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  1. I watching Qubo because it’s entertaining, good, and it happens all the the time. On Qubo it’s entertaining. Watching it is enjoyable because it tells you stories you know and don’t know. Also, watching it is good for you. It’s good for you because it will teach you lessons. Lastly, it happens all the time. The show happens from Sunday to Saturday all the time. I really love seeing 29.2 because it’s interesting, good for you, and it’s on all the time!

  2.      My favorite TV show is Littlest Pet Shop because they are cute,they are animals,and interesting.Littlest Pet Shop is my favorite show because they are cute!Usually,whenever I watch Littlest Pet Shop,they are so cute because of their eyes!Littlest Pet Shop is my best show ever because they have my favorite animals.
    Littlest Pet Shop has my favorite pets like puppies,cats,birds,and pandas!Littlest Pet Shop is interesting because the pets are talking and they have different pets like sweet pets,smart pets,and more!I love Littlest Pet Shop because it’s so cute,they are animals,and interesting.

  3. My favorite tv show is nba gametime for many reasons. One, of the best reasons is the player updates. In my house I watch, for the points, steals, and many other things to be updated. Another, good thing is hearing of the top players to this day.Eagerly, I wait for it to tell me about the top runners for mvp, and top contenders for the All star game. Lastly, it’s very exciting for these reasons. It’s very exciting because it shows the top ten plays of the week, and there is always alot of new people go on the show. As you can see my favorite tv show is Nba gametime.

  4. My favorite sport in the tv are cars,boxing and bicycles you get alot of fun .
    First,I love cars,I enjoy cars because you can make races around mountains. Next I watch boxing,I watch boxing because you see people fight at the events. Finally,I watch bicycles because you get races alot around the track. I like watch all those tv show because it’s alot of fun.

  5. My favorite tv show is sponebob because it is intersing and it also has my favorite song in there and some are poupuler from the 80s or the 90s.First it is funny because it makes you laugh and patrick is not smart so he does funny things and not so smart things like trying to speak spanish. Next it is interesting because sponebob and patrick try to things funny and they like to dress up like cowboys with a toy horse and it is funny.Next my favorite character is sponebob and patrick because they are funny and they make me laugh because they try to eat the krusty crab burgers. sponebob works at the kraty grab and mr. krab is the owner of the krusty krab. Finally this is my favorite tv show and why i like this tv show

    • Jeremy, I’d say good start. In order to fix it, you have to use two more examples of sentence variety. Make sure to capitalize names and that the spelling is correct. Sponebob should be SpongeBob. – Mr. A

  6.      I like cupcake war because the cupcakes are pretty,they like making it,last everyone enjoys it. The cupcakes look different. Baking is what they like to do. It can be soft, mushy,or hard.Likely people enjoy their cupcakes. In the kitchen the judges complemented you because you won and you made wonderful cupcakes. Also every taste is different. People like the cupcakes, the cupcakes look nice, finally the bakers enjoy making the cupcakes and your happy.

  7. My favorite TV show is Sam and Cat because it is funny, it is fun to watch, and it is a show for kids. The show Sam and Cat is funny. In Sam and Cat, Sam had a rotten taco in her closet she had bought from a restaruant a few months ago. Sam and Cat is fun to watch. Happily, I get to watch it with my sister.My favorite show is for kids.It is for kids because it is on a kids channel, Nick! Sam and Cat is my favorite show because it is appropriate for children to watch, hilariose, and I enjoy watching it.

  8. I watching Qubo because it’s entertaining, good, and it happens all the the time. On Qubo it’s entertaining. Watching it is enjoyable because it tells you stories you know and don’t know. Also, watching it is good for you. It’s good for you because it will teach you lessons. On 29.2 it happens all the time. The show happens from Sunday to Saturday all night lot. I really love seeing 29.2 because it’s interesting, good for you, and on all the time!

  9. My favorite tv show is regular show it is awsome becuase sometimes it’s funny they stop villons they have clean the mess up the bad guys does in the end it’s funny sometimes. not becuase there boss tell theme clean the mess up or your fired i like the cartoon becuase it’s awsome.

  10.  My favorite tv show is nba gametime for many reasons. One, of the best reasons is the player updates. In my house I watch, for the points, steals, and many other things to be updated. Another, good thing is hearing of the top players to this day.Eagerly, I wait for it to tell me about the top runners for mvp, and top contenders for the All star game.Interesting a player that was not in the All star game last year is in this year. Lastly, it’s very exciting for these reasons. It’s very exciting because it shows the top ten plays of the week, and there is always alot of new people go on the show. As you can see my favorite tv show is Nba gametime.

