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Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Antone

Antone — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 22:26:13 +0000

What is the flow of blood through the heart? First it goes through the veins to the heart. secondly it goes to the left atrium and then the left ventricle and to the lungs it exchanges Co2 and oxgen. Then the right atrium and then the right ventricle. then the Adroan to the artries

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Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Zeontra

Zeontra — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 22:24:54 +0000

What is the flow of the blood through the heart. The vein is blood vessel that carries blood back to your heart. A capillary is the smallest blood vessel. Capillaries have very that carries blood

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Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Cherish

Cherish — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 22:24:15 +0000

cherish says: In the body the veins thats connected to the heart it carries the blood to the heart. Next it goes to the right atria then it goes to the right ventricle. Then

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Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Mai

Mai — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 18:09:55 +0000

Veins go through our hearts,then the right atrium receive bloods from two large viens.After that it flow blood in to the right ventricle,the pump out throught the pilmonary artey lead to the lungs,ang exchange CO2 and O and the left atrium receive blood from the lungs.Blood flow into the left ventricle.Then pump out through the heart with artery aorta,and the incomplete

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Antone

Antone — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 18:06:27 +0000

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Reeha

Reeha — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 18:03:31 +0000

First the blood is in the veins filled with carbon dioxide. Next the blood goes through the heart into the right atria , then it flows to the right ventricle down to the lungs. Then CO2 exchanges with oxygen. Then it goes through left atria to the left ventricle and lastly it goes through the arota into the atreis.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Anthony

Anthony — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 18:01:56 +0000

The veins flow through the heart. Second the blood goes to the right atria. Next the blood goes to the right ventricle. After the lungs exchanges carbon dioxide with oxygen. Then the blood goes to the left atria. Then to the left ventricle. Finally the blood flows to the aorta and arteries. It is going to leave your heart and it will start all over again.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by eettalfonso

eettalfonso — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 17:49:08 +0000

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by Rajanae

Rajanae — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:12:56 +0000

Older stars cool and start collapsing.They shrink down to about the size of a small

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Comment on When Stars Get Old… by jayden

jayden — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:12:17 +0000

Some stars keep growing and then shrinking. and the stars to a variablestars. and they get bright. and at other times INCOMPLETE

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by antone

antone — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:11:57 +0000

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Ignacio

Ignacio — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:11:57 +0000

What is the flow of the blood through the heart. The vein is blood vessel that carries

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Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by reeha

reeha — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:10:55 +0000

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Adrian

Adrian — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:08:40 +0000

Veins brings blood to the heart. The blood goes to the Right Atria. After that the Right Ventricle to the lungs. The lungs exanges CO2 for Oxygen. It goes through the Left Atria and the Left Ventricle to the Aorta. Finally, the Arteries come out the body then starts all over.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Anthony

Anthony — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:05:22 +0000

Th veins flow through the heart. Second the blood goes to the right atria. Next the blood goes to the right ventricle. After the lungs exchanges carbon dioxide with oxygen. Then the blood goes to the left atria. Then to the left ventricle. Finally the blood flows to the aorta and arteries. It is going to leave your heart and it will start all over again.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Rajanae

Rajanae — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:59:47 +0000

First,the veins bring blood to the heart.Next,it brings the blood to the right ventricle.Then,it goes to the right atria.After that it goes to the lungs.Right after that it exchanges Carbon Dioxide with Oxygen. Next,it goes to the Left Ventricle.Then,it goes to the Left Atria.Last,it goes to the aorta then to the Arteries.Then it goes to the body.From the body it goes to the veins.

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by reeha

reeha — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:57:11 +0000

When stars get old many things can happen to them. When stars become ten billion years old they start to run out hydrogyen fuel. Then they collapse upon and then they pop and become hundreds of times larger. They then become red giant stars. A red giant star is 40 to 50 million miles across. Some old stars keep growing then shrinking. These are called variable stars. Other old stars shoot out gas . These stars are called planetary nebulas. Finally old stars start cooling and collapsing. Then they become white dwarf stars. Then they start cooling off and then they are dead. Sometimes white dwarfs suddenly explodes and becomes a nova. Much rarer are the super novas. Supernovas shatter and leave behind wispy gases of a nebula. Sometimes old stars become black holes. They become black holes when gravity squeezes and squeezes and then they finally dissapear and become a black hole. Thats what happens to stars when they get old.

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by Brittney

Brittney — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:56:18 +0000

When a star gets old it turns into a black hole. When a star collapses, it becomes special. The star is crushed together by a huge weight of the collapsing gases. Gravity keeps squeezing and squeezing until the star seems to disappear. Most of the stars are old and they stay together for the rest of their life. Some older stars go through a stage where they keep growing and then shrinking. Those particular stars are called variable stars because at times their light and other times they are dim. Other older stars shoot out a big cloud of gas into space. Those stars are are called planetary nebulas because through low power telescopes they look like round planets. Older stars cool and start collapsing. They shrink down to about the size of a small planet and are called white dwarf stars. As the white dwarfs slowly cool off they become black dwarf stars. Then the stars are dead and turn into a black hole. White Dwarfs could become novas and then supernovas. Supernova could become a neutron star, neutron stars are tiny, packed, tightly, and heavy. Novas are exploded white dwarfs. A rotating neutron star is called a pulsar.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by jesus

jesus — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:46:59 +0000

The vein carries blood to your heart and the heart pumpes blood into your right atria. Then into the right ventricle. After it goes into your lungs the switch oxygen for carbon dioxide. Next it goes through the left atria. Then through the left ventricule . Finally the vein carries blood back to the heart and it begin all over again until you die.

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by Eric

Eric — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:45:49 +0000

While most stars start out the same was and get to their middle aged years, as they get older several possible outcomes may happen. When stars get older they become colder and they begin to run out of their hydrogen fuel. Some old stars collapse and get hotter and hotter. When they explode they are considered Red Giant Stars. Older stars sometimes are bright and sometimes they are dim and thats why they are called Variable Stars. Other old stars shoot out a large cloud of gas into space and they are called Planetary Stars. Mostly some older stars cool and start to collapse. They will become smaller and smaller, then they will become White Dwarfs. Later, White Dwarfs explodes and becomes much brighter, we call that a nova. Things that rarely ever happen are gigantic explosions called a Supernova. A Supernova flares up and becomes millions of times shinier. Some Supernova stars shatter entirely leaving behind only the wispy gases of a nebula and some Supernovas leave a small tiny packed particles called a nuetron star. When a nuetron star is rotating it is called a Pulsar. When such a massive star cools and collapses, it is something very special. It is smushed together with the huge amount of weight of the collapsing gases. Gravity keeps crushing and crushing until the star seems to have vanished, then the star is now a Black Hole. A Black Hole’s ability is that if anything passes near it, it will be completely sucked in by the Black Hole, including light. Once anything that was pulled in by the Black Hole, it can never get out again. In conclusion, many things can happen to stars once they get older and older.

