Use the “15” (-ly, -ing, where, “ “, !, ? 5 senses, simile, personification, onomatopoeia, descriptive adjectives)
I went trick-or-treating last night in my neighborhood. There were some scary houses to visit. (Describe the scariest) The best treat I received was ___________ (Describe it). I ran into some friends and we ended up going together. The full moon was out. When I got home, I fell asleep getting out of costume! (a.l.9-10)
Silently, I went trick-or-treating last night in my rich neighborhood. On the street, there were some scary houses to visit. The scary houses had people in bushes, ready to jump out and scare you, and they had webs on their houses! The best treat I ever received was a huge mint chocolate chip candy. It tasted like a jaw breaker. I asked myself “should I go to the next house?” When i went to the next house I ran into my friends and we ended up going together. The full moon was out. The moons eyes were starting at me. The moon was bright like a star. Driving home I was very tired. I fell asleep at home with my costume still on
Quietly , I walk in my scary neighborhood. It was a dead neighborhood.Do you think people are going to scare us ? ”No way,”said Tyler in his mind . I smelled a carmel sandy apple Oh My God! I saw my one and only carmel candy apple.When I tasted it ,it tasted so so good . mmmmmmmm! Down the street , the full moon was almost out and Hollween was almost over! I was supposed to beat my score of 50 houses and I only got 48 houses left. I need 3 more houses to beat my score and I only have 5 minutes left. I am finally done and I had beaten my score ! yes! Walking to my friend to take them home and started at my house. Finally I fell on my house floor. Bang!
Quietly, I went trick- or- treating in my nieghbor hood. I was very exighted because it was halloween and I went off track that day or should I say night. The scariest house that I went to was the house on Cardenas Way. It was so scary that it made my little brother cry and the scary thing about it was smoke was floating on the ground, you couldn’t see the ground. that wasn’t the scary part, the scary part was when scream was on the chair right out side his padio and you had to reach into the bucket to get the candy. Wgen I barely put my hand in the bucket and scream just yelled and pulled out a fake ax and wit fake blood on the ax.That was the best halloween I had ever
Quickly, I went trick or treating last night in my neighborhood. There were some scary houses and people scary too.The house has monster jump out the door and wondows.I ran to my friend house and “I said ” outside they wear scary clothing.My friend said can I go out with you?”I said”out there is scary.My friend let me go out with and I’m going home and I fell asleep getting out of costume.
Hopefully, I went trick- or-treating last night in my big nieghborhood. Terrifing ghosts pop-out of knowwhere. BOO! ‘Arggh” I yelled. ” Sorry man I didn’t know you were easy to scare ” he said walking away. There were so many scary houses to visit. Down the street I saw the scariest house ever! It was pitch-black color,with rusty looking windows, and black shades. The scariest part was the lawn it looked like a dead swamp. It was as green as a brand new color crayon. Who owns this house? O well I said. A hanging skeloton started to speak to me!!! “Hello there, how do you do? it asked. At first I thought it had batteries but I looked around it there was none! My favorite candy was the chocolate bar it smelled good it tasted delicous, it felt squishy. That was tasty. I saw my friends walking alone so scared them. I heard them sceam it was fun to scare someone.
Finally, I went trick-or-treating last night with my cousins. There were some scary houses that we went to. The scariest house we went to was the one we went into the backyard and it was really dark and you couldn’t see anything and monsters would pop out of nowhere, and once we grab candy out of the plate you would hear someone saying ”HAPPY HOLLOWEEN!” We all ran everybody started to luagh.Do you think that monster was real? It looked like a real monster to me. I kept on running because I was getting scared and I bumped into somebody. ”Is that you Crystal?”I said. We talked and talked and we end up trick-or-treating together. I was tinkerbell and my friend was tinkerbell too! We looked liked twins. So we got tired walking and so we sat on the grass. The full moon was out. Crystal and I saw a shooting star and we made a wish that we wanted alot of candy to eat and have! I said bye to Crystal and I went home. I changed into puppies pajama and fell asleep fast. Before I went to sleep I counted my candies, and I got 6,000 candies! My wish came true!
At night I wentg trick or treating in my neihborhood.
Then I got lost by making a wrong turn and my family wasn’t there. Plus I had to visit the scariest houses I have ever seen. I got a little scared some times. Cheerfully I thought about the best candy or treat I’ve ever gotten. That treat was the giant twix bar. Shivering I met some friends walking down the block so we ended up going together. (UNFINSHED)
In my neighborhood I was trick-or-treating. I went to a house with scellatons,gobllons,and giant spiders. Falling out of the air was a spider.Next a ghost that said,”your dooooomd”. boo! The ghost shouted.The door opened and we said,”Not finished.”
Last night, I went trick or treeting in my nighborhood. There were some feaky scary houses to go to.The scariest house was freaky. There were witches and monsters jumping out from every corner, bats flying out of no where, and if you take some candy from the bowl a hand will fall on yours. Carefully we would always try not to fall in the traps. We would also touch slimy goo and hear shreaking noises. In our neighborhood later on I saw some ghosts and monsters coming at me , but they were just my friends. I ask them to walk with me and so they did.It was also kind of funny because when a little kid see’s us they faint and we would hear a big, THUNK!The full moon was out and it was like a jack o lantern.(un finished)
Nervesly, I went trick-or-treating in my neihborhood. Visiting some of the scariest houses I came upon the scariest house I had ever seen. It looked like a house in the middle of a graveyard! Lights were flickering from inside the house. I saw dirt moving. Then something slimy held on to my foot! Out came my best freinds. We went trick-or-treating for a while. I looked up and saw a full moon. It looked like a scull as bright as the sun. When I got home I found an unopened bag of candy! “Boom!” I fellon my bed when I fellasleep takeing off my costume.