19 thoughts on “HWAS Wed. 08/18/10

  1. 1.Cancel- We had to cancel my sister’s birthday party because it was raining outside.

    2.Travel-When I’m older I want to travel around the world.

    3.Castle-My sister wants to be a princess and live in a castle.

    4.Salad-Last night we had salad with tomatoes,dressing,lettuce and onions.

    5.Catalog-When I went to the library I saw a catalog of piano books and fairytale books

    6.Cabinet-All of the right side cabinets are filled with food.

    7.Blanket-I use a warm blanket when I am cold.

    8.Tractor-When I went to a field trip to the farm,I saw a red tractor.

    9.Magnet-I put a magnet on the my whiteboard that has a picture of a monkey on it.

    10.Cabin-When I went camping we slept in a cabin.

    Cathy – Great Job! You get an “O” for Outstanding!

  2. the dog ran freely the dog ran freely in a big looptloop the dog ran freely in a big looptloop to the doghouse

    Andrew, thank you for doing your homework online. Make sure to capitalize the sentences and punctuate them. “The dog ran freely.”

    C – 70%

  3. the baby cried sadly the baby cried sadly for its mom the baby cried sadly for its mom in the crib

    Andrew, thank you for doing your homework online. Make sure to capitalize the sentences and punctuate them. “The baby cried sadly.”

    C – 70%

  4. the mother sang a nice song the mother sang a nice song and danced in the house

    Andrew, thank you for doing your homework online. Make sure to capitalize the sentences and punctuate them. “The mother sang a nice song.” Adjectives describes the noun. You haven’t described the mother. For example: The caring mother sang.

    C – 70%

  5. I washed my hair with shampoo

    Andrew, make sure to write all ten spelling sentences in ONE post so I don’t have to approve 10 separate comments, ok? Thanks! Mr. A (Don’t forget your periods)

  6. Language Arts-
    1. The dog ran.
    2. The black lab ran.
    3. The black lab quickly ran.
    4. The black lab quickly ran home.

    1. A baby cried.
    2. A small baby cried.
    3. A small baby cried loudly.
    4. A small baby cried loudly in it’s crib.

    1. The mother sang.
    2. The tall mother sang.
    3. The tall mother sang quietly to her child.
    4. The tall mother sang quietly to her child in the car.

    O – Outstanding! Equivalent to an “A”

    Spelling-
    Cancle- If it’s over 100 degrees outside then the soccer game will be cancled.
    Travel- When I go to visit my sister in San Diego we have to travel a long way.
    Castle- The prince in Prince Charming lives in a castle.
    Salad- I like to eat healthy salads with lots of condements.
    Catalog- You might order clothes from a clothes catalog if u dont buy online.
    Cabinet- My mom stores canned foods in the big cabinet.
    Blanket- When I’m cold at home i usually get in a blanket.
    Tracter- If you live on a farm you might use a tracter in the dirt.
    Magnet- My mom uses a magnet to hold papers on to the fridge.
    Cabin- When you go camping you might stay stay in a cabin.

    O – Outstanding! Equivalent to an “A”

  7. He sang very loud. He glanced at the man. the blank is warm. the activity is fun. I slept in a cabin on the floor. I have 99 magnet. thats a big castle. they travel alot.

    Remember when we practiced meaningful sentences Mr. Andrew this morning. You’re going to have to put a bit more effort. BUT I thank you for making the effort. For example:

    The warm blanket makes feel comfortable during the cold months of winter.

  8. 1.I cancel the trip so I stay with my family.
    2. I travel around the world to see differnt things.
    3. I want a magical castle to play in.
    4.We ate salad with your chicken.
    5.I order a box of shoes from the calalog.
    6.We have to many cabinet in are house.
    7.My grandma makes the blanket ever.
    8.Farmers like to ride there tractor.
    9. I stuck the magnet on the frezzer.
    10.I sleep in the cabin when we go camping.
    11.I read that king live in a palace.
    12.My teacher glance at people to see if we are doing good.
    13.I like to paddle when i am the pool.
    14.I sang a song to my family because my fimily like to hear me sing.
    15.I shampoo my hair in the shawer.
    16.In first grade my sister had a accident.
    17.I play activitys with my friends.
    18.My classroom is clean and cool.
    19.I was absent for four days in a year.
    20.I put a ballot in the box so i can have a class preisdent.

