On one Halloween night,there was two kids.They were twins and their birthday was on Halloween.One was named Lassie and the other one is Jessie.They wanted to do something special for their 13th birthday,so they went to an haunted house that was close by.As they went inside,they heard a noise coming behind them.It was the door getting close!It was dark,scary. Then,they saw a chair with a small table and there was a window next to it.Jessie push Lassie in front of him.He was to scary to go,but Lassie was no chicken.She walked toward to the chair and grab her twin brother hand to come with her.As they came two mummies came after them. Jessie scream like a girl and Lassie was scared at all.Jessie ran to the door and tried to open the door,but it was no used.It didn’t barge out.Then,three werewolves came.Lassie went next to Jessie and told her it was a prank.All the monster took off they costume and it was their friends. All of them laughed even Jessie.

         What are some cool information about the Sun?Well here are some.First,the Sun is formed about 4.5 billion years ago in the Milky Way galaxy.Also,a large flare happen every 11 year.Another fact is around three fourth of the Sun is hydrogen and the rest is mostly helium.Next,the Sun is not a solid object, but we can detect a visible surface. Also,1.3 million Earths can fit in the Sun.Lastly,the Sun is 93 million miles away from the Earth.Did you learn something new about the Sun?

There many ways to write a quality comment.First, be specific.Don’t put “cool blog!”,”I love this blog!”,or “this is super nice blog!”.Be specific about why you like the blog.Second, leave nice comments.There a lot of mean comments on the network and on the blog you be check by a teacher.If you wrote something mean they will email your teacher, so don’t write something mean to other students.Third, spell correctly.Others might not know what you are asking or saying.They might ignore it and will never reply to you.All in all, there a lot of different ways to write an quality comment.

                       My idea of making a monument began as a way so people can respect the hero.The monument was going to be on the St. George in Hawaii.The hero was a boy named Bobby.He risk his life to save his grandma from a fast car.The driver was running from the police, so the driver was driving super fast.The elder lady’s name was Mrs.Ryder.She didn’t see the car since she was blind and had no one to help her.

                       “Watch out!” screamed Bobby

                       But Mrs.Ryder didn’t hear.Then, he had to push him out of the way.He now at the hospital with his grandma.She alway come to visit and thanks him everyday, so I want to show everyone how great he is.Then I got other workers to help and we all started in fall.

                      First,I started a fundraiser.After a few weeks, a lot of people donate.We have over $100,000,000!Then,I drew and model,a 2D and 3D,and show the idea to the others who was also helping to build the monument.Next,We measure where everything was going to be like the eyes,mouth,nose,and hair.Finally,We got the tools for the build.Such as a jackhammers,dynamite,jet torches,and laser beams.Now, we had to build the monument.

                       We start with the head.The head was 50 feet for the length and 25 feet for the width.Some was working on the hair,and others was working on the eye,nose,mouth.I was making sure that everything was right and also help the one a confused on what to do.Then, we use the jet torches to polish the build.When we were polish, there’s was a lot was disagreements about making it perfect or not.

                       “Stop!I haven’t finish!” shouted one of the workers with a brown vest.

                        “Well hurry up!The boss say we need to finish!It been 2 years and told everyone it will be finished by next month.” responded another one.

                         “But, I need to make this perfect.” added the first one.

                         “What all the noise?” I asked.

                          Both workers had told me what happened.I had to choose to make it perfect or not.Both had gave me a good reason to do it or not.One told me if we didn’t make it perfect.Then, we could finish it early and have a break.Then the other told me that we should make it perfect because everyone and the little boy will be wowed by the monument.

                         I explained “If we make it perfect.Then,It won’t be finish by next month.Everyone was coming and I didn’t want make them sad.”Then one of the other worker who had hear us talking came and had a better idea.

                          “Why don’t we get more worker to finish the monument more earlier and better.” The worker added.We all agreed.While they started to make the monument more perfect, I had hired more workers.We used the jackhammer to drill some part and dynamite to blast away the big parts.Afterwards, we used jet torches to soothe the monument.After 2 years, the one million dollar project was done.

                        Today, nearly four million people come to Hawaii to visit the statue every year.It been in newspaper,books,and in students’ homework.Even the Bobby and his Mrs.Ryder  visit it every year.People are proud of the hero and the monument.