Good job on editing Nataly
I like your music choice
The music was appropriate for your movie.
You knew all your lines and didn’t have to pause between words.
Really good at remembering your line. Nice job.
i like how you said your lines so good. could slow down talking. love it.
You did your research on your job.
Could have made music lower.
Nice content on movie.
A1: Hello! My name is Nataly and I would like to become an author.
A1: What authors do is create a story and publish it so other people can buy it.
A1: The first step you need to become an author is to have a college and bachelor’s degree, some writers who want to write about one particular subject need training related to that subject.
A1: The second step to becoming a writer is to get experience by working for college newspapers, high schools, etc.
A1: The final step to become an author is to build a reputation and start publishing your stories or start working for smaller businesses.
Nataly your movie was great but you looked a little nervous
Good job on editing Nataly
I like your music choice
The music was appropriate for your movie.
You knew all your lines and didn’t have to pause between words.
Really good at remembering your line. Nice job.
i like how you said your lines so good. could slow down talking. love it.
You did your research on your job.
Could have made music lower.
Nice content on movie.
A1: Hello! My name is Nataly and I would like to become an author.
A1: What authors do is create a story and publish it so other people can buy it.
A1: The first step you need to become an author is to have a college and bachelor’s degree, some writers who want to write about one particular subject need training related to that subject.
A1: The second step to becoming a writer is to get experience by working for college newspapers, high schools, etc.
A1: The final step to become an author is to build a reputation and start publishing your stories or start working for smaller businesses.
Nataly your movie was great but you looked a little nervous
You are a professional reporter Nataly!