…your Winter Break. Was it a time with your family? Was it giving someone a gift or receiving one? Was there a family meal that was memorable?
(a.l.8) Use sentence variety, five senses, BUT also use an INTERESTING STORY STARTER (Something to catch your reader’s attention).
In Winter Break I went to spend time at my grandparent`s house, because we went to open our presents. Happily we play our new presents and my mom did some good breakfeast and it was good. In the afternoon we went to my cousin`s house, when we got there they just open thier prsents,our parents left and, an hour they came back to pick us up. So we got back home and eat a deliouse dinner. When we`r done on our dinner my auntie call to go to their house for a B.B.Q and it was a turkey. When we came back home we tired we rest for a bit and we went to sleep.
On Christmas break the most amazing thing happened. It was so exciting. When we opened the presents that was everyones, we were so worried of what it was going to be. But we knew it had to be something good because every year we get the most amazing presents. When we opened it we were shocked and very pleased. You’ll never guess what it was, it was a Wii and a Guitar Hero. Even though it was expensive they still got us more. We thanked them and we gave them the biggest hug they couldn’t even imagine of getting. The most important thing is getting love, and we surely did give them that.I really appreciated everything they gave me especially love.
It was a cold dark day and at 8:00AM, I opened my last, gift. I got the last thing I expected.The thing I always wanted a PS3 with a 120 gigabite hard -drive it was the most presious thing I had ever seen. It was lile time was frozen. The paper was rustling like lions roaring. It was the greatest gift ever!!!!!!!!!
It was a cold cristmas day. Everybody woke up with a smile on there face.We ran down stairs to the tree.all at the same time we opened our preasnts.when we were done ot was like a hurican hit the place.It was a big mess it took an hour to clean.
One early morning around 5:00 a.m. we were in a rush so we packed snacks and clothes. We were waiting for my uncle to show up so we can leave ammidealy. It was close to 6:00 a.m. and then he showed up. We were in a hurry to go to the snow. We got to the snow and we went up to go sledding. At the snow, I had a snow sled all ready and it was my turn so I sat and my dad pushed me. While riding down, the snow sled kept on turning around and when I reached the bottom it came to a ramp so I when it was still turning I was riding on it and I flew off my sled when I was on the ramp and I landed on my back. Then, I decided to go on the smaller on that my whole family was going on to. I slided dow and this time I didn’t turn but I went straight and when I reach the ramp, this time I didn’t fall off I fliped off the sled and landed on my back too. So thats what I did on my “Winter Break”
One day, at my grandma’s grandma house we wen’t there for Christmas. The things we did was cook food, played games, and open present.The thing we cooked was mash potato with gravey. My Aunty baked cake ,and cooked. My mom also made fruit salad. I tasteed it and it was good. Then my brothers and my cousons and I played games. The games we played was X-box 360,it was a long time playing with my brothers and couson.When I got tire I smelled the foodand it was so good. while
There was a moment I did during New Year’s Eve ,and that was when I went to my aunt’s house to eat. When my aunt gave me a tamale I wanted to take it suddenly. I was really hungry. I was the only one who got A TAMALE.
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