“Can I borrow your book?”asked Lucy.
Jazmine said “Okay, but only because I’m done reading it.”
Lucy replied,”Thanks!”
(The next day) “Do you have my book?”asked Jazmine.
“I left it at home,”replied Lucy.
Jazmine said,”Are you sure?”
“Of course I’m sure!”said Lucy.
“Then why did I find,”said Jazmine,”my book in the mud when I was walking to school?”
“Uh…hee hee, I I cccan explain,”studdered Lucy,”I dropped it on the way home and I didn’t pick it up.”
“Well…now you have to buy a new one,”said Jazmine.
“Okay…well… I’ll try,”said Lucy.
“You have time,”announced Jazmine,”just be sure to bring the money on Wednesday or I’ll be dead or you and I both will.”
Lucy agreed,” Oh I will,”
Why did Lucy keep going in front of the desk?
Your movie was so funny.
In your movie you and Lucy used great expression.But the actors were moving instead of the camera.
The camera was moving instead of the camera most of the time.But I have to add some parts.
Sincerely,
Jazmine
I liked when Sabrina studdered because she new she was lying.
You both did a really good job acting. I like how the shots were framing and how they changed. Perhaps a little slower pace would help the dialogue seem more conversational to viewers… just a thought.
Good job to all.