Write about what it’s like to stand outside now that it’s very cold. (Imagine that you are wearing a DRES Hooded Sweatshirt) Someone dares you to stick you tongue on a metal pole to see if it sticks. Unfortunately, you agree to do it.
Use SENTENCE VARIETY, 5 SENSES, SIMILES, ONOMATOPOEIA, etc. (a.l.8)
When I went outside I saw a frozen pole and a child . Quickly the child ran to me . The child said ,” I dare you to stick your tongue on the pole .”I heard him and I said ,yes.” I touch the and it was so cold ! The kid said ,” I was scared.” I said ,”okay I’ll do it.” At school I stuck my tongue out to the pole .”hah!” I did it. It tasted like water from the dirt . Sticking my tongue to the pole I smelled fourty dozen BBQ chicken .When am I going to take my tongue out ? I told the kid to get me a super hot boiling water . He did . I poured it on my tongue and it defrost . I ran to get some BBQ chicken it was all gone MAN! I ran to my teacher’s class madly ,because I didn’t eat for a couple days. one minute ago…. I went to a buffet.
It was freezing cold that day. It was as cold as the Artic Ocean! I saw snow flakes every where piling to mountain size! Then that same day some kid dared me to stick my tongue on a pole. I randomly said yes. So, I went up to a pole sticked out my tongue. Nevously, I put , my tongue on the pole. Exhaling, I thought my tongue was stuck but it wasn’t! ” Is it stuck someone” asked. Then that was my chance to dare the same kid who dared me to stick my tongue on the pole. ” Now it is your turn but on the frozen pole” then the kid went up to the frozen pole and licked it but his tongue got stuck! “Ouch” he said when pulling back his tongue. Then every one started to laugh like a audience on T.V.
It all started as we were outside in the snow then my brother dared me to stick my tounge onto a pole to see what would happen.Of course I didn’t do it! Well, that was what I thought before he bet me $50.Slowly, I walked towards the pole frightenly. I wondered if something was going to happen? I saw the pole coverd sith cold white frost on it. I was bundeled up in clothes and I looked as big as a snowman, but I still felt cold.Stiking my tounge out close to the pole I could hear my sister telling me not to do it, but I did. my tounge was as cold as sitting on a huge ice cubestuck to the pole I tried to get off so I could get my money from my brother but I couldn’t. My tounge was stuck to the pole. I tried to pull it off. It won’t even budge. I tried as hard as I can. When I finally did I wasn’t very happy because half of my tounge was on the pole! “Ahhhhh! my tounge is cut off mytounge is cut off!” I yelled.When my mom came out to see what happened she fainted. That’s how I got my tounge cut off, and no I did not get $50 from my brother he gave me a penny.
I went outside with my DRES hooded sweatshirt it felt very soft and warm. By now my feat were cold as snow. I saw four poles and each one had a bird on it. I heard birds saying “caw caw!” Outside in the snow a man walked by me and dared me to stick my tongue on the pole. Unfortunately, I accepted and licked the pole. It tasted like a frozen popsickle. Suddenly, my tongue was stuck and I couldn’t move. So I had to sit there all day. The next day it started to melt. When ot was done melting I ran to my house and sat in a nice warm bed.
And it tasted dirty so then I was trying to take my tounge off but it was stuck.My tounge was stuck like a frozen ice pop.And then there was a squirrel on the pole and it attacked me and when it attacked me my tounge came off the pole.Then the squirrel started to tak to me he started talking like a dog and he said “bark, bark, bark” And I said “that was akward” so I had to put my tounge in hot water. And I got in trouble for listening to him and I was not going to do a dare agin.
Sadly,in the moring it was very very cold outside when I was walking to school.It was 22 digrease cold outside,it was colder then snow.But luckily I was wearing my David Reese Hooded Sweat shirt kept me warm.One of my classmates darded me to stick my tongue on the pole to see it could stick on,but I had to do it because the students dared me to or other wise I would have to owe detention for three weeks so I made the right desition.i could taste the pole all dirty and yucky!I alao could sense the dirt coming from the pole.Their were people laughing at me so I ignored then because they would have to do it to.Also my cheeks were cold as hard cold steak!”Ahh can somebody help me”!Soon the bell rung,were did every body go,who who said that”I did down here.Ummm I can’t see you sure I do need some help.The little guy had toget a pale of water soon the little guy started to work finally it worked then I was set free.
In the morning it was cold, but with my David Reese sweatshirt I felt warm inside. My cheeks are cold ,but with my hood on I feel warm. I can hear kids yelling, talking,or not talking without anyone. I see kids runing around like crazy, or walking slowly and lonly. In the mornig I trembeled like a tractor because of the cold. I smell th fog that is very cold. Itouched a pole and it was cold. After a whiled a boy dared me to stick my toung to a pole, unfortunetly I agreed. Quickly I sticked my tounge to it and it froze as fast as a hoping rabbit. I tried to pull it ,but I couldn’t. It tasted likea old dirty machine. I had to stay there untile the sun came out so it can unfreeze it. After it was unfrozen, I never did that again even if they gave me $100. “Never again Noooooo! “
Happily i went out side. I put on my jatket , i felt like someone put fire next to me . walking on a play ground , I felt my teeth like a freezing ice cudes . At the playground i was sitting on a side of a playground i felt like sand on a ice cube . I look on a grass it is all white. I put my tongue on the pole it tast’d like banna fish sand which . I smelled fresh air of winter . I seethe sky whith a ;ot of shape . “i can see a ice cream ” , i told my friend . I can fell my hair is freezing ! ” , my friend said .” can you see a brid that fly ?” I ask my friend . She said no. I walk to the tree and i hear “ooo” . I think it minght be a brid . Then i went back tell my friend hw it tasted when i put my tongue on a pole.