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by Devan

Devan — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:44:13 +0000

When stars get old, many things can happen. Most older stars go through this stage where they grow and then shrink. They are called variable stars. It is called that because sometimes they’re really bright and dsometimes they’re not as bright. Older stars shoot out a gas to space. Then they shrinkinto a small plant called white dwarf stars. As they cool off, they become black and die. Sometimes a white dwarf star explodes and is way brighter. It is called a nova. A nova is much more rare than a supernova, or gigantic explosion. Some supernovas break down completely, leaving behind of a nebula. There are larger stars than normal. When a massive star cools off and collapses, it becomes special, and gravity squeezes the star until it’s gone. Then it becomes a black hole. When something gets too close to a black hole, it will get pulled into it and never get out. Even light can get trapped in a black hole. Some supernovas shatter completely into a neutron star, a tiny tightly packed particles and is very heavy. From a neutron star you get a rotating neutron star called a pulsar.

Comment on When Stars Get Old… by Destiny

Destiny — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:34:46 +0000

Several things can happen whena star gets older. The older stars can be called a variable stars that sometimes bright and dim. most of the stars are called planetary nebulars that shoots out large amount of gases. They also can become a nova and a supernova. Some supernovas canend up becoming a tiny packed particles tightly heavy. A roating neutron staris called a plusar star. You have to be a older star and a massive star tobecome a black hole. A white dwarf star canturn blackand become a black dwarf star and die. Most white dwarf stars explodes and becomes much brighter. The gravity squeezes and squeezes the star. This is what happens toa star when they get older.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Eric

Eric — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:29:22 +0000

First, the blood that is filled with Carbon Dioxide travels through the veins. Secondly, it goes through the Heart and next the blood gets put in the Right Atria. Later, it goes into the Left Atria. Then, the blood meets the Lungs and it exchanges Carbon Dioxide for Oxygen. Next, it is dumped into the Left Atria. Later, it enters the Left Ventricle. Lastly, it is in the Left Ventricle and it leaves through the Aorta. Finally, it exits through the Arteries and it returns to the body.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Devan

Devan — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:21:33 +0000

First the carbon dioxide in the blood goes through the veins into the heart. It goes into the right atria down to the right ventricle. Next it goes down to the lungs and goes through this process called diffusion. Then the carbon dioxide exchanges with oxygen. The oxygen goes to the heart into the left atria and down to the left ventricle. Last it goes through the aortaand the arteries then it goes through your whole body and starts all over again.

Comment on How Does Blood Flow Through the Heart by Destiny

Destiny — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 20:16:54 +0000

It starts out at the veins and brings blood to the heart. While in the heart it goes to the first chamber that is called your right atria and goes to your left ventrical and it leaves your heart. After they leave the heart it goes to your lungs and exchanges carbon dioxide for oxygen and goes your left atria. After the visit from the left atria it goes to the left ventricle and leaves the aorta. It gets out from the anteries and start allover again. This is how blood flows around your body.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Breanna

Breanna — Fri, 16 Sep 2011 04:10:47 +0000

Dear Jess,
I just wanted to thank you for being such a good friend. I also wanted to thank you for helping Bill and I with the house. You’re like a brother to me because you’re always nice to me. The day I went into the bathroom with Jance Avery I thought I was going to get beat up. After I found out why she was crying I started to feel bad. Are you ever going to paint Tereibthia. But still thanks for being such a good friend. Talk to you soon. (: ):
Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Kyle M.

Kyle M. — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 21:40:28 +0000

I am leaving this message for the all the students of David Reese in the year of 2012-13. I hope that the entire school can hear what I have to say. My name is Kyle and I am in seventh grade now. I used to go to David Reese and it was great; students, teachers, staff and all. All students should expect to learn alot and have fun while doing it. All the teachers there all tought well too. All the staff did their job well too. once again, this was Kyle and everyone at David Reese is and hopefully will be doing their best!!!

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Breanna

Breanna — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 17:02:04 +0000

Dear Jess,
I just wanted to thank you for being such a good friend. I also wanted to thank you for helping me and Bill with the house. You’re like a brother to me because you’re always nice to me. The day I went into the bathroom with Jance Avery I thought I was going to get beat up. After I found out why she was crying I started to feel bad. Are you ever going to paint Tereibthia. But still thanks for being such a good friend. Talk to you soon. (: ):
Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on What Kind of Tax/Act are You Going to Endure? by Ashuan

Ashuan — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 17:00:43 +0000

The tax that I would endure would be the Stamp Act because of these reasons . One reason was because I think it is fair to pay taxes on papper , and card games . The second reason was because once you pay your taxes on your item the British won’t brother you any more. And those are the reasons I would endure the Stamp Act the most.
The tax I would not endure would be the The Townsend Act and the cociiive Act . The Townsend Act you would have to pay tax on glass , tea , paint , paint , and papper. What I think is the worst is the Coercive acts because people were coercived or forced to obey the laws.:)

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Nicole Y.

Nicole Y. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 17:00:12 +0000

The first most important thing I leanred this year was that everything we do affects our future. The choices we make all lead up to our future. In school, we have to make good decisions that will lead up to not only the next grade but middle school, high school, and for most college. And not only in school, in life.

The second most important thing I learned this year was that friends are important. The friends we make show who we are and what are personalities are like. School also wouldn’t be as fun without friends to keep you company and make you laugh. Friends are a very important part of who we are.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Ashley V.

Ashley V. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:58:34 +0000

The most important thing I learned this year is when Mr. Alfonso talks about our future. The thing that I learned is that you have get through school to have a good education to support your family.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Ignacio

Ignacio — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:57:57 +0000

What was the most important lesson you learned this year?

I remeber the math lesson when you talked about the video!

I also remeber when you talked about collage and the future.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Ashley V.

