Describe the fog outside. Use five senses (Sight/touch especially), sentence variety and a simile (onomatopoeia if possible). 6-7 Sentences
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Describe the fog outside. Use five senses (Sight/touch especially), sentence variety and a simile (onomatopoeia if possible). 6-7 Sentences
WhenI went to school I saw everything was foggy I couldn’t see that much.I feel these dots dropping on my hand.When I hear the wind it was making the monkey bars swing and making noises.Suddunly,the basket ball court seem like it is frozen.I ask my teacher “are we gonna have indoor recess?”
When I woke up at 5:30 I saw fog. It was white you could not not see anything ! It was so scary. I hard kids running
Our weather is foggy. And it is very cold. And it is cold as ice. We could hardly see thing. Like when we are in the car you can’t see nothing. So I turned around and I couldn’t see anything.So I got to school. And mostly everyone was wearing a hoods.They were wearing it because it was cold. So I just waited for the bell to ring. Then we went into the classroom.
Walking to get in line, I heard people talking and laughing. The rain drop on my face and it was as cold as ice. Seeing the sky was fuzzy and the floor was wet. My sister collided into me because she can’t see. Luckily, I didn’t fall. Shaking hand with Mr.Alfonso, when we come in. Mee was capable because she do D.O.L and daily blog at the same time. Mr.Alfonso open the window to let us see what is outside. So everyone write what they had saw and we all blog.
Today at school, there was foogy weather. You could barley see anything out side. We have another school next to us you could barley even see the school. I kind of could hear a fizzle if it was quite enough to hear. Looking at the ground it was very damp because of the moisture in the air. Feeling my skin it was very cold and damp so, I decided to put my hood on. The air was as white as a ghost! I asked my-self “when is this kind of weather going to stop?” Rethinking that thought I do kind of like this weather because you get to stay inside.”
When I was outside I felt a lot of mist on my face.It was very cold that I had to put on my hood,because of the weather. From a far distance I could see anything.On the ground you can see lots of leaves that were dirty ,there were also lots rubber bands that were broken and also dirty.” If you tell me what is outside I will have to say a lot of fog with mist that will get on your face alot,but I will have to say that there is mist like if you were in clouds” Even though I never been there.
The weather outside is like being surrrounded by mist. Outside, I can feel something on my face. I can see that the ground is damp. To just look outside, I can tell that it is very foggy outside. Surprisingly, I can’t taste anything. In the fog I can’t see anything from a far distance.
As I stepped outside into the cold damp air,I saw Tule Fog.The ground and air were moist.It smelled like rain Whoosh!The wind zipped past me.
Feeling,the mist fall on my face felt cold.Looking, at my neighbor’s it was covered in fog.The mist felt as cold as ice.Quickly,I put on my hood.Looking, at James Rutter was hard tere was alot of mist.Finally,I went in the class.Feeling,the warm air made me happy.
The weather is really bad and I can bearlysee James Rutter at all. I can hear little kid saying it is cold out here. Students had their hood on because their ears are as cold as an icecube. I can feel the breeze coming toward me. I am worried about people that don’t have their coat on. Waiting outside made me want to come inside the classroom already. Quickly, coming out the lunch room it made me want to just stay in there.The ground is damp and wet.Going, inside the classroom made me feel better.
Outside it was fogy and damp. Quickly I got to the line because it was chilly. At the line I put my hood on because I was cold outside you could barly see the playground and Rutter. I could feel the coldness through my bbody. It was as cold as an ice cube outside. Looking outside you can’t see the the grass. To be outside made me feel like an ice cube.
Today on my way to school, it was just as cold as a figure skater with a bikini on ice. Walking into the school campus was almost a blurr. I could hardly see anything. Quickly as I ran to one of my friends, I had her guide me through the fog since she had better vision. Quietly as we linned up, we all felt a spray of mist. Thinking it was going to rain, we then knew that it was just how fog was.
When I was going to school you could barely see other cars, and street lights didn’t even look like they were on. Walking to the blacktop I could barely see my line because of the fog. I was shivering because it was so cold. When i looked toward the playground I couldn’t see it, it seemed like there was never a playground. Suddenly the fog got stronger, and you couldn’t even see the other basketball court. When I looked toward rutter you couldn’t see their building.when we heard the door shut we knew our teacher was coming out but we couldn’t see him because of the fog. When we were in the classroom we couldn’t see anything outside because it was so foggy.
When you walk it’s like your in a mystical forest. You could feel The light water blowing in your face. When you see the playground it’s like a bomb hit the place,BOOM! CRASH!! When you look way out you could see 2 lights that can be 2 eyes looking straight at you. It is not as clear as a crystal, not at all. It seems as if you go ferther away the tree right in front of you gose away also.It is as White as a ghost.As you walk away those eyes still gleam,…. At you!
The fog is horrible.I can barely see James Rutter.I can’t feel my hand because their in my pocket as cold as ice.Outside the fog is really cold.It feels like the time go by slowly.It is wet on the ground by the fog even when it didn’t rain this week yet.Being outside in the fog is terrible.
Outside it is very cold and foggy. In the fog you might hear a crash of car couliding together. At school when you are far away from something you can’t see it because fo the fog. IT is freezing outside that people are allways are being so nousy.
It is fogy out side I cant see james rutter the only thing I see over their is the lights they have. In my school I can hardly see the playground, and the soccer feilds but while I am looking I see thigs falling. I see chidren puting thir hands inside their pokets I didint do that I was to cold I felt like a frozen statue not mooving.
When I went outside it was foggy. I couldn’t see the houses. Me and my brother was close to each other so we dont get lost. Riding, the bus to school made me shiver. I’t was as cold as ice . When I went to do breakfast it was loud and noisy. For breakfast I had syrup and bread it was delicious and yummy. Outside, it got foggier it was as white as snow. Iwas cold I couldn’t the playground.
When I went to school I saw everything was foggy I couldn’t see that much.I feel some dots dropping on my hand.When I heard the wind it made the monkey bars swinging and make noises.Suddenly,the bscketball court seems like it was frozen.I ask my teacher ” are we gonna have indoor recess?”he said”not sure,lets see if they anouce it.”Before I went inside the tree was white.
When I was outside I felt a lot of mist on my face.It was very cold that I had to put my hood on, because of the weather. From a far distance I could hardly see anything like the playground you can barly see it because of the fog. Talk about that on the ground you can see lots of dirt,leaves,and other things on the ground that should not even be there. Even when we were heading to the classroom you could hardly see anything, because ofn the fog. The thing that I did not like was that it was freezing like Pacific Ocean in the winter time.
When I woke up at 5:00 am I saw fog. It was white you could not see anything! It was so scary . I hared kids running ,they were talking and yelling . It was a noisy sound . I could smell the kids who had a stench to them . I could not see rutter like I use to. The park at are school you could beraly see it . I was scared .The fog was white as snow! The ground was damp .I could fill the mist on my face. When I waws going home the fog was going awa