Write about something that happened when you were OFF-TRACK. Make sure to use sentence variety, 5 senses, onomatopoeia, etc. (a.l.10)
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Write about something that happened when you were OFF-TRACK. Make sure to use sentence variety, 5 senses, onomatopoeia, etc. (a.l.10)
On Thankgiving we built a huge statue made of wood. Inside the statue was nuts. Happily, we set the statue on fire.”Boom!” Chipmunks were running everywhere to get the nuts. In the woods,someone asked “why are chipmunks fighting?” When we got inside the house a possum went in and ate all the turkey. Then our cousins broght another turkey to eat. Then we all went to bed.
During, Thanksgiving I was at my dad’s uncle’s house. At his house there was another room where my cousins and I went in to watch T.V and play video games.It was also the Excercising room. Excercising, we would leave the door open to smell the delicous food from the kitchen. While I was watching T.V my uncle was coming in from the backyard and he ran into the door”Hahahahaha”we laughed. “Huh” my uncle said. When he came in from, he told us that dinner was ready. Quickly, we all ran to the dinner table and saw all the tasty food. Right when we touched the hand of the fork we started craving down food. After we were done eating we ate pie and pineapple. Then I relaxed because of the good food. Next I went in the excercising room and saw my cousins playing games, so I joined. It was a fun Thanksgiving!
While I was off-track I went to my cousin’s house to sleepover.Slowy, we got into the car and took off. We got there faster than I though Then we rapidly got out of the car and ran upstairs. Minding all noises we finished the game!”WOW, that was fast” I said. Later that day, we watched some T. V. and went to sleep. I fell asleep first. Then every one else. The next day we ate breakfast and went home. That was the best time ever!
While I was off track I had Thanksgiving dinner wiht my family. Usually, we go to my grandma’s house for Thanksgiving but, not this year. Makeing dinnerfor Thanksgiving is what we did, but we usually don’t. All of our food was an experiment because we’ve never done Thanksgiving dinner before. All of the food actually tasted good! It took us all week to finish it all. While it was cooking it all smelled and looked so delicous. When I heard the oven go “Ding” I was so eager to taste it I got realy hot! My mom’s two best friends came over with their two daughters. They all spent the night over at our house. We had lots of fun this Thanksgiving.
During Thanksgiving I went to my aunt’s house. When we got there my aunt had tables and chairs in the living room. We were the second ones to get there. I went outside and I saw a jumping house there were four boys inside. After ther was only one boy inside I went in.After evrey on gt there I played pixos with my cousin they are little balls that you can make shapes with them. Then my aunt from Santa Rosa came with plates and cups. My uncle made three fried turkys. They tasted well. My cousin and I asked my uncle if he could get the 14 boys off the jumping house. My cousin and me were th only little girls. The other girls were about 14-26. When it was about 11:00 P.M.my older cousins started to play chereoke they were dancing and singing. About 1:00 A.M. my anty got cramps. After she was all better my cousins started to get drunk exept my cousins that are younder than 18. My other aunt brought a cheescake with jelly and straberry. Before we left my mom asked if I wanted my cousin to come over, I told her “YES!” My cousin and I played Barbies,watched a movie,and plaed dolls. She left on Saturday.
While I was off track on Black Friday my family and I went to about four or five stores. First we went to Sam’s Club it was the best store that we went to. It had great refreshments. Then we went to Office Depot and it was packed we waited arond the building. Then waited a hour and a half to pay in line. After that store we went to Target and I bought some Camp Rock stuff. We had fun. Then we bought presents for Christmas for my cousin. after that we went to Rite Aid and my mommy got m&ms. She collects them. People said that at Wal-mart one man got trampled to death. So we didn’t go after we heard the bad news.
When I went off track I had alot of fun. we had an early Thanks Giving party on Saturday the 22nd and we had some good food that my grandmy grandma made. We had collard greens, fried turkey, and a bunch of other food that I cant even remember. We had a big SPONGEBOB JUMP HOUSE too and we played on it for a long, long, time. Half of my family was there. There were mostly my cousins and it was accualy my brothers birthday. When the early thanks giving party was over we went to my sisters mom’s house. But then that party was over we went over my mom’s and dad’s house 11:00 at night and had fun over there all night and every one left about 3:00am and we had alot of fun. The next day we were so tired that we didn’t even get to go to church. We usually get up about 5:30 every morning but not this time. After that thanks giving party my brother and I got up in the morning and went to go get pizza for lunch. When we were doen eating we went down stairs and went in side the heated pool and that’s the end of my BLOG.