This is the first time we are using a new graphic organizer that focuses on CAUSE and EFFECT to summarize our selection. Podcast, graphic organizers will be posted soon.
This is the first time we are using a new graphic organizer that focuses on CAUSE and EFFECT to summarize our selection. Podcast, graphic organizers will be posted soon.
I would start a new paragraph at “In the beginning of the story…” and it seems like you don’t have a concluding paragraph that talks about how the problem was resolved, how the characters changed, and how it relates to Unit Five: Going West. Looks great so far!
Oh yeah, I forgot to add the conclusion on accident.
Add it! : )
Thank you for indenting your paragraphs. Please watch your spelling when you complete this entry: Wonf and fids. Also, does Uncle really leave with the Fox? I’d double check that. Good work so far. Looking forward to you finishing!
“The journal of Wong Ming-Chung talks about a place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep steeling their gold and force the company to build levees instead.”
In the bigging of he story, Uncle is feeling sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. So Uncle left Wong Ming – Chung and the company. Fox said go with Uncle, Wong Ming- Chung tried to go with Uncle. So Uncle says no, he says hurtful things. Wong Ming- Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Go after Uncle anyway. Uncle says to Wong Ming- Chung that he didn’t mean what he said. Wong Mong- Chung forgave Uncle. The decided to look for gold in the morning. Wong Ming- Chung found gold in their abandon claim.
So in the morning they start to buid rockers. So later on they found gold. So in the middle of the story. When they went to get supplies the Americans laughed.
At the end of the story they went to the bank so they could bank there gold. They sent some money back to China people said Uncle’s luck is big as a mountain.
Hi Dillon,
Good beginning. But the third and concluding paragraphs are lacking. A lot happened after they bought supplies. You have to add more detail sir. Also, e conclude paragraph requires you to talk about how the problem was resolved. Before you talk about Uncle being lucky, you have to talk about Uncle’s luck in the beginning. Was there a change for Wong Ming-Chung also? You can copy and repost. Make sure you write your paragraphs out before you blog.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story,Uncle doesn’t want to build levees and instead want to find gold. Uncle left the company to find gold. Fox tells Wong Ming-Chung to go with Uncle. Uncle says “No!” and says hurtful things to him. Now Wong Ming-Chung is sad and cries. Wong Ming-Chung decides to help Uncle anyways. When Wong Ming-Chung finds Uncle,Uncle apoligizes and told him he didn’t mean to say hurtful things to him. Now,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung is happy,looking for gold next day. Later on,they went into a shack to sleep. That night,Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare about a mob chasing. That causes him to wake up,he finds gold on the floor. Next day they are looking for gold.
Today,they built a rocker,shook it no gold,a light,then there was gold. Next day, they went to town to buy supplies. They registered their claim. The Americans laughed at them and told them there are no gold. Today, they are banking their gold. Before Once they banked their gold, they will send it the money to China. Relatives must think Uncle has good luck now.
&bsp;&bsp;In the beginning of the story, Chung wasn’t rich, now Chung is rich, and Uncle was known for bad luck, and now he isn’t, those were the changes that happend in the story.
”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joined his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, in seach for gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their glod and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, Uncle is upset because he thinks building levees is a waste of time. He ends up leaving the company. With harsh words he also leaves behind his nephew Wong Ming-Chung. Despite the words he had heard his uncle say to him, Wong felt he was family and he needed to help him. when they were reunited again, Uncle said sorry, he didn’t mean what he had said. That night Wong had a nightmare and woke up to notice specks of light surrounding him in the shed. He thought he found gold. When he told Uncle his theory, they both agreed on looking for gold in the morning. As soon as they woke up, Uncle built a rocker and they began to shake it in the river’s water. To their suprise they had stuck it rich.
