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What Things are Most Important to You?

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Students will compose a five paragraph essay about what things are important to them. The essay will have an introductory paragraph, three body paragraphs, and a concluding paragraph. Each body paragraph will include a topic sentence, evidence and analysis sentences, and a concluding sentence.

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  1.         To spend more time with my family makes me happy. Learning in school will help me a lot in the future. Smoothly, I can play the flute. Three thing that are important to me are my family, school, and music.
            One of the things that is important to me is my family. I try to spend time with my family. When it’s summer I can go visit my family. My family means every thing to me.
            Another thing that is important to me is school. We learn many things in school. Learning in school will help me a lot in the future. Something that is important to me is school.
            The last thing that is important to me is music. I like to play the flute. Playing the flute is fun. the music is also very beautiful. The flute is something that is important to me.
            Spending time with my mom, my dad, sister, and brother, learning in school, playing music are the things that are valuable to me. All those things is something I enjoy. What are the things that means a lot to you?

    • So far so good Vivian. You have all the elements of a five paragraph essay. The one noticeable thing for me is that your body paragraphs are sparse. You only have one evidence (yellow) and one analysis (red) sentence. Could you add more for each body paragraph? Thanks!

  2.         Being creative is important. Soccer is also important. The last important thing is video games. Those three things are important to me.
            It is important to me to be creative. I made some food. I made up the manwitch. I also made a cool hairstyle. I like to call it the unicorn. Being creative is important to me.
            Soccer is also important to me. I like to play at the park. I go to the park every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
            The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.
    every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
            The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.
    every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
            The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.
    every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
            The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.
    every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
            The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.
            Thinking of ways to be creative, energeticly , playing soccer, keeping my eyes on screen and playing video games are things that I care about. Those three define who I am. I am a creative thinker,soccer player ,and a gamer. What do you value about yourself.

  3.          With my family, I do lots of things. Getting exercise and eating healthy is important to me. playfully, I swim with my cousins. Swimming with cousins, eating healthy, and going places with my family is important to me.
             One thing that is important to me is my family. Spending time with my family is fun. Excitedly, riding bikes with them is awesome. I also take lots of trips with my family. To go to Stanford makes me feel happy. My family is very important to me.
             Another thing that is important to me is sports. Swimming is important to me. Racing is fun. Getting 1st place was the coolest day of my life. Sports are important to me.
             Health is something else that is important to me. Fruits and vegetables is what I eat to be healthy. I eat at least 1 apple, some grapes and apricots . Another way for being healthy is jogging. Around my neighborhood is where i go jogging with my aunt. Being healthy is very important to me.
             Traveling, around with my family, eating things that good for me, getting to swim with my cousins,parents,a nd other relatives are things mean alot to me. Everyone of these things makes me glad to be myself. What three things in your life mater to you in you life?

  4.     Walking in my room, I have lots of trophies. I love playing sports base-ball, and football. To eat healthy makes my family feel happy because I am in shape in not chunky. Joyfully, I love my family I get all of them a present for Christmas because I love them. Playing sports, eating healthy, and getting my family a present is important to me.

        Something important to me is playing sports. Happily sports mean a lot to me. My favorite sports are baseball and football. I have many trophies for baseball and football also I have medals from all-stars. To play sports means a lot to me.

        Happily another important thing to me is eating healthy. Eating healthy is good for my body. To eat healthy is awesome my favorite fruit is peanut butter or nutella. Felling healthy is awesome for me.

        Finally the most important thing to me is my family. Every Christmas I try to get every one in my family presents.
    Happily I love to get presents for my family its fun. I love my family with all my heart.

        Being active by playing sports, eating healthy to take care of my body and spending time with my family especially on Christmas getting them gifts are valuable to me. I am a child that plays sports and eats healthy. What things in your life mean a lot to you?

