One day in Las Vegas there were two little boys who were only 5 years old named Khristian and Brennan. They had a big dream of what they wanted to become in life. Their dream was to become a superhero and everyone can remember when they die. But one day that dream came true.
“Give me back my purse you thief,” a old lady demanded.
“I will not give it back to you lady,” another person screamed. They yelled so loud that everyone can hear them even Brennan and Khristian heard.
That is when both of them came running outside seeing what the problem was.
They saw the old lady and she didn’t know what to do but yell, “Help!”
They ran to get the purse from him, but he was to fast for them.
So the boys asked for a taxi and told him,“Follow that thief that has a black hood on!”
They had caught up to him asked the taxi driver for his phone to call the police.
Just in time they grabbed the purse from him as soon as the police came and the boy knew the police. They were named Callie,Hali,Yasmin, and Lauren. The four of them was thinking since they had helped the lady get her purse back they should build a monument.
Before the project began, a committee formed to find a funding. So some people started to donate money for the monument, but the amount that the people donated was only a little amount of money. The girls persuaded Obama to come to Mt.Everest and explained their plan to him. Obama approved and the government was going to pay for it.
So when the president approved it they went to buy drillers, jackhammers,spinning tool to polish the surface, ropes to lower the chairs,paint, and dynamites.
First, the four of them drew a small model of Brennan and Khristian. Using their model they measured the key distance such of the width of the eye.Then, they multiplied each inch by 12 feet. Next, the girls strapped themselves onto board like bosun chairs and carefully ropes lowered the chairs and them in the correct position. They marked the important measurements with the paint.After, that they used dynamite in the places where the girls wanted some stone removed. When they were all done they thought it looked awesome but there was only one way to see if it was amazing and it was if the people loved it.
People started to come to Mt.Everest and took pictures of the monument and loved the work they had done. When Brennan and Khristian saw it they started to cry and thinking of what they did and was happy of themselves.
Like how named the charcters. Why did you name them Khristian and Brennan? We have something in common which is that I have a friend named Callie to.If you want to read more about me go to to the following: blogs.egusd.net/lauren18
I love your blog about how a old lady gets robbed. I made a story about how save a old lady, it’s on my blog. Have you tried making another figure in the story?
thank you
Thank you very much
I really like the fact that you used Callie, Yasmin, you, and I in your story!
thanks hali
thanks hali