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  1. I liked the close – ups really much.But onsome of the scenes Adrian was laughing, saying his line.Also the camera was moving I liked that.

    Sincerely,
    Jazmine

  2. It was pretty funny when Adrian said ” I checked everywhere except my backpack, my binder, and my folder.”. But Adrian kept on laughing through his lines.

  3. It`s a great movie. I didn`t get when you said,” I can`t find it. ” When you said you look in your backpack.

  4. You should put a black screen on the part where you said let’s go check in the liveing room

  5. During the scenes, Adrian was laughing through his lines, and everything else is fine.

  6. Adrian,

    i really like the movie and i think that you guys should submit that to the seva awaerds because im sure that it will get 1st place and if your in ms.mills’s eagle time class you already know how to make a great movie.

  7. Why was Adrian laughing, you could have gotten a better shot. I liked the expression and shots.

  8. Johnny said, “Hello are you ready for schooll”.

    I said, “Almost I just got to finish picking up my stuff.”

    “Okay” said johnny,

    I said, “Johnny do you know where my homework is”

    INCOMPLETE

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