Their assignment was to summarize the last section of “Buffalo Hunt” from our Open Court Book.
Podcast recorded Monday, January 31, 2011.
Their assignment was to summarize the last section of “Buffalo Hunt” from our Open Court Book.
Podcast recorded Monday, January 31, 2011.
The selection “With the Buffalo Gone” from the story “Buffalo Hunt” explains why there are not that many buffalos living in the plains.There are four reasons why the buffalos are being vanished.White traders traded with the Indians for tongues and hides,and Indians got tools,guns,tabacco,whiskey,and trinkets.Another reason is white hunters were killing more buffalos than Indians because they needed food.Also,the U.S. army were sent to hunt buffalos for their meat.Buffalo hunting became a sport to hunters.In conclusion,this selection tells why the buffalos are disappearing.
You need to read smoother.
Buffalo Disappearing
“With The Buffalo Gone” from “Bufalo Hunt” explains how most of the buffalos are disapearing. There are four reasons how the buffalo’s population grew less. The buffalo are vanishing because non-Indians traded goods that Indians wanted,and in exchange gave non-Indians buffalo hides and tongues. Pioneers,army and contrustion crew killed buffalo for food. Buffalo hunting became a popular sport,killed buffalo for fun. A tanning process made buffalo hide into expensive leather. In conclusion,this story is about how the buffalo disappeard.
Cathy, you were reading smoothly and clearly. You were also reading to fast.
The selection “With the Buffalo Gone” explains how all the buffalos disapper. These are 4 of the resons buffalo disapper. White traders wanted buffalo tonuges and hides so they traded with the indians. white hunters began killing more buffalo than the indians.U.S.A. hunters killed buffalo for food. White people used hides for leather. In conclusion this pragraph is about how buffalo diappered.
In this selection “With the Buffalo Gone” explains why the buffalo are disappearing. First of all, the white traders trade the Indians whiskey, tools, tabacco, guns, and trinkets so the Indians will give them buffalo tongue and fur. Second, the white hunters go out to the plains and just shoot them for fun without getting it. Third, they use a tanning process to make the leather easier to make. Fourth, hunting is a sport for caucasian and Indian people. In conclusion, now there are only a few hundreds of the buffalo left.
You could stop at puntchuations (I think you mean “punctuation.” – Mr. A)
Ashley, you did good on reading out loud you were reading smoothly and stoppin at periods an commas. But one thing you could work on is pronouncing your words and speed.
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You did good on your paragraph and transictions I liked it also because you used the right punctuation in your paragraph.
Loosing the Buffalo
“With the Buffalo Gone” from “Buffalo Hunt” lists the reasons why there aren’t many buffalo roaming today. There are four reasons for the buffalo’s dissaperence and for the number getting smalle. The first reason was that White traders would pay the Indians with useful ieams for huntingand bringing back it’s hides and tongues. The second reason was Pioneers, the US Army,and railroad construction workers would kill buffalo for food. The third reason was that hunting became a sport to travelers that felt the need to kill a bffalo for fun. The last reason was that a new tanning process was created to make leather from the hides. To sum up,this section was mainly about about how the number of bffalo came close to extinction.
In the selection “With the Buffalo Gone” lists all the ways of hunting buffalo. There are four different reasons white people use to kill buffalo. The white traders used the indians to kill buffalo for their tongues and robes. so they can sell them. The white men made a tanning process to make leather out of buffalo. U.S. Army hired professional hunters to supply buffalo meat for military post. soon, buffalo hunting became a very popular sport to travelers. They felt that a trip to the West wasn’t complete unless they shot themselves a buffalo. In conclusion, this selection lists four hunting ways to kill buffalo.
“With the buffalo gone”explains how buffalo are disappearing. Buffalo are disappearing in four diffrent reasons . Buffalo disappeared by white traders,trading the idians guns,tools,tabacoo,whiskey for buffalo tounge and there fur to make into robes . The sport of killing buffalo for no reason at all. White hunters also made buffalo disappeared by killing more then they needed. A tanning proccess sealed the reamaing buffalo to make leather out of buffalo fur. In conclusion buffalo where disappering from the great plains.
Ignacio, please capitalize your name.
The selection “With The Buffalo Gone” explains where the buffalo went. These are the four reasons how the buffalo disappeared.The white traders cut off the buffalo skins and tougues. The white hunters began to kill more buffalo than the indians for tobacco,whiskey,guns,tools, and trinkets. U.S. army hired professional hunters to supply buffalo meat to western military post. The white people had a tanning process to make leather. To sum up the selection it explains how all the buffalo disappeared.
Dillon, capitalize your name!
This selection “With the Buffalo Gone” from the story Buffalo Hunt explains how buffalo disappeared. This selectins explains four reasons buffalo disappeared. The white traders cut off the buffalo skin and tongue. The white hunters began to kill more buffalo than the Indians
for tabacco, whiskey, guns, tools, and trinkets. U.S army hired proffesional hunters to supply food for the railroad construction crews. The white men were shooting buffalo as a sport.In conclusion, this selection explains four ways the buffalo disappeared.