Ashley V. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:57:10 +0000

    ” The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the colonies. The promblem is that the Marquis de Lafayette needs more information about the redcoats. The three main characters are James Armistead, Marquis de Lafayette and Lord Cornwallis. Before James was a spy he was a slave.
Marquis de Lafayette needed more info. about the redcoats. Lafayette needed a spy so James Armistead volunteered to spy for Lafayette. A 21 years old slave named James Armistead volunteered to spy for the colonists. Lafayette excepted him as as spy. James went and pretended to be their slave. He pretended to help the redcoats. the redcoats didn’t even notice that he was a spy. One time they almost caught Benedict Arnold but he got away.
     Now James work for Lord Cornwallis. James would listen to the redcoats plan and he would pretend not know what they’re saying. He would tell other african americans and within a few hours Lafayette will know the news. All of a sudden the redcoats disappeared. Nobody knew where they went. One day Lafayette’s mens found out where they were. They were in York town. Lafayette’s mens watched the redcoats. Lafayette wrote letters to George Washington.
     The war started between the redcoats & the rebels. After a few days Cornwallis surrendered. One day when Lord Cornwallis went to see Lafayette he saw James Lafayette Armistead. After the war Lafayette wrote of nice work of james A. L. . James went to see the general of assembly and ask to be freed, They agreed.
     In conclusion the problem was resolved because Cornwallis surrendered. The person that changed is James Armistead Lafayette because he was a slave in the beginning and a freed man in the end. The lesson that I learned is that you have to work hard to get something that you really earned for it.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Aijanae

Aijanae — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:56:42 +0000

What was the most important lesson you learned this year?
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The most important lesson I learned was learning how to add and subtract fractions and decimals. And learning how to write more than two paragraphs. Learning how to check on things you would need for your house. And learning ELA & Science. I’d like to thank you, Mr. Alfonso for teaching me how to do these things.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Cheng

Cheng — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:55:46 +0000

1#A tips for a spy is that you don’t lit them see you.
2#The next step is that you have to be fast like a ninjia.
3#The third step is that wierd black clothing.
4# The four step is that you sould just lie to them that you are a hleper In conclusion,tis is how you be an spy

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Joshua

Joshua — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:55:22 +0000

The most important lesson that I learned this year was the one about Movie Making because I think it is important to edit a movie because it makes the movie way better. Plus , just making a movie would be cool but, if you edited it makes it 100 times better and it makes it ever cooler if you did special effects to the movie.

Comment on What Kind of Tax/Act are You Going to Endure? by Ignacio

Ignacio — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:53:57 +0000

The tax that I would endure would be the Stamp Act. One reason was because I think all the other act where to much.The second reason was because once you pay your taxes on your item the British won’t bother you any more. And those are the reasons I would endure the Stamp Act the most.

The act I would not endure would be the The Townsend Act and the Coerive Act. The Townsend Act you would have to pay tax on glass , tea , paint , paint , and papper. What I think is the worst is the Coercive acts because people were coercived or forced to obey the laws.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Elexis

Elexis — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:49:46 +0000

My first most important lesson that I learned this year is that making movies is easy but not to easy because you have to do work. The work you have to do is write a scrips, write and draw a storyboard. Also you have to stay in character at all times and always keep focus so you can finish faster and so that you can show it and/or put it on the internet.
My second most important thing is that you can’t learn if you don’t have fun in Mr. Alfonso’s class.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Serena

Serena — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:41:02 +0000

1. One important lesson I learned is that you should finish school and get a good education so you can take care of your family when you get older.
2. I also learned that making movies is easy but sometimes hard. And in order to make your movie you have to make a script and storyboard.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Ignacio

Ignacio — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:35:28 +0000

1) Go into the camp and work for them.
2) Listen to them and pretend that you don’t understand.
3) Let them trust you then steal there secerets.
4) Never leave any information that you are a spy.
5) Stay in the camp for a month until you return.
6) DON’T GET CAUGHT.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Zoaela

Zoaela — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:31:11 +0000

Tips For Spys
1: You have to always have a hiding place because you may get caught.

2: You are not to be seen our you will be hung.

3: You should always have backup because if something happened to you the other man can run back and till what happened to you.

4: Don’t goof around or you will be caught.

5: Don’t get caught at all.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Breanna

Breanna — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:27:06 +0000

The most important lesson was that you have to think about your future. Decide to make good choices and get a good education and later a good job.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Justin

Justin — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:21:09 +0000

The most important lesson I learned was to treat everybody with respect and to never give up on my dreams.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Serena

Serena — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:20:54 +0000

    The story ” Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in different colonies. James Armistead is a 21 year old slave and is a spy for the patriots. Cornwallis is a leader for the british troops. Lafayette is in charge of a troop for the patriots. The british might be the first ones to surender.
    James went to the redcoats leader & served as a servant so he can overhear their plans & ideas. The redcoats thought that James was a trustworthy person. He was reporting news daily & it was hard for Lafayette. Lafayette and his men camped near the redcoats so they would be able to steal maps. James was staying in the redcoats tent. And he would pretent like he didn’t hear anything they said and reported it to Lafayette. Cornwallis sailed somewhere but, no one knew where. Lafayette’s men knew Cornwalliss’s men went to yorktown.
    Lafayette moved closer to the british. The commander told the frenchman to hold cornwallis and his army and to never let any of them go or escape. George Washington and the frenchmen marched south by land, while french fleets sailed to chesapeake.
    Lafayettes army could only hold cornwallis in place. The french fleets defeated the british warship’s & if they sailed to NewYork. Washington and Rochambeau reached williamsburg where Laffayette welcomed them. American and french armies went to yorktown and surrounded the british villiage.
    The British never found out that James was a spy for the patriots. At first the patriots were american and now the are just american. One thing I learned is sometimes if you want somthing you have to work hard to get it.

Comment on Last Thoughts… by Jasmin C.

Jasmin C. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:20:16 +0000

What was the MOST important lesson you learned this year?
The first most important lesson I learned this year was that you should just be yourself, and not somebody your not. If your “friends” don’t like you for who you are, then they are not REALLY your friends. So, just be yourself & then life will go so much easier.

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The second most important lesson I learned this year was that you need to be able to take care of you & most importantly your family. If you don’t study or get a good education, then your family might be in danger! So always be thinking about your future, because one big mistake can mess it up for you, your family, and your future.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Ashley V.

