Ilike how the camre was moveing and the peolp was not moving.But ther was one thing that you can work on was when Katherine said we going to find it find want.
As the Director,I’d have to say that when Kathryn said her line to check her D.O.L. folder,it made me laugh out loud.But I did notice that Kathryn was already in her first scene.
I like that your movie is like teaching a lesson about keeping organized, especially your own homework has to be organized!
There was excellent acting and clever ways to say the lines. I noticed that there was unintended humor.You could use a little more expression.Alson the camera was moving a little bit.
There was excellent acting and clever ways to say the lines. I noticed that there was unintended humor.You could use a little more expression.Also the camera was moving a little bit.
“Hey what’s wrong,” asked Jazmine
“I can’t find my homework,” replied Crystina
“Did you check your desk,” asked Jazmine
“Yes,”said Crystina
“But I have this new game to play,”said Jazmine
“Guess were playing next recess,” replied Crystina
“No, were finding it,” Jazmine said
“Whatever you say,” Crystina told her
“You should check your DOL folder,” Jazmine told her
“Okay,” replied Crystina “Found it.”
Like how katherine act.
Hey relly funny .
Ilike how the camre was moveing and the peolp was not moving.But ther was one thing that you can work on was when Katherine said we going to find it find want.
As the Director,I’d have to say that when Kathryn said her line to check her D.O.L. folder,it made me laugh out loud.But I did notice that Kathryn was already in her first scene.
I like that your movie is like teaching a lesson about keeping organized, especially your own homework has to be organized!
There was excellent acting and clever ways to say the lines. I noticed that there was unintended humor.You could use a little more expression.Alson the camera was moving a little bit.
There was excellent acting and clever ways to say the lines. I noticed that there was unintended humor.You could use a little more expression.Also the camera was moving a little bit.
“Hey what’s wrong,” asked Jazmine
“I can’t find my homework,” replied Crystina
“Did you check your desk,” asked Jazmine
“Yes,”said Crystina
“But I have this new game to play,”said Jazmine
“Guess were playing next recess,” replied Crystina
“No, were finding it,” Jazmine said
“Whatever you say,” Crystina told her
“You should check your DOL folder,” Jazmine told her
“Okay,” replied Crystina “Found it.”