”What should we do today?” said Ben.
”I don’t know what do you want to do” said Javonte.
“I don’t know, what time is it?” said Ben.
”I don’t know look at the clock of course.” said Javonte.
”Oh look it’s 1 o’clock.” said Ben.
”Do you want to play connect four?” said Javonte.
”Sure why not.” I said.
”Do you want to go first?” said Ben.
”Sure.” said Javonte.
”This game is getting boring already.” said Ben.
”Well I’m going outside, do you want to tag along?” said Ben.
”Okay let’s go” Javonte said.
The directing was very good. The same background sometimes.
You were great but there was one scene that had to much head space. Also you had great expression!
Sincerely,
Jazmine
I think you could use a couple more shots of the board. But other than that both you and Javonte had great volume.
I liked how they said there lines clearly and loudly. But it was actually a little bit boring.
I like it was good but Javonte did not say his line right. But everything but that is good and I like it was the best.
I liked how they said their lines clearly and loud. But it was actually a little bit boring.
I like it. It tells about what you do on a boring day. But can you finsh the game.
hey why dose the game that you play just appear on the table.
I like how the camera moved instead of the people. You need to work on your emotion to improve a little more.
You guys are great actors. But both of you guys can work on some expression.
I liked that you played connect four because i like that game.
You guys rock.