After this finding, they registered their claim and buy some supplies. The decided to clean up camp and move to a new claim. They moved from claim to claim prospecting but only two had gold. When they had finishd, they went to Sacremento with a muddy basket and raggety clothes to protect their gold. Keeping their amount a secret to the clerk, they weighed their gold and recorded the resaults. Wong Ming-Chung wrote in his journal wishing to hear his family when the money they were going to send arrives in China.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found tiny gold flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning, Uncle’s luck changedfrom bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but became rich at the end of the story. I learned to keep trying because hard work leads to great success.
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In the begining, Uncle felt meloncolly because they are prospecting gold. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung were sent to build levees. But instead they panned for gold.
Later on in the story, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds gold in the dirt he is laying in. He was so excided! When he told Uncle he could hardly believe it because there was none there when they came. Meanwhile, they took the gold to Sacramento to bank it. But when they talked to the clark he was very suspicious. Other claims, people laughed at them because they didn’t believe them. But at least they got to send something home. At the end of the story Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle thought using the money for buying something like a land would be a great idea.
Mr. Alfonso my paragraphs got squished together when I submitted them. I have know idea what happened!
Aijanae says:
February 4, 2011 at 12:18 pm
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung takes place in the mountains and riverside of California, Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold, groups of robbers are stealing their gold and force them to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, Uncle is depressed that they are not prospecting for gold. Uncle leaves Wonf Ming-Chung with the Fox.When Wong Ming-Chung tries to follow Uncle, he says hurtful things, because he thought he would be safer with the Fox. Wong Ming-Chung follows him anyway. When Wong Ming-Chung finds Uncle, he appologizes to him. They are happy and find went to find gold the next morning. Wong Ming-Chung wakes from a nightmare.
In the midle of the story, Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung built a rocker. When they piled the rocker with dirt and poured water in it, they found bits of gold on the sides of the rocker. When they went to buy supplies the Americans laughed and thought they were crazy so they just smiled a little.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chong found gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning Uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain”. At first Wong Ming-Chong was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up heps you achieve your dreams.
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”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung”takes place in the moutains and riversides of california. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck,to find gold. Groups of robbers kept stealing thir gold and forced the company to build levees instead.
In the begining of the story,Uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company. Fox said go with Uncle, Wong Ming-Chung tried to go, but uncle says no and hurtful things and Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with the fox. Wong Ming-Chung goes after uncle anyway. When Wong Ming-Chung catches up to Uncle he apalogises and says he didn’t mean what he said. Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle slept in an abandond claim. That evening, Wong Ming-Chung found specks of gold.
Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle found out a new way of looking for gold. There methoud of mining for gold is worth more than the gold itself,they only stoped at abandond claims were there was likely to be gold at one time.
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“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and river sides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levee instead of prospecting for gold.
In the beggining uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting for gold . Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to look for gold. The Fox said go with uncle and Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with uncle. Uncle says “No” and he also says some hurtful things to Wong Ming-Chung. Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Wong Ming-Chung would go after uncle anyway. When he met uncle, uncle apoligizes to Wong Ming-Chung and he also said that he didn’t mean what he had said. Wong Ming-Chung is happy. They are going to sleep and in the morning they are going to look for gold.
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“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riverside of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, uncle is sad that they have not been prospecting for gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to go and prospect.
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“The journal of wong mung chung” takes place in the moutains and riverside of california waong ming chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Goup of robbers keep stiling there gold and force the company, to build levees instead . Uncle is sad they are not prospecting for gold. Uncle left wong and the company. Fox tells wong ming chung to go with uncle , but uncle did not won’t wong to go with him. Wong stood with the fox. That night wong didn’t want uncle to die in the moutains.
Soon wong ming found uncle sitting on a rock. Uncle says sorry for saying those things. Wong was happy and went to sleep also had a nightmare. That cause him to wake up,wong saw something reflecting off the ground it was gold flakes. The next morning uncle buildt a rocker. They had no luck but when wong saw gold clinging off. Uncle told wong to clean out the cabin.
