Resources
Jan 24th, 2010 by eettalfonso
FOR TEACHERS
Writing Program Outline
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FOR STUDENTS
Here are slideshows to enhance your writing courtesy of professional development from EGUSD EETT and the Area 3 Writing Project (A3WP):
Figurative Language
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Interesting Verbs
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Great Intros
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This is awesome Mr. Alfonso!
This is a sample intro paragraph for Great Intros:
“Click, whoosh, bang, thud!”
When Melissa opened the door for our teacher, the strong wind slammed the door into Mr. Alfonso’s face smashing his glasses into thousands of pieces. The thud was the sound of our teacher falling to the floor! At the same time, Melissa, one of our lightest students, was picked up by the wind and tossed into the rain. With no one in charge, what were we going to do?
It’s very nice ! so cool!!!!!
It is very nice.
I like the writing. Intresting!!!!
It was very kinds of you guy to do it !!! lot of people like it !
Very body eninjoy so people like it very very very very much !!
Good lucky on it !!!
The movies were awesome. lots of people likes it to.
The movie look like it was very hard to make.
Nice info
Like how you put behind the scenes for the top.
The CST movie inspired me to not eat donuts and made me have more confidence in myself.
Thank You for showing me the video
Yay! No more donuts!
No more donuts it makes you think weird
You guys thought of stuff that i didn’t expect to happen in the CST movie. Nice surprise
It’s intresting how you put the script -_-
I love your info on your writtings
Love the pics
I relly liked the CST movie. I liked the part when one of the zombes grabed a tissue and snezzed!!! It was relly funny in a good way. I think it was relly life like when there was a souned of the window breaking!!!
I like the movie the CST testing it’s very funny ! It cool ! Thank you for all the movie . Mr.Alfonso I now no more donut !
i love the cst movie it was awsome and really great i love that movie
I think all of the other movies were funney too!!! They were so cool and I wish I was in a movie!!!
It must have taken you guys a long time to make a movie. You guys did a great job! -_-
Four days of shooting video.
i love your movies there so great and i love how you put all your students in there
It was nice of u guy to do it ! It was very good to do the movie . So people love to watch it !
I think you guys should have like 100 million rates. -_-
I think you’re getting us there James.
I think you guys should have like 10 million rates. -_-
I think they were doing a good job at making all the movies!!! You can tell they were a hit because a lot of people go on our blog.
As you can tell I can say thet every one loved it!!! You can also make more movies about going to the next grade.
Mr.Alfonso is the best teacher at making movies!!! He is relly realistic.
It’s awsome !
So many people like your movies. They also like the sounds of the movies.
We love your guy movie .
Love your blogs . I love the CST testing . It’s very funny and cool .