What is like to shop during the month of December? Remember to use sentence variety, five senses, similes, descriptive adjectives and adverbs, etc.
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What is like to shop during the month of December? Remember to use sentence variety, five senses, similes, descriptive adjectives and adverbs, etc.
Going,into the mallmI hesrd people talking.There were people pushing and running to buy presents.I could hear the hot dog sizzling on the grill at the food court.Eating,the delicious hot dog made me full.The mall was as loud as a football game.Quickly,I ran to the toy store.I grabbed the last basket ball in the store.A kid also put his hand on the ball.Quickly,I pulled the ball away from the kid.I bought the ball with my money.Quickly, I ran to Game Stop there were a countless amount of kids.I grabbed the I wanted.I payed for the game.Then I went home.
Shopping for presents in the holidays is as slow as a snail.First i want these cool Jordans, but the line was so long.By the time I got there, the shoes were sold out.Then I went to buy some clothes, I got some, but the line was long and I could barely see the register..I could hear little kids crying”WAAAAAAA!I want to go to the Toy Store.”After shopping for clothes, I get a little hungry.So I go wait in line for a mouthwatering Hotdog with some relish and ketchup.I could smell all the food so I gt HUNGRIER!After eating,I go to the Toy Store to buy some toy for my little cousins.I grabbed this Transformer toy,but this kid try to grab it out of my hand.So we’re there for a few minutes.Finally h lets go and I buy the toy and then go home.
Shopping at macy, it made me hungry. Waiting in line, made me disappointed from waiting in a long line. The aroma of the hotdog made my mouth water. The hotdog was as hot as a pepper. Quietly eating my hotdog, I heard two girls fighting for a dress in front of the food cart. My brother collided into a girl and said “i’m sorry”.I was discocombobulated from which one to buy. I saw a dress it was as white as snow and my sister claim the dress. I thought my family was gone but they were at the restroom. Running to the restroom, made my mom feel on the ground. I asked my mom if a can go sit at the food cart. Staring at the dress, made me bump into my sister. Walking to the food cart, made me thirsty it was as cold as a ice cube.After that we went home.
When I went to the mall with my family it was so busy. I got lost in the mall. But then I ended up in front of foot locker. I saw some nice shiny red jordans. I liked them so much good thing I had some money with me so I bought the shoes. Suddenly, after I bought my shoes i heard a commotion? There was two guys fighting for shoes. During, the fight they took all the customers out the store. When I came out it was so loud there was kids whining everywhere! Then I found my family my sister was taking a picture with Santa Clause. After she took her picture we quickly left.Then we were hungry so we went to the food court. On our way over their I saw a longline I was wondering what it was for. I heard a guy saying ” I claim this ps3.”So I went in I heard this loud sound ”boom”. I t was someone playing video games. After that my family was so hungry so we went to the food court. I got a nice hot cheese pizza. After I ate I got a bag popcorn
Normally my family go to K-Mart but now we to walk to the Mall. On the way to the Mall, I smell the aroma of hotdog and I tell my mom to buy me one. The hotdog is so tasty and delicious, by the time finish with my hotdog and my family were standing at the Mall door. At the Mall, my sister and I were enthusiastic, when we goes in the noise as loud as a football game because everybody is laughing, cheering, screaming, and talking. Staring at the laptop, I accidentally collided into my neighbor, and my neighbor and I both said, “Sorry”. We both grabbed the laptop and I heard the sound,BANG like somebody is fighting. So I gave the laptop to her because I don’t want to fight, she always angry at people and she love to fight. My brother run as quick as lightning to get the package of dinosaur. After we all buy the thing that we want and we go home.
At the mall I quickly ran into the mall, but I saw something very strange that they’re were a lot of people.So I told myself thst I have to shop fast. So the first thing I have to shop fast. So the first thing I did was ran over to the smell on wheels, they had all kinds of scents.I said”well I can get that for my auntie”. Then I went to the Men’s department to find my brothers and dad something, but this lady tried to snatch this shirt away from me. I told the clerk that she tried to take the shirt away. I heard the clerk yelling”stop don’t rip that shirt it is brand-new”. So we just kept touging and we both heard a tear go rip!I said oops! So I ran out there and smelled a hot dog shack so went to buy one becuse I was kind of hungry , when I bought it I touched it, it was blazin like a chiken in a roasten pot.
It was only one week before Halloween and I still did not have a costume yet. Then BANG! It hit me. I had knew what wanted to get for Halloween. I was very excited, I could already see the way the outfit would look on me. I was just as excited as a first time on the greatest roller coaster of all. Quickly I ran downstairs and asked my grandma could we go to Arden Mall now since I knew what I wanted to be. I was going to be Devil Girrrl. Walking into the mall,we we into a store called Party America. Starting to stare at the outfit, my body began to tingle. But then BUMP! Somebody knocked me out of the way trying to get the same outfit as me, but the major problem was that there was only one outfit left. I could hear my streanth working together to try and take the out fit. TUG! TUG! TUG! Finnaly the outfit had ended up inside my hands. Running fast,I had came up to the cashier, paid the money, and left with my grandma. We were as happy as a clam. Even though it was alot of hard work.
“I like shoping because it’s fun and usally i would go to shop to buy clothes and, supplies .”If i want something so bad i rush to get it and then boom then i got it. The only reason why i like shoping is because i need clothes. I extremely like there food because it’s good and, it’s mouthwatering and, when i thirsty i get some jamba as honey and then when i’am done i go home why do i go home? Because i’am tired.