One day some one dared me to stick my tongue on a pole. It was as if it were snowing. I told him yesbut I thought no. cock-doodle-doo! It was as cold as ice water.So I put my david reese hooded swete shirt on. I put my tongue on ice cold pole. when I pulled it wouldent come off. I yelled for help but no one came. When I saw the boy leave I thought he was not coming back.He went to get help.I was so relefed .I thanked him but it was his falt.
I was standing outside in the cold air.sombody dares me to stick my tongue on a pole looked like a ice loli pop. I said no…… but he said I give you I pink i pod. going to the pole to stick my tongue. he run away and said “just kiding”.I stand for a hour and my feet were like worn out sneckers.it got cold and colder. but it was warm because I had a HOODED SWEAT SHIRT it was like it was a warm day.Then I got night. i was scared it was night. came and said your tongue is like ice . they but water to mealt it . then I went to to get a litte peice of my tongue and doctor fix it. I went home my mom said god goodnes they found you. Then I ate and took a bath go to sleep.finlly day is over
I woke up on christmas morning and played outside at the street.Quikly my friend that slept over.He dared me to lick a pole. Isaid no. “Are you chiken”. Whatever
I will. I stuck out my tounge and stuck it back in. So i shut my eyes and did It. It didnt stick. I was so happy i got $1millon dollares.
Today I wore my David Reese sweater because it looked cold outside today when I looked out of my window. So everybody was outside waiting in line for teachers tp pick them up. I waited in line too. It was very cold my hands were freezing like they were going to break. I heard people chattering and yelling. I saw birds hanging on the trees. My body was freezing like I was in the snow. My friend Crystal, Poala, and Fabbie dared me to stick my tounge on the pole. ”Ok!”I said to them. So I sticked my toung on the pole slowly because the pole smelled very bad like a skunk. So finally my tounge touched the pole and it was stuck! What am I going to do? So all my friends helped me to make my touge get off the pole. So Crystal had a waterbottle so did Fabbie. So they decided to pour the water on my tounge and the pole so the pole will get slippery and my tounge can get off. Poala poured the water and my tounge was off the pole. I learned my lesson never stick your tounge on a pole.
When I was outside it felt like an ice age. Then I got thursty so I went to the water fountain then it froze in a flash. I went inside to put my David Reese Hooded Sweatshirt on it felt like a desert in summer. Then someone told me to put my tougue on a pole I said ” ok I will do it .” So I put my tougue on the pole. After my togue and the pole got stuck like two magnets. Someone got hot water and put it on the pole my tougue melted off. I told the person who told me to put tougue on the pole ” a bird went doodoo on me!” I will get rid of that bird when I see it agian. ,
Today I went to reeses I went to go and ask my frends what thay where doing. Thay where daring someone to stik there tong on a ice cold pole so I did and right when it hit that pol my tong was as cold as Antartica. I wasint that cold brcause I was waring DRSS it felt like I was sitting by the fier place. My mom was mad my dad was to. All mt frens at shool asked how did it tast and I sad nasty.At first I taat that I would get sike
It has been getting alot colder here in Saceromento. Fortunatly I bought a David Reese Sweatshirt that is very soft and warm on the inside. Whenever I put on my sweatshirt when it is cold it feels like I might start sweating like a knock-kneed mule. near the line somrone dared me to lick a pole to see if it sticks. should I do it? After a little while I heard them start to cluck. “Balk Balk”. I had to do it, I didn’t want to be called a chiken so I said yes! It tasted like dirty ice on a cold day. I pulled back and it didn’t stick! Thank goodness.
It was so cold today hot poping grees will cool down faster than a car can run.Luckly I had my DRES hooded sweatshirt on,it was as hot as moter oil.Yelling mr. Alfonso dared me to stick my tongue to a basket ball pole.By the basket ball pole I stuck my tongue and it got stuck the pole tasted yukey,it felt could,I heard the b-ball hit the rim,it smelled like swet,I saw the b-ball players sweat.When I pulled back,boing.Ihit the pole. Iwent back to class with frost on my tongue.
One silent morning when the bell rang we went out to recess. I was colder than a naked mole rat in Alaska. I felt my soft mittens made out of cotten. I saw five or six girls walking to me they looked kind of big to me (I was 6) they were 8 or 9. One of them said, ” I dare you to stick your tounge to the pole!” I said,”NO!” Then another one said, “I double dog dare you!” I Couldn’t think. Finally one said “i tripple dog dare you to do it!” I said slowly “YES!” I stuck my tounge out little by little then suddenly it hit the pole. The bell ring and they just leave me there. I was all alone then Mr.Alfonso asked, “Where is Sabrina?” Then one girl points out the window and he saw Sabrina screaming with her tounge stuck to the pole. While she was out there I was out there I was thinking about how nasty the pole tasted. It tasted badder than a moldy block of cream cheese. Mr. Alfonso ran as fast as he could and he called 9-1-1. The firefighters came and put hot water on my tounge and it bruned and it came off. I loved it he gave me some ice lemonade it was sweeter than ten blocks of suger. My mom got mad and I didn’t care. She said I was dumber than Dumbo. I went to bed and it still hurt.
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