HWAS Tues. 09/16/08

SP – 2nd Half – Meaning sentences
M – TBH Set A – 1,3, Set B – 1,3 Set C – 1, 3 Set D – 1, 2 Set F – 1,3 Set G – 1,2 and Set H – 1,2
R – Sticky Notes on pages 71-75
ELA – Before/After Paragraph:

My desk is a mess. Papers fall out. I think I hear mice in there. There’s a smell coming from my desk. I clean it out. Oops. I found a moldy sandwich with a dead mouse next to it. I guess the mouse was poisoned by the mold.

Use SENTENCE VARIETY to make this paragraph better (-ly, -ing, where, ” “, !, and ?).

One thought on “HWAS Tues. 09/16/08

  1. Today,I just realized that my desk was a big mess.When I put my hand in there thousands of papers always falls out.I always hear scratching noises that comes out from my desk .It sounds like a mice is in my desk.I also smell something stinky that comes from my desk but I will never bother to know what is going on in there because of the papers.Since I had to clean my desk all I needed to do was put my hand in my desk and take it out then all my papers would fall out.”Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh there is a moldy sandwich and a dead mouse in my desk!”I screamed to my teacher. He told me to throw it away I was going to eat it but my teaher told me not to.Walking to the trash can ,I thought to myself “the mouse probably got poisined by the moldy sandwich.”but I still threw it away.

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