Comments on: Power of One http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/ Changing the World One Person at a Time Thu, 28 Jul 2011 13:08:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Karen http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-334 Karen Fri, 11 Jun 2010 01:46:28 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-334 You guys look funny but good job You guys look funny but good job

]]> By: Creating Lifelong Learners » Blog Archive » Video in the Classroom Mini-Carnival #5 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-329 Creating Lifelong Learners » Blog Archive » Video in the Classroom Mini-Carnival #5 Tue, 08 Jun 2010 22:01:33 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-329 [...] Mrs. McKillop’s 4th grade classroom in Elk Grove.  Here is their award-winning movie, The Power of One. [...] [...] Mrs. McKillop’s 4th grade classroom in Elk Grove.  Here is their award-winning movie, The Power of One. [...]

]]> By: alisha http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-327 alisha Tue, 08 Jun 2010 18:23:08 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-327 I love your movies I love your movies

]]> By: Benjamin Y. http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-310 Benjamin Y. Fri, 04 Jun 2010 19:03:14 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-310 CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! I liked the movie you made, and the editing is perfect. Also the head room, you must have did alot of research on this movie. I think that's why your movie won!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! I liked the movie you made, and the editing is perfect. Also the head room, you must have did alot of research on this movie. I think that’s why your movie won!!!!!

]]> By: Mr. Needleman http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-295 Mr. Needleman Fri, 04 Jun 2010 18:42:47 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-295 Of course characters are more important than the music but I would disagree that the music isn't important. Music and sound effects are some of the most important ingredients in putting a movie together. Many congratulations on your award. I would encourage you to think about the music in terms of what emotion you want to express. I don't say that I don't like the particular song, I am saying that it doesn't quite fit what I think you are trying to express. The music sounds like it would fit an easy-going party lounge vibe. Through the writing of the movie, I think you're trying to express a serious/world-changing point...this is why I see a mis-match between the music and the video. The music is light-hearted and fun and the rest of the movie is serious and and worldly. My comments should take nothing away from your award. You worked hard and earned your accolades. However, these are my suggestions for making an even more effective next movie. Of course characters are more important than the music but I would disagree that the music isn’t important. Music and sound effects are some of the most important ingredients in putting a movie together.

Many congratulations on your award. I would encourage you to think about the music in terms of what emotion you want to express. I don’t say that I don’t like the particular song, I am saying that it doesn’t quite fit what I think you are trying to express.

The music sounds like it would fit an easy-going party lounge vibe. Through the writing of the movie, I think you’re trying to express a serious/world-changing point…this is why I see a mis-match between the music and the video. The music is light-hearted and fun and the rest of the movie is serious and and worldly.

My comments should take nothing away from your award. You worked hard and earned your accolades. However, these are my suggestions for making an even more effective next movie.

]]> By: kiori http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-293 kiori Thu, 03 Jun 2010 18:17:13 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-293 Dear Needleman I do not agree with your comment about t the music. The jusdges at the SEVA awards really like the music and so do I. Kiori Dear Needleman I do not agree with your comment about t the music. The jusdges at the SEVA awards really like the music and so do I.
Kiori

]]> By: dejanae http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-290 dejanae Thu, 03 Jun 2010 18:09:02 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-290 I do not think that was cool. The music doesnt matter it maters about the charcter traits I do not think that was cool. The music doesnt matter it maters about the charcter traits

]]> By: jasmine http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-264 jasmine Tue, 25 May 2010 20:38:37 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-264 Your students are great. Your students are great.

]]> By: adam http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-263 adam Tue, 25 May 2010 20:31:37 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-263 your class is smart and cool. your class is smart and cool.

]]> By: Mr. Needleman http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/2010/05/05/power-of-one/comment-page-1/#comment-254 Mr. Needleman Mon, 24 May 2010 20:16:58 +0000 http://blogs.egusd.net/powerofone/?p=84#comment-254 Maybe a voiceover reading the inspiring quotes instead of simply text on the screen would have been even more effective. Maybe a voiceover reading the inspiring quotes instead of simply text on the screen would have been even more effective.

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