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Students are doing a “cold” write after a month long break. They are describing one activity they participated in during the month of May.

Boston Tea Party Currier colored

Accounts from Patriots, Loyalist, and a British Naval Admiral will be given. Students are pretending to give their accounts of what happened the night of December 16, 1773 as if questioned by the police.

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As we focus on writing, enjoy these stories as told from the point of view of a remote control.

Write an informational piece about ONE toy or ONE gift that has been special to you. Describe your toy of gift clearly to your reads. Explain why it has been such a special toy or gift to you. Help your readers learn new things about this toy or gift by using lots of details. Be sure to include specific information about your toy or gift.

(Establishing shot)

“Hey Melissa” I said.

“What ?”Melissa said.

“I changlle you in jumprope”I said.

“Why do I want to ?” Melissa said.

“Because, and pluse your going to lose !”I said.

“Oh yeah ?” Melissa asked.

“Yeah!” I said.

“Okay bring it on!”Melissa said.

“Hey Sarnia wanna be the person that said ready set start?”I said.

“Sure” Sarnia said.

“Ready set go!”Sarnia said.

“I can’t jump much longer” Melissa said.

“Well you did your best” I said.

“Thanks” Melissa said.

KS18a

KS18b

Script/Storyboard originally submitted Jan. 9, 2010

“Hey Litzy” said Diana “I guess you could beat every single girl, exept me”
“No you can’t” replied Litzy
“Oh yes I can”replied Diana
“Ok than prove it” agreed Litzy
“Ok” said Diana
“Whoever gets to hundred wins” said Litzy
“What?” Replied Diana “Hundred is too much, what about 50″
“No” replied Litzy “Keep it or leave it”
“Ok I will Keep it” agreed Diana ((And Litzy started first))
(So we began)
“1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10″said the rope holders
(A minute later)
“90,91,92,93,94,95″ “Oh no I messed up” Said Litzy
“Your turn Diana”
“1,2,3,4,5,6,…”said the rope holders
(Aminute later)
“98,99,100,Winner” yelled the rope holders
“See told you I could beat you” said Diana
“Oh no” replied Litzy “This Never happens to me, haaa!!!”
((NARRATIVE))
This Afternoon after school I found out that Litzy was beating every single girl in jumping rope, So I prepared to challenge her.

LE9a

LE9b

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