Five Senses by Michael M.

February 5th, 2010 | Poetry |

Nature is green.

It taste like fresh mint.

It sounds like quiet birds chirping.

It smells like like fresh air.

It looks like diferent leaves falling.

It makes me feel calm.

# Daniel R on 02.23.10 at 8:46 am

I really like this poem because it tells how nature is green. This a really nice poem are you going to be a poet one day.
# Rachel on 02.23.10 at 9:14 am

I liked how you described nature and how you think of it.
# Melissa on 02.23.10 at 9:23 am

I really like the first two sentences. I liked it because I really like nature.

-from david reese school
# Aleser on 02.23.10 at 9:23 am

I like it’s good but its short,
it ryhmes
# Benjamin Y. on 02.23.10 at 9:30 am

Wow! This poem almost made me want to chew minty gum. This poem is really great.
# Sarina on 02.23.10 at 9:33 am

That was a great poem. Now I remember how nature is nice.
# Khalia on 02.23.10 at 9:34 am

I real good poem I had very read a pome that good. How did u learn to writ a poem like that?
# Sarina on 02.23.10 at 9:34 am

That was a great poem. Now I remember how nature is nice.
Sarina from David Reese Elementry School
# Crystina A. on 02.23.10 at 9:34 am

Its great how you used you five senses. Thats is amazing how you did. Why did you use the five senses?

-From David Reese School

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