Describe what it’s like to stand outside in line before the school bell rings. Use sentence variety, five senses, a simile, and an onomatopoeia.
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Describe what it’s like to stand outside in line before the school bell rings. Use sentence variety, five senses, a simile, and an onomatopoeia.
Shaking,on the blacktop I was so cold.I saw kids running and chasing other kids.I heard kids yelling.I saw my breath .It was as foggy as fog.I swa the grass covered in frost.I felt wind blowing in my face it was so cold.Struggleing,to get warm I put on my hood.Listening,to the bell ring I was glad.We get to go in the classroom.
Outside, in line I was as cold as a ice cube. As i smelled the aroma of the air, I started to feel sick because it made my stomach to feel very weak. Suddenly, I noticed mositure coming out of my mouth. While I was touching the metal pole of the basketball court, my hands started to get knumb because it was so cold outside. The air was as white as a ghost. In the mens room my face was as pale as death. To feel as cold as I did it made me feel like I was stuck in the antartica. Walking by a class I smelled the fresh brewed coffee it made my stomach feel bad. As I walked into the classroom, and the warm air made me feel good!
When I got to school it was freezing cold. We had to stand in line by the basketball courts to wait for our teacher. People were wearing huge coats to keep them warm. Some people’s coats were very furry. Waiting in line, I saw that people were running saying ” they weren’t cold.” It didn’t seem like they were cold at all. Finally, when the teacher came out we were all happy. One teacher had coffee. I could smell the aroma. Looking at my friend, I saw that he wasn’t wearing a jacket. He was as cold as a strawberry popsicle. When our teacher was by the basketball court we said ” let’s go inside!!” Then we went in. People were saying, ” it was very cold.”
I see kids playing in line and yelling.My face and my hands are cold.I always put my hands in pockets so it be warm. When I stay in line I sometime get warm from just sitting there diong nothing.I sometimes see kids bang into each other and say sorry.Waiting in line, make me not want to stay in line at all. I heard the bird chirp so loud that I want did to go inside the classroom. Playing in line, make me even colder than ever. Walking to class, make it warmer than outside waiting for school bell rings.
Every morning I feei cold and frozen. Cilly mornings I hear teeth chatering and talking. Outside is very noisy and I see alot of kids with jakets on. When I touch my cheeks they are very cold. I can see the smoke coming out of people’s mouths. Talking in line I begin to get cold. I tell Chistine,”It is so cold Chistine.” When I Get to line I say ,”Bye Monse see you after school!” I felt as cold as a polar bear today in the morning. To be outside made me feel like if I was in Ant. Artica.At 7:50 I’m glad because the bell rings so we can go inside. The bell rings like this,” ding, ding, ding, ding” and Mr Alfonso picks us up.
When i’am out there waiting “for my teacher it is cold”and every times. When i breath i see smoke coming out of my mouth and when it is getting more colder i can taste hte breakfast i had went and i go outside and when i fell the grass it’s hard as nails and then i go back in line “and then i hear a very loud noise andsometimes it makes my heard hurt.
Walking to the line I could feel the wind on my face. It is as cold as ice. We have to stand, and it feels like my hands are going to pop off. I hear lots of kids yelling and talking. You could see people with big jakets, scarfs, mittens, and backpacks. Somtimes the’re some kids running. Somtimes quitley,I talk with my freinds and we laugh. Then the bell rings, ding ding ding!!1 As I am walking, I can’twaitto feel the warm air.
Every morning 7:20 I always start coming to school, but once I line up I stand in line, but everytime it always feell cold almost like Alaska, but then I have to keep myself warm because when I feel my hands they feel like icey cold. Suddenly when I felt my face it felt like it was ice,then my friend Jessica came over and said what happen to you’re face! I told her I did not know why is something wrong. After that my teacher said” oh! my goodness what happen to you’re face”? So instead I just tasted my hand and it tasted like sweet sweet ice, Suddenly I heard pop! crack! k-boom! Then I saw that my face had exploded with ice and it went everywhere, my face was so cold and numed I couldn’t even feel my face anymore
It was very cold when I’m standing in line. My hand are freezing and so is my face. Mostly my body, it was cold as ice. It was very noisy because others class are talking and laughing. the aroma of my friend mouth is smell like banana because she just came out from the cafeteria. Putting my backpack down to check my homework is it there or to see if I forgot something. Happily because Mr.Alfonso was coming and my friend said “Yes” and suddenly he stop. In the basketball court, I see Mr.Alfonso was talking to Mrs.Wu. When he was done, he came and we went to the classroom.
standing in line in the cold is like cold as ice.I could barely feel my hands and nose was runny because of the cold so i could’t smell or taste anything.So i’m just shivering in line waiting for the bell to ring.The wind is blowing harder “WHOOSH”.I could hear students yelling and playing around.Finally some of my friends get in line and we start talking.Then the bell rings “DING! DING! DING! DING!”.Then the students go and line up.So the teachers come and pick up their student and they go inside their classroom.
Standing In the cold is like holding many ice cubes in your hands. I could even see my own breath outside! I can hear a lot of kids talking, but I can’t smell anything.”How long do we have to stand outside?” To stand outside makes me feel like I’m inside a refrigerator. Outside, there so many kids talking that sometimes I can’t hear the bell ring. Only some people can hear it. Surprisingly, it is sometimes colder than you think.
I in line everybody was talking.When I was standing in line,I heard him said that he doesn’t like people that keep hitting him.Suddenly,I ask him”why do they bther you?”He said”they bother me because they don’t like me.”standing in line was heardind my feet but when I smell something bad I cover my nose so I can’t smell it.When I went to the classroom I heard people talking so we have to go line up again.When I play at recess I tried to run as fast as a cheada.
When I am in line out side I hear children still playing when its cold when I talk I can see my breath and
Standing in line feels very cold. I hear loud noise like children yelling. Then I saw my breth comeing out of my mouth. Some people ran to line in cold. And it is cold as ice out their.Some times it starts to rain .So we don’t have to line up.Finally the bell rings and we start lineing up. Then we went to class and stared work.