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&nbdsp; ”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story,Uncle doesn’t want to build levees and instead want to find gold. Uncle left the company to find gold. Fox tells Wong Ming-Chung to go with Uncle. Uncle says “No!” and says hurtful things to him. Now Wong Ming-Chung is sad and cries. Wong Ming-Chung decides to help Uncle anyways. When Wong Ming-Chung finds Uncle,Uncle apoligizes and told him he didn’t mean to say hurtful things to him. Now,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung is happy,looking for gold next day. Later on,they went into a shack to sleep. That night,Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare about a mob chasing. That causes him to wake up,he finds gold on the floor. Next day they are looking for gold.
Today,they built a rocker,shook it no gold,a light,then there was gold. Next day, they went to town to buy supplies. They registered their claim. The Americans laughed at them and told them there are no gold. Today, they are banking their gold. Before Once they banked their gold, they will send it the money to China. Relatives must think Uncle has good luck now.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny as flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning Uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you to achieve your dreams.
Cathy i liked the paragraph you did great on it.There really isn’t any thing to fix.
“The journal of wong mung chung” takes place in the moutains and riverside of california waong ming chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Goup of robbers keep stiling there gold and force the company, to build levees instead . Uncle is sad they are not prospecting for gold. Uncle left wong and the company. Fox tells wong ming chung to go with uncle , but uncle did not won’t wong to go with him. Wong stood with the fox. That night wong didn’t want uncle to die in the moutains.
Soon wong ming found uncle sitting on a rock. Uncle says sorry for saying those things. Wong was happy and went to sleep also had a nightmare. That cause him to wake up,wong saw something reflecting off the ground it was gold flakes. The next morning uncle buildt a rocker. They had no luck but when wong saw gold clinging off. Uncle told wong to clean out the cabin
Afterward they checked 10 more abandon claims, but only two paid off. Uncle and wong where on there way to sacramento to cash in there gold theyput in a basket covered it in mud to run down as them. Banker was cashing in there gold and the banker asked questions but all they did was smile and nod.
They got send gold back to china. Uncle changed he had bad luck and now has good luck. Wong also changed to he was poor now he is rich.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riverside of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, uncle is sad that they have not been prospecting for gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to go and prospect. The Fox said to go with uncle. Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with uncle, but uncle said No. Then, he kept saying hurtful things to him. Wong Ming-Chumg was crying and decided to stay with the Fox. He thinks about uncle’s bad luck and decides to go out and look for him. Uncle told Wong Ming-Chung that he didn’t mean what he had said. He just wanted him to be safe. In the meantime, Wong ming-Chung got very happy. Uncle told him that they would go and look for gold the next morning. Some time later, they went to sleep, Wong Ming-Chung has a nightmare about the mabs and wakes up. He discovers that there are gold flakes all around them, he wakes up uncle and tells him everything.
The following day, they started to build a rocker. They found the gold in the walls and floors. Later on, uncle and Wong Ming-Chung go to the store.
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”The Journal of Wong Ming -Chung “takes place in San Fransisco. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who was sent to America to help his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, find gold. Bullies keep steeling their gold and chasing them of their claims. After that they were forced to build levees instead.
Uncle was very unhappy that they weren’t prospecting for gold,so he left Wong Ming-Chung and the fox to look for gold. After that Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with Uncle but uncle refused to let him go with him. Just that moment, Uncle started saying hurtful things. Wong Ming-Chung started to cry because of those hurtful things that uncle said. Instead he stayed with the Fox. Later that night he left to go with uncle. Uncle actually apologizes for the things he says and they went to bed.
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I think it’s because it’s the & + nbsp; and not &bsnp; Ashley. You’re letters are a bit mixed up.
In the begining, Uncle felt meloncolly because they are prospecting gold. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung were sent to build levees. But instead they panned for gold.
Later on in the story, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds gold in the dirt he is laying in. He was so excided! When he told Uncle he could hardly believe it because there was none there when they came. Meanwhile, they took the gold to Sacramento to bank it. But when they talked to the clark he was very suspicious. Other claims, people laughed at them because they didn’t believe them. But at least they got to send something home. At the end of the story Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle thought using the money for buying something like a land would be a great idea. No one knows if they used it for a land or not.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and river sides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levee instead of prospecting for gold.