    Hi Tayla! Thanks for doing all twenty! You were only supposed to do the first ten. I’d give you a grade of “S” – Satisfactory because some of the sentences do not make sense and are not meaningful. I think you left out the word “best” as in “best blankets ever!” A more meaningful sentence might have been, “My classroom is where my teacher does most of his teaching.” It informs you of who works in a classroom and what that person does.

    An “S” = B- Good work!

  9. 1.The dog ran.
    2.The happy dog ran.
    3.The happy dog ran quickly.
    4.The happy dog ran quickly at the park.

    1.A baby cried.
    2.A hungry baby cried.
    3.A hungry baby cried loudly.
    4.A hungry baby cried loudly in the living room.

    1.The mother sang.
    2.The nice mother sang.
    3.The nice mother sang softly.
    4.The nice mother sang softly near the baby.

    O – Outstanding! Equivalent to an “A”

  10. 1.cancel-Don’t forget to cancel the newspapper for next month.
    2.travel-When we went to San Diego it was a long travel
    3.castle-I have never seen a real castle before.
    4.salad-I like to eat salad with my dinner sometimes.
    5.catalog-My mom has a catalog that I like to look at and pick stuuf that I want to buy.
    6.cabinet-When I help do the dishes I have to put them away into the cabinet.
    7.blankets over they have some blankets to sleep with.
    -My family has lots of blankets so that when company come
    8.tractor-
    9.magnet-I use a magnet to attract metal things and it is very fun and exciting
    10.cabin-In camp we had to live in a cabin because we didnt want to sleep with creatures.

    O – Outstanding! Equivalent to an “A”

  11. MR.Alfonso can you send my grades please thankyou

    Already? I don’t have enough to assign grades yet. Only individual grades for HW so far.

  12. thanks for telling me

    You’re welcome. Don’t worry so much kiddo. It’s only the first week of school.

  13. english-
    1.A dog ran.
    2.ADJ.-A flufy red dog ran.
    3.ADV.-A flufy red dog ran quickly.
    4.Where-A flufuy red dog ran quickly ran too the park.

    1. A baby cried.
    2.-ADJ-The little baby cried.
    3.ADV-The little baby cried loudly.
    4.Where-The little baby cried loudly at the docters office.

    1.The mother sang.
    2.ADJ-The beautiful mother sang.
    3.ADV-The beautiful mother sang loudly.
    4.WHERE-The beautiful mother sang loudly at her house

  14. 1.The dog ran.
    2.The big brown dog ran.
    3.The big brown dog ran fast.
    4.The big brown dog ran fast down the street.

    1.The baby cried.
    2.The baby cried sadly.
    3.The baby cried sadly in bed.
    4.The baby cried sadly in the bed sleep.

    1.The mother sang.
    2.The mother sang beautiful.
    3.The mother sang beautiful and loud.
    4.The mother sang beautiful and loud in church.

    “S” – Satisfactory. Equivalent to a “B” The last one for the baby didn’t make sense. The mother could have been described by an adjective. For example:

    The talented mother sang wonderfully in church.

    Overall, good work and thank you for doing your homework online! I removed your last name to protect your privacy.

  15. 1.Cancel- My mom said” a’shaun if you dont keep your room clean,i will cancel cable.”
    2.Travel- Me and my and family travel to San Cruz Broadwalk for vacation.
    3.Castle- Me and my sister build and sand castle at the park.
    4.Salad- We went to Denneys and my mom just order salad to eat.
    5.Catalog- I asked my mom, “Can we get the East Bay catolog to order jordans shoes?”
    6.Cabinet- I put canned foods in the cabinet where they belong
    7. Blanket- My blanket keeps me warm at night when its cold.
    8.Tractor- My Grandfather drives a tractor in his veatable garden.
    9.Magnet- My family has lots of magnets on our refrigator.
    10.Cabin- During Christmas time, my family stays in a cabin.

    O – Outstanding = A
    Thanks A’shaun. I removed your last name to protect your privacy.

  16. Our class walked to lunch.Our class walked a long time to lunch.Our class walked a long time to lunch with our teacher. MR.Alfonso graded homework online. MR.Alfonso graded homework online at home. MR.Alfonso graded homework a long time online at home. The seal claped its fins at the circice. The seal claped its fins a long time at the circicie.

    S – Satisfactory = “B-” Andrew, thank you for doing your homework online. Watch for your spelling and capitalization.

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