Ashley V. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:10:52 +0000

Dear Jesse,
I am writing to you today to bring back some memories. I am so glad that your my best friend. Jess do you remember when we were building the tree house in Terabithia. You’re like a brother to me because you’re always nice to me. We always have fun together. Hey do you remember when we wrote that letter to Janice Avery and she was crying in the bathroom and I was the one who had to go talk to her. Now I fell bad for writing her that letter. I can’t believe she fell for it though. LOL! Jess I know that you like Ms.Edmunds by how you react to her when your around her. Okay change subject. Jess I like your paintings. Could you paint us as best friend or something? Thanks. Also thanks for giving me P.T. Jess I think that whenever were not busy we could go paint the tree house. Do you remember when I won the race and beat you boys it was so much fun racing. Church. I really enjoyed going to church with you guys because I got to experience your church ways. I had fun. thanks for being my best friend.
Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Elexis

Elexis — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:10:35 +0000

The story “Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the colonies. James was a slave and now is a spy for Marquis de Lafyette. Marquis de Lafyette is a frenchman that helped the Patriots. The problem is that M.D.L., James, and George Washington are fighting with the British.

James went to the redcoats leader & servent so he could spy on them. He reported news daily and it was hard for Lafyette. Lafyette and his men camped by the redcoats because they couldn’t steal maps. James was staying with the redcoats and would act like he didn’t know anything. Then he would soon report back to Lafyette.

Lafyette moved closer to the British. The commmander told the frenchman to hold Cornwallis and to make sure he didn’t escape. George marched south by land sailed to Chesapeak. James Armistead asked for his freedom and was eventually declared a free man. His master was granted a payment for the loss of his slave/worker. James Armistead also started calling himself James Lafayette. When he got older he got paid even more money.

Saul Mathews, another spy, was also important. He transferred information that helped win the war as well. He did was granted his freedom too. Antigua was also a very important slave who became a spy. He gave the Patriots information as well. He though did not gain freedom, but his wife and her child were. H e continued to be a slave for the remainder of his life. Another spy Quaco, also a former slave, helped win the war by bring information. Quaco was not a volunteer. In fact he was sold by his master to the government and made a spy. Quaco was freed just like Mathews.

Who was once only a slave became a free man do to his work as a colonial spy. James Armistead Lafayette risked everything for his country. He was very important to making this country. I learned that you have to work to get a reward, James worked and he got his freedom. Basically, if you want something you have to earn it.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Joshua

Joshua — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:05:45 +0000

Tips for Spies:
1. When the enemy is talking about plans pretend you have no idea what they are talking about.
2. Don’t let the British know or supect that you are on the other team .
3. Don’t let the British know that you are sending info. about their plans.
4. Be careful of what you do.
5. Do not tell anyone that you are a spy.
6. What ever they say don’t tell their who you work for.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Justin

Justin — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:03:20 +0000

Tips for spies
#1 Go in,work as a servant.
#2listen but not to much so its not obvious.
#3 Act like you dont know what there talking about.
#4 Your going to have to lie sometimes so you dont get caught.
#5 Be trusted so your not suspected.
#6 And the last one,dont leave a trace of you spying on them.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Dillon

Dillon — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:02:30 +0000

An African American slave James Armistead age twenty one wondering if joining the patriot army. James went to be a spy at the Arnold camp and acted like he was on there team and Messengers went out to lafayette daily about what you saw. James reported to Lafayette about death was now greater and his work got harder.

He spent so much time in the tent with Cornwallis he was certaintly a trusted servant . When the British would talk about plans james would pretend that he did not understand but he heard that a fleet of sailing ships had come to anchor in the bay. So now Lafayette’s scouts learned the enemy’s secret.

The Battles of the Revolution was over. When Cornwallis looked up to see the Familiar face of James Armistead but he wore a American Uniform James he continued to work as a slave after the war but at least he asked the leislature for help and grant ” Full Liberty” during the End of the War.

We will probably never learn more of the work of black spies during The Revolutional War but it is certain that these secret services were so valuable that without them the struggle for the country’s independence might have lost.

Comment on A Conversation with Henry Wadsworth Longfellow by Jasmin C.

Jasmin C. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 16:00:55 +0000

Me: ” Hello, Mr. Longfellow. How are you?”
Hry: “I’m good”
Me: ” Great. Okay. We are to talk about your poem.”
Hry: “About how great it is !”
Me: “Yes, it was. Why did you lie?”
Hry: “What do you mean? It is all true.”
Me: ” No! I mean Paul Revere never made it to Concord because he got caught.”
Hry: ” That’s true, but the only one.”
Me: ” Your poem made Paul Revere a folk hero for generations.”
Hry: “Well….”
Me: “So why did you lie about Paul Revere?”
Hry: “Because I wanted it to be more interesting. To me it sounded very boring.”
Me: “Maybe to you, but not to others!”
Hry: “That’s true.”
Me: “Yup it sure is.”

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Elexis

Elexis — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:59:56 +0000

Dear Jess,
Our friendship has been really great! All of the times we’ve been into Terabithia, was really fantastic especially when you tried to put your feet in a Kings shoes. You are full of great ideas like when you gave the idea to write a letter that was from “Willard Hughes” to Janice because she took Maybelles twinkies.That really made me feel good because we finally got her back but at the same time i felt like we were doing the wrong thing. You have tought me a couple things. One thing is to always be there when a friend needs help with something. remember you have some gifts so you should shazre them with other people. Thanks for being such a great friend! I am soglad that we moved here because if we didn’t I wouldn’t have such a fantastic best friend like you. See you soon.

Sincerely your best friend,
Leslie

Comment on Tips for Spying by Ashley S.

Ashley S. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:58:05 +0000

Tips for Spies
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#1 Serve as a servent.
#2 If they want you to be a spy on your team be calm & come up with a plan to act like you’re really getting information for your enemies from your team.
#3 Always go in and play along like you’re trying to find something but make sure you get all the information you need.
#4 Act like you didn’t hear a word at all.
#5 Make sure they don’t know you’re on their enemie’s side.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Joshua

Joshua — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:55:12 +0000

There is some thing in the past that I wish I could change like when I went to the Art Gallery with Miss Edmunds. I meant to invite you but I got so excited when Miss Edmunds invited me. I really wish that I could of asked Miss Edmunds for you to come too. And the worst part is that I thought about it when I was about to go with Miss Edmunds to the Art Gallery. Before you got here I had no friends and school was not fun but when you came to this school and became my friend it was like I was reborn into a whole nother world. It was just so much fun to be around you but now it just wont be the same without you at school and it wont be fun without you. The most memories was when we went to Terabithia. It was really cool being the king and you were the queen which means it be the same without a queen.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Cathy

Cathy — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:53:37 +0000

Tips For Spies
1. You should always be known as someone trusted.
2. Stand closer to them while they speak.
3. Is to be careful while sending messages.
4. Pretend you don’t understand what they are saying.
5. You should be careful of not revealing what side your on.
6. You should be careful if anyone is following you.
7. You would have to deliver the message to one person and the person passes it on until it gets to the person you want it to.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Ashley S.