In the beggining uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting for gold . Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to look for gold. The Fox said go with uncle and Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with uncle. Uncle says “No” and he also says some hurtful things to Wong Ming-Chung. Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Wong Ming-Chung would go after uncle anyway. When he met uncle, uncle apoligizes to Wong Ming-Chung and he also said that he didn’t mean what he had said. Wong Ming-Chung is happy. They are going to sleep and in the morning they are going to look for gold. When they went to sleep Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare and he discovers gold.
In the middle of the story, Womng Ming-Chung wakes up from a nightmare and finds gold. In the morning,uncle built a rocker. Now they found gold which makes them happy. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung are going to put the gold in the bank. The Americans laughed and thought they were just crazy chinese people because it was already searched and gold was found already. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung are going to Sacramento to deposit their gold. While waiting for deposit, they think of some things to do when deposit all the money.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning, uncle’s luck change from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you to achieve your dreams.
”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story,Uncle doesn’t want to build levees and instead want to find gold. Uncle left the company to find gold. Fox tells Wong Ming-Chung to go with Uncle. Uncle says “No!” and says hurtful things to him. Now Wong Ming-Chung is sad and cries. Wong Ming-Chung decides to help Uncle anyways. When Wong Ming-Chung finds Uncle,Uncle apoligizes and told him he didn’t mean to say hurtful things to him. Now,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung is happy,looking for gold next day. Later on,they went into a shack to sleep. That night,Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare about a mob chasing. That causes him to wake up,he finds gold on the floor. Next day they are looking for gold.
Today,they built a rocker,shook it no gold,a light,then there was gold. Next day, they went to town to buy supplies. They registered their claim. The Americans laughed at them and told them there are no gold. Today, they are banking their gold. Before Once they banked their gold, they will send it the money to China. Relatives must think Uncle has good luck now.
In conclusion,Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny as flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning Uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you to achieve your dreams.
h “The journal of wong mung chung” takes place in the moutains and riverside of california waong ming chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Goup of robbers keep stiling there gold and force the company, to build levees instead . Uncle is sad they are not prospecting for gold. Uncle left wong and the company. Fox tells wong ming chung to go with uncle , but uncle did not won’t wong to go with him. Wong stood with the fox. That night wong didn’t want uncle to die in the moutains.
Soon wong ming found uncle sitting on a rock. Uncle says sorry for saying those things. Wong was happy and went to sleep also had a nightmare. That cause him to wake up,wong saw something reflecting off the ground it was gold flakes. The next morning uncle buildt a rocker. They had no luck but when wong saw gold clinging off. Uncle told wong to clean out the cabin
Afterward they checked 10 more abandon claims, but only two paid off. Uncle and wong where on there way to sacramento to cash in there gold theyput in a basket covered it in mud to run down as them. Banker was cashing in there gold and the banker asked questions but all they did was smile and nod.
In conclusion, wong ming chung found tiny flakes in abadon claims until they struck it rich. In the begining uncles luck had changed from bad luck to good luck”as big as a mountain”. At first wong ming chung was poor but at the end of the story he became rich. I learned that working hard and never give up help you to achieve your dream
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and river sides of California.Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle,a dreamer of bad luck,to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and company,to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, uncle was sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. Then,uncle left his nephew, Wong Ming-Chung and the company to look for gold. The fox told Wong Ming-Chung to follow his uncle. But instead,uncle said no and said some hurtful words.Wong Ming-Chung got his feelings hurt and started to cry. Afterward,he felt that uncle was family so he went after uncle anyways. As soon as Wong Ming-Chung catches up with his uncle,uncle apologizes to him and told Wong Ming-Chung he didn’t really mean what he had said to him.
