Comments for Ms. Swanson's 5th Grade

Comment on Five Senses by Michael M. by Crystina A.

Crystina A. — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:34:53 +0000

Its great how you used you five senses. Thats is amazing how you did. Why did you use the five senses?

-From David Reese School

Sarina — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:34:29 +0000

That was a great poem. Now I remember how nature is nice.
Sarina from David Reese Elementry School

Khalia — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:34:06 +0000

I real good poem I had very read a pome that good. How did u learn to writ a poem like that?

Aleser — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:33:44 +0000

you use a lot I was
and a lot of verbs
it ryhmes and its
long id like it

Sarina — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:33:26 +0000

That was a great poem. Now I remember how nature is nice.

Benjamin Y. — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:30:43 +0000

Wow! This poem almost made me want to chew minty gum. This poem is really great.

Aleser — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:23:42 +0000

I like it’s good but its short,
it ryhmes

Melissa — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:23:10 +0000

I really like the first two sentences. I liked it because I really like nature.

-from david reese school

Rachel — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:19:09 +0000

I liked how you used your first and your last name for your poem.

Rachel — Tue, 23 Feb 2010 17:14:02 +0000

I liked how you described nature and how you think of it.