Always laugh after every line. Good writen script.
I liked the close – ups really much.But onsome of the scenes Adrian was laughing, saying his line.Also the camera was moving I liked that.
Sincerely,
Jazmine
It was good. But it was fanny and you can’t stop looking at the camer.
It was pretty funny when Adrian said ” I checked everywhere except my backpack, my binder, and my folder.”. But Adrian kept on laughing through his lines.
It`s a great movie. I didn`t get when you said,” I can`t find it. ” When you said you look in your backpack.
I don’t like that I smiling all the time.
You should put a black screen on the part where you said let’s go check in the liveing room
Adrian the movie is great but, why are you laughing in ezery scene?
During the scenes, Adrian was laughing through his lines, and everything else is fine.
Your movie was very great. But you need to work on your laughter.
Adrian,
i really like the movie and i think that you guys should submit that to the seva awaerds because im sure that it will get 1st place and if your in ms.mills’s eagle time class you already know how to make a great movie.
The video was pretty funny.
Why was Adrian laughing, you could have gotten a better shot. I liked the expression and shots.
Johnny said, “Hello are you ready for schooll”.
I said, “Almost I just got to finish picking up my stuff.”
Always laugh after every line. Good writen script.
I liked the close – ups really much.But onsome of the scenes Adrian was laughing, saying his line.Also the camera was moving I liked that.
Sincerely,
Jazmine
It was good. But it was fanny and you can’t stop looking at the camer.
It was pretty funny when Adrian said ” I checked everywhere except my backpack, my binder, and my folder.”. But Adrian kept on laughing through his lines.
It`s a great movie. I didn`t get when you said,” I can`t find it. ” When you said you look in your backpack.
I don’t like that I smiling all the time.
You should put a black screen on the part where you said let’s go check in the liveing room
Adrian the movie is great but, why are you laughing in ezery scene?
During the scenes, Adrian was laughing through his lines, and everything else is fine.
Your movie was very great. But you need to work on your laughter.
Adrian,
i really like the movie and i think that you guys should submit that to the seva awaerds because im sure that it will get 1st place and if your in ms.mills’s eagle time class you already know how to make a great movie.
The video was pretty funny.
Why was Adrian laughing, you could have gotten a better shot. I liked the expression and shots.
Johnny said, “Hello are you ready for schooll”.
I said, “Almost I just got to finish picking up my stuff.”
“Okay” said johnny,
I said, “Johnny do you know where my homework is”
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