Ashley S. — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:53:15 +0000

Dear Jesse,
Thank you for being my friend sine day one. I appreciate it. My favorite moment of us, is when we went to Terabitha and became Queen and King. The adventure and all sorts of fun we had are all the memories I’ll keep forever. You’re like my bestfriend because when i was new in town you stood up for me when Gary Fultcher was saying mean things to me. I thought I’d never have a bestfriend, but you proved me wrong. You know I’d always tell Bill about you and he said I have a great friend and that’s true! Miss Edmunds is a very nice teacher and I knew she ws a kind teacher from the start. You should really talk to Ms.Mysers. She’s nice just like Miss Edmunds. One last thing, You’re a hard kind of friend to find, and I’m happy I met you.

Sincerly,
Ashley S.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Josh

Josh — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:46:15 +0000

Your friend,
Jesse

Comment on A Conversation with Henry Wadsworth Longfellow by Breanna

Breanna — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 15:45:51 +0000

Bre:”Hello Mr.Longfellow”
ML: “Hello”
Bre:”So I heard you have wrote a story of the midnight ride of Paul Revere.” INCOMPLETE

Comment on Tips for Spying by Joseph

Joseph — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:47:23 +0000

#1:Go in, serve as your a servant.
#2: Listen but not alot becuase they will know.
#3: Act like you dont know what there talking about.
#4: Lead officers and serve them.
#5:Dont act like you know something then look suspicuios.
#6:Make sure you dont leave any records on enemy camps.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Ashaun

Ashaun — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:33:40 +0000

1) Just like in the in the story always stay out of trouble.
2) lie.
3) make sure you leave no record in enemy camps.
4) Don’t get caught
5) Never leave info behind
6) be trustworthy

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Jasmin C.

Jasmin C. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:17:10 +0000

    In the colonies they fought the war. Lord Charles Cornwallis was commander of the British Army. Marquis de Lafayette was the commander of a tiny force. James Armistead was a black spy for the Patriots. The British, James, Washington, & Lafayette fought in the war.
  James went to the Redcoats leader and served as a servant so he can overhear the plans/ideas. The Redcoats thought James was a trustworthy person. He reported news daily & it was hard for Lafayette. Lafayette and his men camped neat the Redcoats because they couldn’t steal maps. James was staying in the Redcoats tent and he would pretend like he never heard anything from them. Then, he would soon report it to Lafayette. Cornwallis sailed th a place but no one knows where. Lafayette’s men knew that Cornwallis sent his troops to Yorktown.
  Lafayette moved closer to the British. The commander told the Frenchmen to hold Cornwallis & not to let his army escape. Geroge Washington and the French marched South by land, while the French fleets sailed to Chesapeake. Lafayette’s Arny could ONLY hold Cornwallis in place. The French fleets defeated the British Warships and they sailed to New York. Washington & French Armies went to Yorktown and surrounded the British village.
  Cornwallis left the village, and went to Lafayette. Cornwallis seen James with Lafayette. He soon realized taht the volunteer who was faithful was in truth an American counterspy. He played an important part in winning the battle of the war. Lafayette wrote a certificate of the work of James as a spy. James sent the certificate to General Assembly of Virginia, to be a freeman. But before being a freeman, he demanded that his master was to be paid a fair price. He soon became a freeman. Then he called himself, James Lafayette.
  In 1819, James became old & he was poor. He got $60 & $40 a year because he was part of the Revolution war. James was 64 when Marquis de Lafayette came and greeted him as an old comrade. He got his portrait done & it still hangs in the Virginia Museum. He showed that he won his OWN freedom and the country’s. James Armistead Lafayette caused Lafayette to become a leader & to the end of slavery. Lafayette told Washington a plan to purchase a small estate where they can try to free slaves and use then as tenants. Saul Matthews was a slave. He was also a spy. Officers praised Matthews for his work and he had freedom. A slave names Antigua, also was a spy. He had information from the enemy, “frequently at risk of his life”. But he remained a slave all his life. Another slave, Quoco was a spy. His master sold hin to King’s Army, but he went to the patriots. The General Assembly of

INCOMPLETE

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Ashley V.

Ashley V. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:13:48 +0000

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Serena

Serena — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:13:27 +0000

The story ” The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in colonies. James Armistead is a 21 year old slave and also a spy for the Patriots. The british might kill James if they find out he is a spy for the Patriots. Cornwallis is a leader of the british troops. Lafayette is in charge of a troop for the patriots. The british are probably going to surender.

INCOMPLETE!!!!!!!

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Josh

Josh — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:13:06 +0000

The story “The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the colonies. Marquis de Lafayette, James Armistead, and Cornwallis are some major characters. Marquis de Lafayette is a Frenchmen who joined and who helped the Patriots, he later became leader of a small troop . James Armistead is a African American spy for the Partiots and a slave of William Armistead. Cornwallis is the leader of the British troops.
An African American slave James Armistead age 21 wondering in joining the patriot army. James went to be a spy at the Arnold camp and acted like he was on there team and Messengers went out to lafayette daily about what you saw. James reported to Lafayette about death was now greater and his work got harder.

Th Battles of the Revolution was over. When Cornwallis looked up to see the Familiar face of James Armistead but he wore a American Uniform James he continued to work as a slave after the war but at least he asked the leislature for help and grant ” Full Liberty” during the End of the War.

We will probably never learn more of the work of black spies during The Revolution War but it is certain that these secret services were so valuable that without them the struggle for the country’s independence might have lost.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Nicole Y.

Nicole Y. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:13:03 +0000

Tips for Spying

#1- Acting is important. Make sure you’re not obvious. Listen but act like you don’t understand.
#2-Leave no records of yourself in that camp. You don’t want something bad to happen to you or your family.
#3-Make sure you volenteer for a job htat lets you near where they make plans. This way you can hear them.
#4-Keep your ears open and make sure EVERYTHING POSSIBLE is heared.
#5-Be careful and make extra procosions when write letters. MAke sure no ne can see the letters you write.
#6-Try to make yourself trusted as a worker.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Andrew C.

Andrew C. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:12:43 +0000

This story takes place in the colonies. There are three major characters; Lord Charels Cornwallis, The Marquis De Lafayette, James Armisted. They are fighting in the revolutionary war. James Armisted is a spy for the Patriots. Lord Charles Cornwallis

First James went to Bendict Arnold.