  11. My favorite t.v. show Sally bowlly wood . it is a detective . She searches for clues . She has a partner too . They solve mystery ‘s together . they solve mystery ‘ s about the mising necklace from the museume . sally bowlly wood is funny , and that’s why it’s my favorite show .

  12. My favorite tv show is Icarly, Victorious, and Gravity falls because
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  13. TMNT is my favorite show because of the charecters, places, and the dialog. One reason why TMNT is my favorite television show is because of the charecters in there. The main charecters in the show are Leo, Raph, Donnie, and mike. Another reason why TMNT is my favorite show is because of where it takes place and where they live at. The turtles live in a sewer with their master splinter in the state of New York. Lastly, Teenage mutain ninja Turtles INCOMPLETE

  14. Star wars is my favorite TV show because it has Jedi knights, lightsabers and spacial clothing. First, star wars has Jedi knights. Jedi knights are defenders of peace. Second of all, Jedi knight use spacial

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  15.     I enjoy teen wolf because I like the character’s,the wolfs,and my family and I like watching it. First, Appsolutely I like the character’s. The character’s are cool and amazing. Next,The amazing part is hes a wolf. He also turns into a wolf when he fight’s. Finally,I watch it at home with my family. My family and I laugh because sometimes it’s funny. I like the TV show because I love the people ,they also turn into dogs,and I could hang out with my loved ones.

  16. My favrite tv show is shake it up because there are two girls that are funny,nice,and good dancers.First, shake it up is my favrite show because there are two girls that are funny.They are funny because somtimes they bump into each other on perpose when there dancing.Next, I think they are the best dancers in chicogo. They are good dancers because they make there own moves. I think their are nice becuase they help people . Like giving advice . Lastly tis is why shake it

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  17.      I enjoy watching Girl meets world because i like seeing the actors clothes, what lesson is it going to teach you, and how good they act. First, watching Girl meets world INCOMPLETE

  18. Star wars is my favorite TV show because it has Jedi knights, lightsabers and spacial clothing. First, star wars has Jedi knights. Jedi Star wars is my favorite TV show because it has Jedi knights, lightsabers and spacial clothing. First, star wars has Jedi knights. Jedi knights are defenders of peace. Second of all, Jedi knight use spacial
    clothing. Some spacial

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  19.     Star wars is my favorite TV show because it has Jedi knights, lightsabers and spacial clothing. First, star wars has Jedi knights. Jedi knights are defenders of peace. Second of all, Jedi knight use spacial weapons called lightsabers. Lightsabers are made of projected light and crystals to make sharpened blade. Thirdly, They wear spacial clothing. Some spacial clothing they wear is fine silk robes, nice fur boots, a cotton cape and a weapon holder. my favorite show is Star Wars because there are knight, weapons, and fancy clothing.

  20.      My favorite tv show is nba gametime for many reasons. One, of the best reasons is the player updates. In my house I watch, for the points, steals, and many other things to be updated. Another, good thing is hearing of the top players to this day.Eagerly, I wait for it to tell me about the top runners for mvp, and top contenders for the All star game. Lastly, it’s very exciting for these reasons. It’s very exciting because it shows the top ten plays of the week, and there is always alot of new people go on the show. As you can see my favorite tv show is Nba gametime.

  21.      My favorite tv show is nba gametime for many reasons. One, of the best reasons is the player updates. In my house I watch, for the points, steals, and many other things to be updated. Another, good thing is hearing of the top players to this day.Eagerly, I wait for it to tell me about the top runners for mvp, and top contenders for the All star game. Lastly, it’s very exciting for these reasons. It’s very exciting because it shows the top ten plays of the week, and there is always alot of new people go on the show. As you can see my favorite tv show is Nba gametime.

  22.     TMNT is my favorite show because of the charecters, places, and the dialog. One reason why TMNT is my favorite television show is because of the charecters in there. The main charecters in the show are Leo, Raph, Donnie, and mike. Another reason why TMNT is my favorite show is because of where it takes place and where they live at. The turtles live in a sewer with their master splinter in the state of NewYork. Lastly, Teenage mutain ninja Turtles is my favorite show is because of theway they speak. One example dialog they use is when they see the footclan and Shredder. Due to these facts TMNT is my favorite show than any others!

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