After that,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung sleeping a claim. Some time later, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds specks of gold on the floor by the fireplace. Just then, Wong Ming-Chung has a method for finding gold. They built a rocker and it took half a day to find gold. The method of finding gold is worth more than itself. Soon, uncle and Wong Ming-Chung go to and abandoned claim to search for gold.
After they have done that, they went to buy some supplies with gold. Whenever uncle files a new claim, Americans laughed at them because they don’t think they’re that rich. By the time they reach Sacramento, they went straight to the bank. Later on, they were planning on sending some money back to China.
In conclusion, Wong Mung-Chung found specks of gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the begging, uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to “luck as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but at end of the story he had became rich. I learned that working hard and never giving up, helps you to achieve your dreams.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and river sides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levee instead of prospecting for gold.
In the beggining uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting for gold . Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to look for gold. The Fox said go with uncle and Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with uncle. Uncle says “No” and he also says some hurtful things to Wong Ming-Chung. Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Wong Ming-Chung would go after uncle anyway. When he met uncle, uncle apoligizes to Wong Ming-Chung and he also said that he didn’t mean what he had said. Wong Ming-Chung is happy. They are going to sleep and in the morning they are going to look for gold. When they went to sleep Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare and he discovers gold.
In the middle of the story, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up from a nightmare and finds gold. In the morning,uncle built a rocker. Now they found gold which makes them happy. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung are going to put the gold in the bank. The Americans laughed and thought they were just crazy chinese people because it was already searched and gold was found already. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung are going to Sacramento to deposit their gold. While waiting for deposit, they think of some things to do when deposit all the money.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning, uncle’s luck change from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you to achieve your dreams.
In the begining, Uncle felt meloncolly because they are prospecting gold. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung were sent to build levees. But instead they panned for gold.
Later on in the story, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds gold in the dirt he is laying in. He was so excided! When he told Uncle he could hardly believe it because there was none there when they came. Meanwhile, they took the gold to Sacramento to bank it. But when they talked to the clark he was very suspisious. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung were asked if they made a fortune they said as little as posible. Other claims people laughed at them because they didn’t believe them. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung still got to send somthing home.
At the end of the story Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle thought using the gold for buying a land would be a great idea. By the end of the story Uncle has luck as big as a mountain but he didn’t at the begining.
”The Journal of Wong Ming -Chung“ takes place in San Fransisco. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who was sent to America to help his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, find gold. Bullies keep steeling their gold and chasing them of their claims. After that they were forced to build levees instead.
Uncle was very unhappy that they weren’t prospecting for gold,so he left Wong Ming-Chung and the fox to look for gold. After that Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with Uncle but uncle refused to let him go with him. Just that moment, Uncle started saying hurtful things. Wong Ming-Chung started to cry because of those hurtful things that uncle said. Instead he stayed with the Fox. Later that night he left to go with uncle. Uncle actually apologizes for the things he says and they went to bed.
The next day when Wong Ming-Chung woke up they found out were sleeping on gold dust. They went outside to build a rocker to find gold in the sand. After that they found gold not nuggets but a least it’s gold. Once they were done for the day they went to another claim, and they found gold. They kept going from claim to claim. They found a pouch full of gold. Every time they were done with an abandoned claim they would broom it to look how it looked before they came. On the way to the bank in Sacramento, they bought a basket to store the gold. Uncle was banking so much gld they were going to send some money to China.
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”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung”takes place in the moutains and riversides of california. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck,to find gold. Groups of robbers kept stealing thir gold and forced the company to build levees instead.
In the begining of the story,Uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company. Fox said go with Uncle, Wong Ming-Chung tried to go, but uncle says no and hurtful things and Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with the fox. Wong Ming-Chung goes after uncle anyway. When Wong Ming-Chung catches up to Uncle he apalogises and says he didn’t mean what he said. Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle slept in an abandond claim. That evening, Wong Ming-Chung found specks of gold.
Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle found out a new way of looking for gold. There methoud of mining for gold is worth more than the gold itself,they only stoped at abandond claims were there was likely to be gold at one time. They stoped at 10 abandond claims so far, but only 2 have paid off. Then they go to sacermento to bank the gold. After they bank the gold, they will send some to China.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny as specks in abandonded claims until they stuck it rich. Uncle’s luck was bad in the begining, but in the end he had luck “as big as a mountain.”
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“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and river sides of California.Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle,a dreamer of bad luck,to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and company,to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, uncle was sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. Then,uncle left his nephew, Wong Ming-Chung and the company to look for gold. The fox told Wong Ming-Chung to follow his uncle. But instead,uncle said no and said some hurtful words.Wong Ming-Chung got his feelings hurt and started to cry. Afterward,he felt that uncle was family so he went after uncle anyways. As soon as Wong Ming-Chung catches up with his uncle,uncle apologizes to him and told Wong Ming-Chung he didn’t really mean what he had said to him.
After that,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung sleeping a claim. Some time later, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds specks of gold on the floor by the fireplace. Just then, Wong Ming-Chung has a method for finding gold. They built a rocker and it took half a day to find gold. The method of finding gold is worth more than itself. Soon, uncle and Wong Ming-Chung go to and abandoned claim to search for gold.
After they have done that, they went to buy some supplies with gold. Whenever uncle files a new claim, Americans laughed at them because they don’t think they’re that rich. By the time they reach Sacramento, they went straight to the bank. Later on, they were planning on sending some money back to China.
In conclusion, Wong Mung-Chung found specks of gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning, uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to “luck as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but at end of the story he had became rich. I learned that working hard and never giving up, helps you to achieve your dreams.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riverside of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story, uncle is sad that they have not been prospecting for gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company to go and prospect. The Fox said to go with uncle. Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with uncle, but uncle said No. Then, he kept saying hurtful things to him. Wong Ming-Chumg was crying and decided to stay with the Fox. He thinks about uncle’s bad luck and decides to go out and look for him. Uncle told Wong Ming-Chung that he didn’t mean what he had said. He just wanted him to be safe. In the meantime, Wong ming-Chung got very happy. Uncle told him that they would go and look for gold the next morning. Some time later, they went to sleep, Wong Ming-Chung has a nightmare about the mabs and wakes up. He discovers that there are gold flakes all around them, he wakes up uncle and tells him everything.
The following day, they started to build a rocker. They found the gold in the walls and floors. Later on, uncle and Wong Ming-Chung go to the store. Wong Ming-Chung asks uncle to buy a chamber pot to disguise their gold from bullies and mobs. The both of them spent time to clean and smoothen the ground so no one would find where they found their gold. Ever since they found gold in other abandoned claims, they went to more abandoned 10 claims to try and findmore gold. They have tried 10 more claims but only two of them have paid off. One of them had the most richest. Sometime later, uncle and Wong Ming-Chung want to buy a store. After they open up a store they are going to bring some cousins from China.
Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung are riding in a wagon with other passengers to Sacramento. They had a great idea to make their basket, full of gold, muddy so nobody tries to steal it.
In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny as flakes in abandoned claims until they struck it rich. In the beginning, uncle’s luck changed from bad luck to luck “as big as a mountain.” At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but he became rich at the end of the story. I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you to achieve your dreams.
In the begining, Uncle felt meloncolly because they are prospecting gold. Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung were sent to build levees. But instead they panned for gold.
Later on in the story, Wong Ming-Chung wakes up and finds gold in the dirt he is laying in. He was so excided! When he told Uncle he could hardly believe it because there was none there when they came. Meanwhile, they took the gold to Sacramento to bank it. But when they talked to the clark he was very suspicious. Other claims, people laughed at them because they didn’t believe them. But at least they got to send something home. At the end of the story Wong Ming-Chung and Uncle thought using the money for buying something like a land would be a great idea. By the end of the story Uncle has luck as big as a mountain.
The journal of Wong Ming-Chung talks about a place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep steeling their gold and force the company to build levees instead.”