INCOMPLETE

Comment on A Conversation with Henry Wadsworth Longfellow by Breanna

Breanna — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:12:23 +0000

bebe:”Hello Mr.Longfellow”
ML: “Hello”
bebe:”So I heard you have wrote a story of the midnight ride of Paul Revere.” INCOMPLETE

Comment on 1/5-Remembering & Compare/Contrast: How We Get the News (Past and Present) by Jacob

Jacob — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:12:07 +0000

In the selection ”If You Lived During The Time Of The American Revolution” tells how people get news now and back then.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Now~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Now we have tecnology. we get the news by watching tv or going on the computer or laptop.

INCOMPLETE

Comment on Tips for Spying by Dillon

Dillon — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:11:47 +0000

&nnbsp; Tips For Spies
1. When the redcoats talked about something you pretend that you can’t hear them or understand them.
2. Don’t get caught when you are sending your messages to the colonists.
3. Don’t act very suspicious act normal or calm.
4. Be cautious of what you do.
5. You could lie sometimes but not all the time.
6. How to get your news travel? Well you could tell other peopple and within a day or two and maybe hours.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Ignacio

Ignacio — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:09:15 +0000

’The master spy of yorktown” takes place in york town. 21 year old James Armistead was a spy for the patriots. He was a slave who became a freeman. He was also younger than Lafayette.

James was the youngest and bravest spy even thought his life was at risk. Because of all the spying they almost caught Arnold himself. When Arnold moved to the north james asked cornwallis if he can work for him. Cornwallis said “yes” and James was now a waiter for but realy he was a spy for the patriots.

Lafayette was scared of cornwallis but that did not keep him from being a leader. James came back after months of spying he said “Cornwallis and his ships will be in yorktown. Lafayette later met up with George Washiton and Rosambo in yorktown surronding cornwallis by land and sea.

After two weeks of fighting the Brittish gave up but cornwallis was not there he was in a cave. Cornwallis later came to Lafayette camp. The two Commanders talked cornwallis looked up and saw James.

After the war Lafayette gave James his freedom.James did not want to be free untill his master was payed for loseing a good workman. .The leaders agreed that he was a free man. James Armistead was now knowed as James Lafayette .Years passed and James Lafayette was “poor and unable to help himself”. The leaders Dicided to give him 60$ and 40$ a year for the rest his life.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Ashley S.

Ashley S. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:06:00 +0000

Dear Jesse,
Thank you for being my friend sine day 1. I appreciate it. My favorite moment of us, is when we went to Terabitha and became Queen and King. The adventure and all sorts of fun we had are all the memories I’ll keep forever. You’re like my bestfriend because when i was new in town you stood up for me when Gary Fultcher was saying mean things to me. I thought I’d never have a bestfriend, but you proved me wrong. You know I’d always tell Bill about you and he said I have a great friend and that’s true! Miss Edmunds is a very nice teacher and I knew she ws a kind teacher from the start. You should really talk to Ms.Mysers. She’s nice just like Miss Edmunds. One last thing, You’re a hard kind of friend to find, and I’m happy I met you.

Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Jesua

Jesua — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:04:26 +0000

Dear Jesse,
I remember the time when we first went to Terabitha and when we made our tree house. I also remember the time when we wrote the letter to Janes Avery on that day she was crying in the girls bathroom because of her dad hitting her. That day I made one-in-a-half friends. When I went to church with you in my dress and my ever day shoes. I wanted to say thank you for saying that I could race in the boys team. I also rememder when you gave me P.T and I gave you some water pants. Remember the time when you came to my house and we were panting the living room and my mom had came and she was writing a store and we had a great time. Thank you for being my friend.

Your best friend
Leslie Burke

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Aijanae

Aijanae — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:04:08 +0000

In the story “The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the colonies. James Armistead, Cornwallis, and Marquis de Lafayette are the major characters. James Armistead, was a slave and spies for the Patriots. Cornwallis, is a British leader, and Marquis de Lafayette, is a rich frenchman who becomes a a leader of a small army.
In the beginning of the story , Marquis de Laayette sent spies into British camp. Marquis lets James Armistead spy for him. Benedict Arnold left Virginia to return to the war. Still a spy, James works as a servant for Cornwallis. Armistead listened to Cornwallis and reported it back to Marquis. Cornwallis hardly noticed he was being followed.
In the middle of the story, James was a trusted servant to Cornwallis, he listened to Cornwallis, but also acts like he doesn’t understand him. At night, James whispered what he had heard to other blackman and in a few hours Marquis got the word of the British plans.Cornwallis’s army moved to the east and camped in a small city of Portsmouth. James reported to Marquis that a fleet of ships had come to anchor on the harbor.
Marquis and his army surrounded Cornwallis’s army and moved closer and closer. They began to dig trenches and fired at the British. After, ten days of fighting, Cornwallis surrendered. Cornwallis felt ashamed for not winning the war, he and his army stayed in a cave beside the York River. Cornwallis and Marquis talked. When James walked in to the cave, Cornwallis shook his head grimly, his own trusted servant was an American spy.
In conclusion, Marquis wrote a certificate for James to become a free man. James read it to The Virginia General Assembly. James would not claim his freedom until his master was paid a fair price. When they have paid his master, was now declared a free man. James Armistead changed his name to James Lafayette, for declaring James freedom.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Breanna

Breanna — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:02:55 +0000

These are some tips to being a good spy.
1. Go and ask enemy to be their servent.
2. Listen to what they say but dont let them saspect you.
3. Act like you dont know what their talking about.
4. Then you have to volonter to be a officers.
5. Don’t look like you know something or you are suspcious.
6. Make sure you leave no pearsonal information of your life in the enemy’s camp because if they find out were spying on them then they could find you.
7. The last one is dont ever tell anyone your a spy or else your life would be in danger.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Edith

Edith — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:02:40 +0000

Tips for Spying:
1) Go to serve as a servant to hear what the people are taking about.
2) Listen what they are talking about but not to much because they might find out.
3) Listen but act like you don’t understand them.
4) You could volunteer to serve officers and guide them on the roads.
5) Don’t look suspicios or that you know something.
6)Don’t leave record of your life where you are serving.
7) If the people ask you somethin lie so you won’t be in danger.

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Elexis

Elexis — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 20:01:12 +0000

Lafyette moved closer to the British. The commmander told the frenchman to hold Cornwallis and to make sure he didn’t escape. George marched south by land sailed to Chesapeak.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Zoaela

Zoaela — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 19:59:19 +0000

Dear Jesse,
I’ve been having funwith you at Terbabitha and school you are like my best freand. Thanks for leting me go to charch with you. And giving me a puppy for a presnt. I relly enjoy being your freand. I know about miss Edmunds ha ha ha ha haaa. P.T. is a good puppy thanks you. thank you for being a great freind.
Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Nicole Y.

