“What sup Greg.” I said
“Back to you.” Greg said
“Whats that noise?” I asked
grumble grumble.
” Why don’t you check it out.” Greg said
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Monster!”I yelled
“OHHHHHHHHH. It’s just you Greg.” I said
” Why are you eating my homework.” I asked
” Because I’m hungry.” Greg replied
“Johnny you owe me all you recess.” said Mr.Alfonso
“Thanks allot Greg!” I screamed
” Your welcome.” Greg replied
“AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” I screamed.
THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST MOVIE I HAVE EVER SEEN. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
but it didnt make sense
The first part went to fast because I could not hear it. Good noise in the background of one part.
Your movie was very interesting and funny, it caught peoples attention.But I noticed that some parts got cut off so the person that editted could work on it a little bit.
Sincerely,
Jazmine
This is funny I like .
It`s a GREAT movie. I give it an A+. It`s FUNNY! Don`t cut too fast.
This was problaly the funniest movie to me. But it was very quick.
That was funny when Johnny c. was yelling.
You screamed like you steped on a tak.Next time if you don’t look at the camera it will be better.
It was so hilarious when you made Greg say Your Welcome.But you could have cut it to where there was enough time in the begining.
This is probably the best movie I have seen today. It was very funny! I think it’s a little too fast, you could add a few more scenes of you losing your recess and makes a lot of sense.
your movie was so funny. I think it was the best one I seen so far!
Benjamin, don’t forget to capitalize your sentence sir!
Your movie was great. But both of you guys can work on a little more expression.
it was funny
Thanks Tommy I think it’s a funny movie too. I got the idea when my little sister actually did eat my homework.
It was funny when he said your welcome
Thanks Venus A I thought it would be funny to have Greg say something wacky.
i like that u had some funny parts and u guys used your emotion
good job
it was very funny when you yelled
i like how greg at homework.
good job
Thanks Tommy I think it’s a funny movie too. I got the idea when my little sister actually did eat my homework.
Sorry I mean Jenisha.
It was really funny.
I loved the last part when he screamed, i laughed really hard when i saw it. You did a great job on the script too!
The movie was really cool and fon to watch.
Thank you Victor for your comment. OH! you spelled fun wronge.
Johnny, you spelled wrong wrong… = Mr. A
It was really funny when you screamed.
I really like your quick-cut editing, even though I was not able to hear what was being said. It is a nice effect and very attention-getting.
I think i might need to reshot, but thanks for your comment.