In the bigging of he story, Uncle is feeling sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. So Uncle left Wong Ming – Chung and the company. Fox said go with Uncle, Wong Ming- Chung tried to go with Uncle. So Uncle says no, he says hurtful things. Wong Ming- Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Go after Uncle anyway. Uncle says to Wong Ming- Chung that he didn’t mean what he said. Wong Mong- Chung forgave Uncle. The decided to look for gold in the morning. Wong Ming- Chung found gold in their abandon claim.
In the middle of the story, Uncle and Wong Ming- Chung build a rocker. When they piled dirt in the rocker and poured water in it they found bits of gold in corners, when they went to get supplies the Americans thought they were crazy and they just smiled a little.
At the end of the story they went to the bank so they could bank there gold. They sent some money back to China people said Uncle’s luck is big as a mountain.
The journal of Wong Ming-Chung talks about a place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle, a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep steeling their gold and force the company to build levees instead.”
In the bigging of he story, Uncle is feeling sad that they’re not prospecting for gold. So Uncle left Wong Ming – Chung and the company. Fox said go with Uncle, Wong Ming- Chung tried to go with Uncle. So Uncle says no, he says hurtful things. Wong Ming- Chung cries and stays with the Fox. Go after Uncle anyway. Uncle says to Wong Ming- Chung that he didn’t mean what he said. Wong Mong- Chung forgave Uncle. The decided to look for gold in the morning. Wong Ming- Chung found gold in their abandon claim.
In the middle of the story, Uncle and Wong Ming- Chung build a rocker. When they piled dirt in the rocker and poured water in it they found bits of gold in corners, when they went to get supplies the Americans thought they were crazy and they just smiled a little.
At the end of the story they went to the bank so they could bank there gold. They sent some money back to China people said Uncle’s luck is big as a mountain
The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung tells of a boy that has been mineing in the riversides and mountains he has found flakes of gold in abandoned claims. His uncle has tried to strike it rich and get gold.Wong Ming -Chung started poor in the beginning but became rich in the end.
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The Journal To Wong Ming-Chung”takes place in the mountains and riversides of california.Wong Ming-Chung is about a boy who joins his uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold.Mobs of robbers keep taking the gold,forcing the company to build levees instead. Uncle is sad that their not prospecting for gold. He then left Wong Ming-Chung and went to prospect for gold. INCOMPLETE
”The journal of Wong Ming-chung” place in the moutains and riversides of Californa. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins,his uncle a dreamer who has bad luck to find gold.groups of robbers kept steeling their gold and force the company to build leeves.
In the middle of the story uncle was sad that they weren’t prospecting for gold,so uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company. Fox said that Wong Ming-chung should follow uncle. Uncle said no to Wong Ming-Chung,then said hurt ful things.Wong Ming-Chung starts to cry and stays with Fox,but Wong Ming-Ching gos anyway. Uncle says sorry to Wong Ming chung ang says he only wanted to keep him safe.they decided to look for gold tomorrow,so they went to sleep. Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare and when he woke up he saw gold dust scatterd on the floor.
When Wong Ming-Chung found the gold he woke up his uncle,so in the morning uncle decides to build a rocker. when they were using the rocker they found gold flakes in the river. Now that Wong Ming-Chung and, his uncle were rich they went to town to buy mineing supplies.they were able to find more gold with the supplies.they traveled to california and was able to find gold.
In the begging of the story he had bad luck,at the end of the story he had good luck and he was rich.
”The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who joins his Uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold. Groups of robbers keep stealing their gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story,Uncle doesn’t want to build levees and instead want to find gold. Uncle left the company to find gold. Fox tells Wong Ming-Chung to go with Uncle. Uncle says “No!” and says hurtful things to him. Now Wong Ming-Chung is sad and cries. Wong Ming-Chung decides to help Uncle anyways. When Wong Ming-Chung finds Uncle,Uncle apoligizes and told him he didn’t mean to say hurtful things to him. Now,Uncle and Wong Ming-Chung is happy,looking for gold next day. Later on,they went into a shack to sleep. That night,Wong Ming-Chung had a nightmare about a mob chasing. That causes him to wake up,he finds gold on the floor. Next day they are looking for gold.
