I went to the Harvest Festival. Mr. Jelsma sang “I Like to Move It.” We laughed and had a great time. I bought a funnel cake topped with strawberries. I won a prize and gave it to my sister. My family had a lot of fun.
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Happily, I went to the Harvest Festival. Standing there, Mr Jelsma sang “I Like To Move It.” In the crowd, we laughed and had a good time. I bought a funnel cake and asked myself ” what topping should I get?” I decided I wanted chocolate, which was my favorite flavor. I won a prize and saw my sister and gave it to her. My family had a lot of fun.
Walking to the Harvest Festival my sister didn’t know is she could sing at the Harvest Festival. Kathryn said,” I would not sing at the Harvest Festival .”At the Harvest Festival Mr. Jelsma sang ”I like to move it.”Mr Jelsma made a mistake and everybody laugh so hard. We heard the mistake and laugh until I pee in my pants.”ahh ahh ahh ahh!”Should I buy a funnel cake? Buying the funneel cake the manager said it will be fifthten foot long and it is only cost one hundred dollars!I tasted the funnel cake and it tasted so great . mmmmmmm! I won a perfect prize for anyone but I seen my sister first and gave it to her. The teddy bear was so soft. My had a great time mostly me
Happily we went to the Harvest Festival. Singing “I like to move it” Mr Jelsma did an anouncement about the David Reses sweatshirts . At the Harvest Festival we laughed and had a good time . “Crunch Crunch Mmmm “, I said as I ate my funnel cake topped with straberries I bought. Proudly I gave my little sister a little baby Brat and a piece candy I won at the Harvest Festival. We had alot of fun!
Happily on Friday I went to the Harvest Festival . I saw a teacher named Mr. Jelsma sing ” I like to move it.” We ate a funnel cake with strawbarries on top . Kids were running like a lion was going after them . When are they going to anounce the winner for the poster ? ” Come on lets go to the playground,” said my sister. Going to the food area they anounced that I won the poster contest . When I got my prize I gave it to my sister . YAAAAA! my sister happy . My family had a geat time .
Happily, I went to the Harvest Festival. I heard and saw Mr. Jelsma sing “I like to move it” on stage! At the Harvest Festival we laughed and had a great time. I smelled funnel cakes. I asked my mom, “Can we have a funnel cake please?” She bought one, it was delicious, and you could taste the fresh strawberries. During the raffle I won a prize and gave it to my sister. My family had lots of fun this year.
I went to the Harvest Festiva.Mr.Jelsma sang”I like to move it.”We laughed and we had alot of fun.I going to buy food for my family.My family sit down and eat.My family said is so good.And I went to buy my brother prize.And my brother said it so pretty.He said thankyou for buy my prize.My family had a good day and fun.
Yesterday I went to the Harvest Festival at about 5:00 when it just let people in and we were allowd to wear our costume when. Nervously Mr. Jelsma sang ” I Like to Move it.” Snorting and smileing we laughed and had a good time. Then I got to buy a funnel cake topped with yummy looking strawberries. I won this cute prize wich was a Barbie Maripossa book and I gave it to my little sister who was three years old. My family said they had the best time of their life at the funnest place of Sacromento,California . So we went home took of our costumes and went to bed. That was the best night ever they all dreamed and said. So they dremt about candy and I dremt about flying on a broom stick because I was a witch for Halloween. I loved every minute of my dream.
At the harvest festival.Loudly Mr. Jeslma sang ‘ I like to move it’. Laughing like a hyena I had a good time. When I heard my mom say to go eat something I said ‘okay’
and I ate a cup cake. Then she said ‘ eat some real food’.So like a Cheetah spriting
I ran and got in line. Bam I tripped! ‘What did I tripped on’? Then I said ”That brown
stump. Then I felt I tasted grass. I saw people going to line I said ”noooooooooooooo
”. Then jumped in line and ran into the fence. But when I smelled the food I got some.
Finnally my dad get me to the havest fistival . i help the hammer whith a garden .I making clothing for tonight .toingt i went out to the shop . ”Let me have some food” . wow a talking stomuch .i know that i’m hungry . I and my family went to the food place to eat .we ordered food to eat , When we finshed eating and i went back to the shop . I smelt a pancake . then i go to the store being it , then i buy a honey pancake.Then i’m going to find the toy store to pinck some toy for my little sister and brother. When i finsh shopping . I and my family went to the show.I went to the place that have a lot of book and they have a test .iwon and i get a prize for my family .I bough something from the store . And at 5:30 i go home.
Happily, my whole family went to the Harvest Festival.Watching Mr. Jelsma sing “I Like to Move It” I laughed so hard that I fell off my chair.Later on I heard my stomach growl and smelled some funnel cake so I said “Mom may I have a funnel cake?” she said yes.I went to go get a big one and ate it.It was delcous , mostly the strawberries! Yumm! I grabbed a whole bunch of soft creamy cream and splatted it into my mouth. Splat! When I was done with my cake I went to go play a game and I won a monke that rapped around me like a snake.I gave it to my sister thogh because it was like a real snake, It squeezes me too hard.At the harvest Festival my family had a full barrel of fun!
Happily,my family and I went to the Harvest Festival.We arrived at the Festival around 3:15. Mr.Jelsm sang “I like to move it”,his singing was fantastic!As soon as the teacher finished singing “I Like To Move It”we started to laugh, playgames. and have a great time.I got a little hungry then suddenly, i smelled a something, and gues what my favorite ”funnel cake” I ask, Do you strawberry frosting?I could touch yhe delicious funnel cake.I ate it as fast as a VACCUM MACICINE!After that I went to the prize macine to get a prize and I won and I felt bad for my sister so I gave her my prize that I won I gave her a teddy bear.After hat we went home I HAD A BLAST
Exiedly, my family went to the Harvest Festival. The owner said who will sing “I like to move it”? Mr.Jelsma said”me me me pick me”.C’mon up Mr.Jelsma.Evreyone loved his singing so much they wanted him to join the singing contest at 5:30. He won the prize doll and gave it to his dog to eat.We bought a cake to celbrate the fun.We all had fun.