences too. But, you need more details.
leilani
what i got from the book was that lucy thought the court yard was a muesum of statues. Because she saw statues every where inside the builing and out.
Lucy first thought the courtyard looked like a museum.
Kevin, you need more sentences. Also,you need more details.
Lucy thought that the statues looked like weird people.
She thought it looked like just statues of people or fauns like mr.tumnes and they would find him in the statues maybe and that
is what it would look like
Donny, you need a peroid at the end of the sentences. And you need more sentences.
When Lucy and Susan first saw the court yard Lucy thought It was Extraordinary Place,All the animals and People like it was a Museum.
Junior good but you need more sentences.
the first statues Lucy saw was the faun,she got sad because the faun got to get into a statue.AsLan went to the castle of the white witch and blew the ones that got into statue and the faun was alive and he did not got froze ever again. there was a lot of people who got froze by the white witch.the witch was cruel and bad to other people who were the good people that had a good heart like lucy has.the faun and lucy and aslan had a great heart .lucy was the first to see the statue.
Lucy thought it was awful and sad that every one was a stone even the faun.
Monica, you do so good. your sentences are long but don’t forget to use spacing.
Myles, you need more sentences too. But, you need more details.
what i got from the book was that lucy thought the court yard was a muesum of statues. Because she saw statues every where inside the builing and out.