It’s Kily here, and I will be telling you a little bit about myself. I have the best twin sister that I could ask for. First of all, I love the color pink. I have mainly pink clothes. Also my favorite subject is art, I would love to be an artist when I grow up. I love drawing or painting hearts. Drawing or painting heats help me remember to love my family members, even if some of them make me frustrated. Another subject I love is writing, especially if I get to write freely or whatever I want. I love writing because this helps me express myself through what I write. Sometimes what I write has to do with something that I am dealing with in real life. Also I can be really creative while I am writing. Maybe, I could be a kid’s book writer when I grow up. Until next time readers,Bye.
I love it, Akila! Keep it great. One recommendation I would make is to insert more commas, and use some transitions. I think it’s great. Keep it up. (insert heart emoji here)
thank for the recommendation
good job on your work I really like your blog it looks so beatiful nice work
thanks