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  1. You did great on using your expressions, but it was kind of boring because most of the shots were close-ups and over the shoulder shots.

  2. I liked the part when Rachel said “Like I said” to Khalia and it was edited well.=)But there were no over-the-shoulder shots or head shots or close-ups, there was only side view shots.=(

  3. I liked the expression. You should have fixed your lines before you made the movie.

    -Melissa

  4. Good movie, but there was too much pause for the dialogues after changing onto a different scene. Nice job!

    Naveen, I removed your last name to protect your privacy.

  5. Good movie, but there was too much pause for the dialogues after changing onto a different scene. Also, I think you should keep the background noise down so that we can hear the dialogue.

    Naveen, I removed your last name to protect your privacy.

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