Nicole Y. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 19:59:02 +0000

“The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the Southern part of the American colonies. One of the youngest major generals in history, Marquis de Lafayette was chosen as commander of a small force.

James Armistead, a slave, volunteered as a spy for the Patriots. Lord Cornwallis, a British army leader on the side of Benedict Arnold, was living in headquarters with James. James, the spy, was risking his life as he spied on Cornwallis.

After registering himself as a spy he was ordered by Lafayette to go and spy in the headquarters of Benedict Arnold. There he would work by serving officers & guiding them down roads. Even though some soldiers tried to capture Benedict Arnold themselves, Armistead was never suspected. He would write to Lafayette everyday telling him of what he heard. He even sometimes talked to the other servants in camp about what they heard. When Benedict Arnold left Armistead had to spy on someone new. His new job was to spy in the camp of Lord Charles Cornwallis.

Now Armistead would work as a servant/waiter. He continued to send his letters to Lafayette. His work here would was a lot harder now. Lafayette always camped close behind them and followed them wherever they would go. Sense Armistead was a trusted servant he was wasn’t suspected.

Armistead informed Lafayette that he had heard them talking of a move. For a long time the boats there for the move just sat at dock. Then Lafayette had discovered they had sailed to unknown place. He was later found in Yorktown. Lafayette wanted to hold Cornwallis in Yorktown so he couldn’t escape. He closed their routs through land & sea. They dug trenches and fought with cannons to keep them in.

They had lost &Cornwallis stayed in headquarters with the feeling on defeat. He eventually left there and reported to Lafayette to discuss the campaign. That day he also found out that James Armistead was a spy for the Patriots.

James Armistead asked for his freedom and was eventually declared a free man. His master was granted a payment for the loss of his slave/worker. James Armistead also started calling himself James Lafayette. When he got older he got paid even more money.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Cheng

Cheng — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 19:51:41 +0000

Dear,Leslie

I’m sorry about the prolbem that happen i didn’t want that prolbem to happen. But right now i wish you were here with me so we could be qeen and king of teraberathia again.But rigth now you are not here with me. I still remmeber you are a good friend with me. That time was a cool time. Once i thougth i was going to win but you won.When we got on the bus it was so cool. You and me are talking to each othe. I always still remmeber all of those thing. I’m happy that i got a friend like you.

sencerly,
cheng

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Cheng

Cheng — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 19:50:34 +0000

Dear,Leslie

sencerly,
cheng
sencerly,
cheng .x

Comment on Summary Writing: The Master Spy of Yorktown by Cathy

Cathy — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:17:11 +0000

The story “The Master Spy of Yorktown” takes place in the colonies. Marquis de Lafayette, James Armistead, and Cornwallis are the major characters. Marquis de Lafayette is a Frenchmenwho helped the Patriots, he later became leader of a small army. James A. is a spy for the Partiots and a slave of William Armistead. Cornwallis is the leader of the British troop.

James Armistead volunteered to help the British so he can overhear plans. The Redcoats believes James is now loyal and that he wouldn’t betray them. James reported news daily and it would be more risky and difficult. Lafayette began to camp near the Redcoats because his spies couldn’t steal maps or orders. James spent most of his time in the Redcoats’ tents, he pretended as if he didn’t know what they were saying. James reported to Marquis and he got the idea. Cornwallis’s army are camping in a small city. James also reported that the ships were coming to move the British troops elsewhere. Lafayette learned that Cornwallis was moving his troop to Yorktown. Lafayette moved closer to the Redcoats. James was sent by Cornwallis to be a spy for the British.

There were good news coming. George Washington , French commander, and Rhochambeau were coming, and Cornwallis was to be cut of land and sea. Lafayette’s small army would have to hold Cornwallis in place. By September, French fleet attacked British ships. In the middle of the month Washington and Rhochambeau came to Williamsburg, and Marquis welcomed them. Americans and French armies came to Yorktown surrounded the village where the British lived. They began to dig trenches and they fired cannons.

After ten days, Cornwallis and his army surrendered. The battles are over, Patriots won. Cornwallis feels ashamed because he did not win, he and his army stayed in a cave beside the York River. Cornwallis left the village and talked to Lafayette about the campaign. Cornwallis now knew James was on the Patriot’s side. A year after the traty of peace was written Lafayette wrote a certificate to James. James later sent his certificate to the General Assembly of Virginia and asked for his freedom. James wouldn’t have his freedom unless his master gets paid for losing his slave. The General assmembly agreed and James became freed and his name now is James Lafayette. In 1819, James Armistead became old and the General assembly gave him sixty dollars, then later gave him forty dollars a year. In 1824, Lafayette came to the town of Richmond and saw James.

The conflict was resolved when Cornwallis surrendered. One change is that in the beginning James Armistead was a slave, at the end he became a freed man and his name is now James Lafayette.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Josh

Josh — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:16:13 +0000

If you want to be a spy here are some tips to help you.The First tip is when enemy is talking about plans just pretend you have no idea what they are talking about. Second tip is don’t let British know or suspect that your on the other team or so bad things can happen to you . Third tip don’t let them catch when you are going back to camp or going to another teamate to tell there information. Last tip don’t ever get cought by the enemy. In conclusion, this can be useful tips for a spy.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Zoaela

Zoaela — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:12:52 +0000

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Serena

Serena — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:09:26 +0000

Dear Jess,

I’m really glad I moved over here because I met you. I am happy because now we are the best of friend’s. Jess do you rembember the day that we made Janice Avery cry. Then you made me go in the bathroom to see what’s wrong with her I was so scaired. But Jess thanks for doing that because now I have one and a half friend’s. And do you rembember when we first found Terabithia. That was the best day of my life beacause it is just a place for you and me. I also wanted to thank you for helping bill and me with the house if you didn’t it would of had taken me a long time. And also for being my best friend Jess. See you soon!
Sincerely Serena,

Comment on Tips for Spying by Ashley V.

Ashley V. — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:08:59 +0000

Tips For Spying
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
#1 When the redcoats talked about something you pretend that you can’t hear them or understand them.
#2 Don’t get caught when you are sending your messages to the colonists.
#3 Don’t act very suspicious act normal or calm.
#4 Be cautious of what you do.
#5 You could lie sometimes but not all the time.
#6 How to get your news travel? Well you could tell other peopple and within a day or two and maybe hours.
#7 Be trusted before you do something weird.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Serena

Serena — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 18:04:23 +0000

Nicole I think in the second sentence you spelled the word friend wrong.

