My alarm clock rings. I open my eyes. I sit up and get out fo bed. I walk to the bathroom, brush my teeth, and jump in the shower. I dry myself and put on my clothes. I walk downstairts, and sit down for breakfast. Mom has made me bacon and eggs. I drink my orange juice.
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My alarm clock rang like a dinosaur.Happily,I opened my eyes.I went to the bathroom and asked myself “why did i brush my teeth like a rock star?”I jumped in the shower like there was no tommorow!Silently,I walked downstairs like a ninja.My mom made me eggs and bacon.I asked her “why did u make green eggs and yellow bacon?”
Loudly , my alarm clock rang . I opened my eyes I couldn’t see . I am blind . My brother took my blanket off my eye . I can see it is a miracle ! i sat up , running into the bathroom . In the bathroom I got my toothbrush and brush my teeth . I jump into the shower I saw a rat ! I yelled ahh ahh ahh ahh ahh ! Quickly , I got dressed I went into my room and jump into my bed . My brother went into the bathroom and took the mice . He said” I supossed to take care of the mice my mother maked bacon and egg . My mother , brother ,dad ,and sister ate it all . Ionly had milk.
” Ring ring ” my alarm clock ring . I open my eyes , sit up and get out of bed . I’ m walking into a bathroom to brush my teeths , i take shower and put on my cloths . I walk into the kittcen and get breakfast . My mom has mead bacon and egg .I dink apple juice whith ice.
Loudly, my alarm clock rings. Opening, my eys I sit up and get out of bed. In nthe bathroom I brush my teeth and jump into the warm shower. I dry myself and put on my clothes and a shirt my friend let me borrow! Do I want breaktfast? Yeah, so I walk down stairs to have breaktfast. “Good morning, I made bacon and eggs,”said mom. I also drank some orange juice.
My alarm clock rings and I get scared! I openmy eyes and I say “What time is it?” From my bed I got up and I look in the mirror and my hair is mess. Slowly I walk to the bathroom,brush my teeth and jump into the shower. Drying myself I put on my clothes. Walking down for breakfast. “What’s for breakfast” ,I asked my mom says,”bacon and eggs.”Camly I drink my orange juice.
Loudly, my alarm clock rang. Still sleeping, I got out of bed. In the hallway I walked to the bathroom and took an hour finish. I got out dryed myself. I fell down the stairs! Mom asked,” What would you like?” I said ” Bacon and eggs with orange juice.
Loudly, my alarm clock rings ,so fast.Hitting the alarm off, I opened my eyes . I walked towards to the bathroom and brushed my teeth ,and got into the warm shower.I am so tired!I got out of the tub and dry myself.Do I have to wear these clothes?”I’m so hungry,”iI said to myself.Mom cooked us breakfest .I ate eggs with bacon, and with orange juice.
Quietly on a Monday morning my alarm clock rings and I get out of bed. When I got out of bed I walked to the bathroom and brushed my teeth and jumped in the shower. When I was doen taking a shower I dried my self and put some cloths on. I ran down stairs to eat breakfast Iwent to go sit down at the table my mom made fried eggs,sausage and bacon and a glass of chocolate milk.
When my alarm clock rang I got very mad.I do not like to wake up from loud thing. Slowly, I got up and I opened my eyes. I was walking to the bathroom I found my tooth brush in side the toilet. Also it was not alone. Last I had taken a shower.
One day I fell asleep, an then my alarm clock rings. Slowly I open my eyes open and get out of bed. Then I walk to the bathroom,then I saw a big spideran I said,awww that was a big spider! When the big spider came near me I started to scream then my mom heard me so she came in the bathroom and she started to kill it because it was a big spider.when she killed the spider I stared to brush my teeth.then, I jumed In the shower and got out.When I was finish I was brushing my hair.My mom was making breakfeast for me I came down stairs and my mom made me eggs,bacon, and pancakes an then she gave me orange jiuce and milk.
When my alarm clock rung it rung so lod that I fell off my bed.I tried to open my eyes as it felt like they were glued together.I sat up and got off the floor.When I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth I found my toothbrush in the toilet with a floaty!I had to get a new toothbrush.When I was done brushing my teeth I jumped into the shower.I got out dried myself and put my school clothes on.I was still drowsy so walking daown stairs I rolled off and ended up with many bruises.Sorely I walked into the kitchen. My mom made me bacon and eggs. Since I was so hungry I took a big bite of some bacon.I guess it was to hard because all my teeth fell out.”mom all my teeth fell out I don’t think I could still eat my eggs!” I told my mom. It was bloody anyways.So I drank my orange juice and it turned bloody too.
On Monday, morning my alarm clock rings the news goes on the bathroom door opens. Slowly, I open my eyes and roll off the bed. As I walk into the bathroom my robot brushes my teeth for me and slips me into the but I sliped and fell so I got a five inch cut on my leg the robot or (Zac E.) his name helped me up and fixed my five inch cut. After that I dryed my-self off with a extremly soft towel. Then put my clothes on. In the mean time I slid down a pole whie it dropped me on a slide. Eating my breakfast I got really happy for my first day of school (fifth grade). I went there in a sauser that can fly me any were even Outer Space (cool). I went to class when it was finshed had three pages of homework not bad right. When I went home I had dinner and a soft drink. Took a shower and went to bed. THE END!!!!!!