We get in the car and, slam! slam! the doors close. We drive off in a zoom! When we enter the mall I hear people talking and click- clack from ladies high heels. I see the people talking on the phone with shopping bags. Somtimes I see guys at the mall not exited and some are completly opposite. We are trying to get a a perfect present for my mom’s freind. But the problem is that …. It’s packed! Slowly, we walk inside, we only have 3 hours! It looks like battlefeild. When we were walking we humed “Silent Night. ” It didn’t seem so silent to me. We got to the jewlery store, Finally. We took a look at all of them, then we got the 1dec. Ruby ring. The ruby was dark dark red with carrot dimonds around it. We bought the ring for 5,000 dollars! My head was going to spin. I was going mad as a hatter! My mom says its worth their freindship. We countinued on to the bath stuff. Woosh!! 3 girls shuved past everybody.I think they are high schoolers trying to get a prom dress. My mom was as mad as a bull. I calmed her down though. Quickly, we ran to the bath stuff and got her favorite colored bathbeads, turquoise. Ahh, it smelled like ocean breeze, ahh I can almosthear the breeze of the ocean whoosh, whoosh, swish. those weren’t that bad, it was $10.00. the clock was ticking, then I smelled the cinnomanbon, snif snif. My stomach started growling ,so my mom bought one for both of us. We only got 10 minutes to go home , we ran to the car and raced to the house. We got there as quick as a blink. We wrapped the present in a tweety wrap then hid them ti’ll christmas day.
At the mall I ran as fast as I could to the electronics. Quickly as I could I got a portable DVD player. To be able to get the portable DVD player made me as happy as a clown. After I got out of the store Alex said,”You’er lucky I only got a CD!” I saw the CD it was of Solja Boy.Alex had to yell because I couldn’t hear him. When I went upsairs I got a nice big jucy hotdog. It smelled so delicious that I took a big bite out of the hotdog. It tasted so yummythat when I bit out of it, it would say munch, munch, munch.
When I got to the mall I can smell the aroma of the macha an while me an my brother went to look for cloths and we saw two people had a commotion that they want the same bed an she was stubborn as a mule for the bed. we went to build the bear workshopan we saw lots of teddy bear and I got to touch one of them an the teddy bear was furry. mmmmy mom got hungry an we went buy ham burger. Fliping the pattyand the patty hiting the gril made a sizzle sound an then we ate it .My sister went to JC Penny an got a baby blue shirt with white strip. My dad went to buy me a ice-cream cake for my birthday party. My mom went into the clock to buy me a clock for my birthday gift an it went tick-tock. My sister went scouting for some teddy bear for x-mas. My dad went to tools shoper to buy a mallet to finish the bird house.
Proudly we wer entering the mall. When I got in I saw alot of people going in and out the min shoe store I got a pair of shoes and then I went whith my mom to find clothes and finaly sttoped and she found a dress . We went to whith my bro to get wat he wants and wile we walked I saw a guy dropped a box and made a loud nois I got cold and I didint do any thig I was a frozen ice cub we all left home happly.
When I went to the mall with my family it was so busy. I got lost in the mall. But then I ended in front of foot locker. I saw some shiny red jordans. I liked them so much good thing i had some money so i bought the shoes. Suddenly, after I bought my shoes i heard a comotion? There was to guys fighting for shoes.During the fight they took everyone out the store.When I came out it was so loud there was kids whining everywhere! Then i found my family my sister was taking a picture with Santa Clause. After she took her picture we quickly left. Then we were hungry so we went to the food court. On our way over their isaw a long line i was wondering what it was for. I heard this guy say ”i claim this PS3.” So i went in i heard this loud sound ”boom.”. It was someone playing video games. After that my family was so hungry so we went to the food court. I got a nice cheese pizza.
“I like shopping because it’s fun and usally i would go to shop o buy clothes and,supplies.” If i want something so bad i rush to get it and then boom then i got it! The only reason why i like shopping is becausei need clothes. I extremely like there food because it’s good and it’s mouthwatering and, when i get thirsty i get some jamba juice. When i’am done i get me a treat a piece of candy and it is sweet as honey and then when i’am done i go home. why do i go home? because i’am tired.
Shopping at the mall is fun. Because I could tasts popcorn and pizza. And I could smell popcorn and corndog. Suddenly I saw a pair of shoes that I wanted. So I ask my mom to buy. Then she bought it for me. I was so happy I jump up and down. So I just bought her somthing. Then I heard a noise so I ask my mom. She said look around and you will find it. And it was a wheel from a popcorn machine. Then I grab it and gave it back to the guy who own it.
First, I ask my mom “where are we going?” she said “you’ll find out.”When I saw the store Isaw some juicy strawberry.Me and my mom went inside the store I smell delicous blue berries on the couter.Sudden ly,Itry to touch it ,it look like it’s poison.When we was done finding the holiday stuff I ask my mom “can buy some red strawberry’s?” she said “Usaully,I go to the store with my mom,sometimes she go to the store.I saw a bee buzz around me and the bee off like a fly.I heard cars making loud noise EESHSHPCOOOO BOOSH!at the street there was a car crash.I was ashamed of myself because Ididn’t where shoes in the store.