“Hey Melissa” I said.
“What ?”Melissa said.
“I changlle you in jumprope”I said.
“Why do I want to ?” Melissa said.
“Because, and pluse your going to lose !”I said.
“Oh yeah ?” Melissa asked.
“Yeah!” I said.
“Okay bring it on!”Melissa said.
“Hey Sarnia wanna be the person that said ready set start?”I said.
“Sure” Sarnia said.
“Ready set go!”Sarnia said.
“I can’t jump much longer” Melissa said.
“Well you did your best” I said.
“Thanks” Melissa said.
Good choice of music. I liked when Melissa said,”I Can’t Jump Any Longeeerrr!” HaHa 🙂
Hi Sarina, I con’t find any music , so I just put those music
I liked the differnt shots.
You were stumb;ing inthe narration.
REWRITE WITH BETTER SPELLING
I liked how the directors assistant was not in any shots. I think you could have spoken louder on your narration. 🙂
Yeah, your right I forgot to speak louder.Well, thanks for the comments.
I liked how Kathrine is so sassy,competitive,and mean.
I ment to do that but not on purpose. Well Thanks Rachel for the comment, too.
I liked the movie, it was well edited. In the front the narration was not fluent.
The director did a good job getting the da out of the shot.
The narration should of been louder.
This was edited well.
Katherine you’re movie was great ,but I think you should have spoken louder for your narration. I liked how you were so sassy and really mean. The acting was really great. The DA was not in any of the shots.
Good acting when the girl says she can’t jump anymore and falls down. I liked the winner congratulated the loser at the end.
It was alright but I like the music