Today,they built a rocker,shook it no gold,a light,then there was gold. Next day, they went to town to buy supplies. They registered their claim. The Americans laughed at them and told them there are no gold. Today, they are banking their gold. Before Once they banked their gold, they will send it the money to China. Relatives must think Uncle has good luck now.
&bsp;&bsp;In the beginning of the story, Chung wasn’t rich, now Chung is rich, and Uncle was known for bad luck, and now he isn’t, those were the changes that happend in the story.
”The Journal of Wong Ming -Chung“ takes place in San Fransisco. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy who was sent to America to help his uncle, a dreamer with bad luck, find gold. Bullies keep steeling their gold and chasing them of their claims. After that they were forced to build levees instead.
Uncle was very unhappy that they weren’t prospecting for gold,so he left Wong Ming-Chung and the fox to look for gold. After that Wong Ming-Chung tried to go with Uncle but uncle refused to let him go with him. Just that moment, Uncle started saying hurtful things. Wong Ming-Chung started to cry because of those hurtful things that uncle said. Instead he stayed with the Fox. Later that night he left to go with uncle. Uncle actually apologizes for the things he says and they went to bed.
The next day when Wong Ming-Chung woke up they found out were sleeping on gold dust. They went outside to build a rocker to find gold in the sand. After that they found gold not nuggets but a least it’s gold. Once they were done for the day they went to another claim, and they found gold. They kept going from claim to claim. They found a pouch full of gold. Every time they were done with an abandoned claim they would broom it to look how it looked before they came. On the way to the bank in Sacramento, they bought a basket to store the gold. Uncle was banking so much gld they were going to send some money to China.
In conclusion, they found gold in abanded claims until they struck it rich! In the begining Uncle had bad luck, but now he has luck the size of a mountain. Also Wong Ming-Chung used to be poor but now he is rich. I learned to never give up and you will achive your goal.
The Journal To Wong Ming-Chung”takes place in the mountains and riversides of california.Wong Ming-Chung is about a boy who joins his uncle,a dreamer with bad luck to find gold.Mobs of robbers keep taking the gold,forcing the company to build levees instead. Uncle is sad that their not prospecting for gold. He then left Wong Ming-Chung and went to prospect for gold.Fox told Wong Ming-Chung to go with uncle,but uncle says no and other hurtful things.After that,Wong Ming-Chung cries and stays with fox.But he goes after him anyway. He finds uncle and uncle apolizes for what hey said.Wong Ming-Chung has a nightmare so he wakes up and found gold by where their sleeping.Uncle builds a rocker and then found some gold clinging to the rocker They went to go buy some tools and registered there claim,the americans laughed thinking there was no gold their.There rich now,it took one ane a hslf days to get a small pouch of gold from the abandoned claim.They took all their gold to sacramento to get it weighed and recorded. In conclusion, Wong Ming-Chung found gold as tiny flakes in abandoned claims until thhey struck it rich.In the beginning uncles luck changed from horrible luck to “luck as big as a mountain”.At first Wong Ming-Chung was poor but became rich at the end of the story.I learned that working hard and never giving up helps you acheive your
dream.
“The Journal of Wong Ming-Chung” takes place in the mountains and riversides of California. Wong Ming-Chung is a boy that joins his Uncle, a dreamer with bad luck,to find gold. Groups of robbers keep steeling thier gold and force the company to build levees instead.
In the beginning of the story Uncle is sad that they’re not prospecting gold. Uncle left Wong Ming-Chung and the company. Fox told Wong Ming-Chung to go with Uncle, Uncle said NO and says hurt ful things to Wong Ming-Chung. Wong Ming- Cung INCOMPLETE