Comment on A Conversation with Henry Wadsworth Longfellow by Zoaela

Zoaela — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:47:36 +0000

Me:” Hi Mr. Longfellow.
Mr.Longfellow: Hi
Me:” I’m going to ask you some questions.”
Mr.Longfellow:” Ok.”
Me: “why did you lie
Mr.Longfellw:”I did not lie?”
Me: “Yes you did.”
Mr.Longfellow:” No Idid not!”
Me: ” Paul Revere did not make, it to Lexington he got caught!”
Mr. Longfellow:” Caught Ha Ha Ha!”
Me: ” Not funny!”
Me:” how many times have you lied.”
Mr.Longfellow: Like 2 or 3 times.
Me: Why did you lie.
Mr.Longfellow: I, I’m sorry.
Me:”It is ok!”
Me: Just don’t lie it is bad to do.
Mr.Longfellow: Ok I won’t lie.
Me: Good Job.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Jesua

Jesua — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:33:19 +0000

Comment on Tips for Spying by aleksandr

aleksandr — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:31:15 +0000

the selication for tips for spies because here are the tips first tip The Brtish don,t know the american spy is spying on the Brtish for the french plans to destory the Brtish second tip is the american spy can,t been seen for the Brtish to catch them and kill him. and thrid tip is because when the american spy looks at the Brtish plans to destory the french then James armsteid went to laffette and told laffette that the Brtish will destory the french camp so laffttee sent his troops and James Armestied to and the french went to the Brtish and meanwhile James Armestiend stay and hide in the tree and spy on the Brtish. good bye

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Edith

Edith — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:29:34 +0000

Dear Jesse,
I just want to tell you the wonderful stuff I remember about our friendship. The first thing I remember is when we made Teribithia together by me being a queen and you being the king. The second thing I remeber is that you letting me run with the boys. It felt really nice winning. Another thing I remeber is you giving me the puppy. I really liked the puppy. I also remeber when we wrote the letter to Janice Avery to pay her back for steeling May Belle,’s Twinkies. I also remeber you inviting me to church for the first time. I also want to tell you that I had so much fun with you! Thankyou for being a wonderful friend!

Your Friend,
Lesley

Comment on Tips for Spying by Cheng

Cheng — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:20:04 +0000

A tips for a spy is that you don’t lit them see you. The next step is that you have to be fast like a ninjia.The third step is that wierd black clothing. The four step is that you sould just lie to them that you are a hleper In conclusion,tis is how you be an spy

Comment on Tips for Spying by Serena

Serena — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:16:13 +0000

1. Listen to there convercation but act like you do not know what there talking about.
2. Make sure you leave no record of your life with the enemy.
3. Try to become trusted.
4. Go in and seve as a servant.
5. You need to voulenteer to serve officers.
6. If you know somthing do not act suspcious.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Ignacio

Ignacio — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:15:52 +0000

Dear leslie,

I wanted to tell you alot of things like how wonderful my day was with miss Edmunds. How all the men where staring at here. I should asked you if you can come but i was not thinking I was just thinking of being alone with miss Edmunds. Thanks for being my best friend. Your father bill keeped P.T. I knew you would wanted him to. Now that you are gone i was thinking of asking May Bella if she would be the new queen of Terabithia. Thanks for giving me courage and the strength to not be scared. Now I will pass it on to other people.

Sincerly,
Jesse

Comment on Tips for Spying by Aijanae

Aijanae — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 20:04:30 +0000

#1: Go in and serve as a servant.
#2: Listen but not to much because they will find out that you are listening.
#3: Act like you don’t know what they are saying.
#4: Guide officers and serve them.
#5: Don’t act like you know something then you will look suspicious.
#6: Make sure you leave no record in enemy camps. {:)

Comment on Tips for Spying by Andrew C.

Andrew C. — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:57:18 +0000

1.Pretend you dont understand what they are talking about.
2.Talk amungst other people.
3.Don’t act like you will tell there enemy.
4.Leave no record of your life in there.
5.Try to become trusted.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Eddie

Eddie — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:48:39 +0000

Letter to Leslie–Dear leslie,If you didn’t died on the day I went without you.I want to ask you questions. How Good is it up their ? I wish that,I tell her to stop the car right in front of your house, And wait for you to come out.I will get this turned around back then. Down here my live is back to the same without you.I’m sorry for letting you kill yourself. I’m so sad and so mad. your a good friend. Your friend Jeese.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Jasmin C.

Jasmin C. — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:43:15 +0000

Tips For Spies
1. Go in & serve as a servant.
2. Listen but not too much because they might suspect you.
3. Act like you don’t understand them.
4. You need to volunteer to serve officers.
5. Don’t look like you know something or you are suspcious.
6. Make sure you leave No record of your life in the enemy’s camp because if they find out were spying on them then they could find you.
7. The most important one is that You need to LIE! because if you tell them or the truth slips out then your life can be in danger.

Comment on 5 – Evaluating: One Last Conversation…. by Zoaela

Zoaela — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:36:50 +0000

Daer Jesse,
I’ve been having funwith you at Terbabitha and school you are like my best freand. Thanks for leting me go to charch with you. And giving me a puppy for a presnt. I relly enjoy being your freand. I know about miss Edmunds ha ha ha ha haaa. P.T. is a good puppy thanks you. thank you for being a great freind.
Sincerely,
Leslie

Comment on Tips for Spying by Elexis

Elexis — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:36:16 +0000

Tips For Spies:
1) Listen to their conversations but not to much because they might find out that you are spying on them.
2) Go and serve as a servant. So that you can over here them talking about their secret things like their plans and where they hide when the war is happening.
3) Act like you don’t understand their plans.
4) Don’t act like you know something or act like you ARE a spy.
5) You need to guide officers and serve them on the roads. So you can here their plans.
6) Make sure you leave no record of your life on enemy grounds. So that they don’t find out who you are.

Comment on Tips for Spying by Jacob

Jacob — Wed, 15 Jun 2011 19:32:41 +0000

If you want to be a spy here are some tips to help you. Frist tip when there talking about something you need pretend your not listening. Second don’t let them suspect that your on the other team. Third don’t let them see you when your going back to camp or going to another teamate. Last don’t ever get cought by the enemy. In conclusion, these are tips on how to be a spy.