The selection “With all the Buffalo Gone” from the story “Buffalo Hunt” explains how the buffalo disappeared. The Indians started to see less buffalo, because the white men are hunting too. The Indians started to want buffalo robes made of buffalo fur. They also killed extra buffalo for a white man’s goods. Other people killed the buffalo only for the meat. Some people were only killing Buffalo, because they felt they couldn’t complete a journey without shooting a buffalo. In conclusion, the white men were hunting more Buffalo than the Indians.
“With the Buffalo Gone” from the selection “Buffalo Hunt” explains how the buffalo disappeared. There are four reasons why the buffalo vanished. The first reason is because the caucation traders traded the Indians buffalo for trickets, tabaco, and whisky. The second reason was because the caucation hunters killed more buffalo than the Indians did. They also were disappearing because the USA hired professional hunters to hunt the buffalo so they could feed the western military posts. The Indians sold the buffalo robesto the caucation tradersto make leather. “With the Buffalo Gone” describes the many ways buffalo vanished.
Be careful of your spelling Elexis. Some of the spacing is just a bit off as well. – Mr. A
In the story ”Buffalo Hunt” the selection ”with The Buffalo Gone” explains how the buffalo are disappearing. These are reasons why buffalos have disappeared. White hunters are killing buffalo for their hides and tonges. White traders would trade the indians wisky,tobaco,tools,wepons,and trinkets for buffalo hide and tonge.Hunting had become a sport to the hunter. the army hired buffalo for the meat In conclustion this is why the buffalo is disappearing.
You’re still missing a few reasons, Jacob. The last few sentences are jumbled together and are confusing. Please copy and paste with corrections.
Buffalo Gone
The selection”With buffalo gone” describes how buffalo keep dissapearing. This selection tell’s four reasons why buffalo have dissapeared. White tradors traded with the indians for buffalo robes & tongues. White hunters started killin more buffalo than indians. US army hired hunters to kill the buffalo. Buffalo hunting became a sport. To sum up,more buffalo have died.
Please update your GO BACK sentence. It’s not a question of more buffalo dying, this is more about how there are no more buffalo.
The article with the buffalo gone ”tells about the buffalo is disappearing .These are the 4 reason why the buffalo are disappearing.The white trader are killing the buffalo for the touge and hides.Pioneers Army and curtruatnews kill buffalo for food .Buffalo hunting because apopular spot killed buffalo for fun.Some people kill buffalo to feed the people at the railraod track. In cocclonsion These 4 reason that why the buffalo are disappearing.
Watch your spelling Cheng. Spacing is also an issue. Don’t let your words run together.
The selection “With the Buffalo Gone” decribes how the buffalo dissapears. These are the four ways why the buffalo started to disappear.The buffalo are vanishing because non- Indians traded
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The selection “With the Buffalo Gone” explains why the Buffalo are gone. Their are four reasons why Buffalo are dissappearing . White Traders offered indians guns , tobacco,whiskey, and trinkets for their buffalo robes,tougues or profitable markets for the east. The men kept killing more buffalo because they wanted the meat.Commerial Tanneries in the east could turn buffalo hidew into leather. In the selection ” With the Buffalo Gone’ explains why people kept killing Buffalo.
You did not finish. You read smooth. You read loud enough.
The selection”With the buffalo gone”from”Buffalo Hunt” explains about who hunted the buffalo.These are four reasons of why they disappeared.The white traders hunted the buffalo for the hides and tongue. The white hunters slughtered more buffalo than the indians. People hunted buffalo for fun,as a sport. Hide hunters killed the buffalo and stripped it of its hide and left the rest of the body to rot.In conclusion, this story tells of how the buffalo disappeared.
Justin, I have noticed you did not say in your paragraph “the indians slaughtered more buffalo than the Indians did for food.” If you have time you should corect that. You should work on reading aloud at home.
“The Buffalo are Dissapearing”
“With the Buffalo Gone” in the selection “Buffalo Hunt” explains four ways buffalo dissapeard. There are four reasons buffalos disapeard in diffrent ways. The first way was that buffalo were vanishing because white people were killing to much buffalo for food. The second way was that buffalo hunting was a popular sport for many travelers to slaughter buffalo. The third way was that white traders offerd Indians guns, tools, tabbaco, wisky, and trinkets in exchange for buffalo robes and tongues. The fourth way is that white people slaughter buffalo for tanning process to be easier to make leather. In conclusion, buffalo disapeard to smaller groups and almost got extinct.
Edith, it is great that you used transitions. There was a good description of each reason. One thing i noticed is that you used the word “way” in every sentence. Also your yellow sentence doesn’t really make sense.
I couldn’t find the audio for you though.
Buffalo Gone
The selection”With buffalo gone” describes how buffalo keep dissapearing. This selection tell’s four reasons why buffalo have dissapeared. White tradors traded with the indians for buffalo robes & tongues.Next White hunters started killing more buffalo than indians. US army hired hunters to kill the buffalo. Buffalo hunting became a sport. To sum up,more buffalo are gone.
The iindians tought that the buffalo.But the white men wanted the buffalo for their fur,and tung. The indans gave them some Buffalos fur,and tung.they gave the indians guns,and whiskey. The indians where mad at the white men for killing the buffalo.The white men had made up a sport dy killing the baffalo,with gun,or nife.When after the white men killed the buffalo the men will sometimes take the tung,or fur,or they will leave the buffalo their.Back then and now their are less buffallo in the world.