  5.     Before fishing I get my fishing stuff ready. Happily my family and I spend time together. Also with my friends we hang outor go to the park and play football. The most important thing to me is fishing, family, and friends.
        One basic part about me. I like to go fishing. Fishing is like a hobby to me. I go fishing because it is relaxing. Also it is fun catching all of the fish. Fishing is important to me.
        The second basic thing about me. Spending time with my family. With my family we like to go fishing because we like to catch fish. We also go to the park and play on the playground. My family is important to me.
        Finally it is my friends. I like hangin out with them. With my friends we go to the park and play basketball. Also we just play football at my house. My friends are important to me.
        Doing new stratagies at home like fishing, family, and friends being with my grandma going fishing and spend time with my family and brother are valuable to me. All of these three thing makes me be me. T am also brother and a student in school. What things in your life mean alot to you?

    • AJ, you’ve got all five paragraphs. Great! The whole, “one basic thinig about me. The second basic…” – These are not complete sentences and they don’t express what’s important to you. You have good concluding sentences. I will say that I get confused with your first two body paragraphs. First, you’re talking about fishing… with your family. Then you talk about your family… and that you like fishing. It’s almost the same paragraph. Is there anything else you like doing with your family?

    • I like how you indented on every paragraph.Also I like how you used sentence variety in your concluding paragraph. Next time when your finish check all your paragraphs because in a couple of paragraphs you did not put a space after some words. So far so good keep up the good work!

  6.     Before having a test at school, I would study for about half an hour.Listening to music, I would sing out loud.To be able to spend whatever time I have left with my parents and brothers makes me feel proud of myself.The most important thing to me is learning, singing, and my family.
        Learning is important for my life to become an academic student.I would pay attention in the classroom.During school, I will listen to what our teacher is explaining to us.In my room, I would study before we have a quiz.I would study for about half an hour until I remember the answers. Aiming to become an academic student, it’ll be important for me to learn.
        Being able to sing is very important to me.I love to sing.When I hear my favorate songs I would sing along with it. At school, I participate in singing with our second grade buddies.Singing is an inportant thing for me to do.
        My family is the most that I care about.We always have family activities together.Joyfully, we could play board games together like Twister and Candy Land.Playing activities, we would play tennis.We would often go out together too.To go to the park makes my brothers feel excited.My family is the most valuble thing to me.
        Learning new stratagies at school, singing, being with my parents and brothers are the things that cherish me.Without these things I wouldn’t be who I am right now. What things in your life means a lot to you?

  7.          With my family, I do lots of things. Getting exercise and eating healthy is important to me. playfully, I swim with my cousins. Swimming with cousins, eating healthy, and going places with my family is important to me.
             One thing that is important to me is my family. Spending time with my family is fun. Excitedly, riding bikes with them is awesome. I also take lots of trips with my family. To go to Stanford makes me feel happy. My family is very important to me.
             Another thing that is important to me is sports. Swimming is important to me. Racing is fun. Getting 1st place was the coolest day of my life. Sports are important to me.
             Health is something else that is important to me. Fruits and vegetables is what I eat to be healthy. I eat at least 1 apple, some grapes and apricots . Another way for being healthy is jogging. Around my neighborhood is where i go jogging with my aunt. Being healthy is very important to me.
             Traveling, around with my family, eating things that good for me, getting to swim with my cousins,parents,and other relatives are things mean alot to me. Everyone of these things makes me glad to be myself. What three things in your life mater to you in you life?

  8.          Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
             One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
             To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down.

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  9.     Joyfully, my family takes me to eat and i have lots of fun. Going outside is really important, not only will i stay fit but i might learn something new about nature or something else. To go to soccer games and practices is important for me.My family, soccer, and going outside are all important to me.
            There is lots of things that are important to me. One thing that is important to me is soccer. Playing this sport helps me relieve stress. To play it, helps me stay active and in shape. At some point of my life, i might even have a soccer career. One thing that is important to me is soccer.
            It is also important for me to go outside. Going outside is pretty helpful. One reason why it’s important is that going outside helps me stay away from video games. Also i might even learn something new or cool about nature or other things. Going outside is not only important for me but for other people.
            My family is also important to. Actually, they are the most important part of me. They are so important because without them i would be lonely. Also i would not be who i am right now. Without a family i would just not be smart, living in a house, or experiencing life and it’s dangers. My family is the most important part of me.

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  10.    &nbsp Going to school is important to me, learning will help me go to a college,Also it can make my grades go higher, mainly, I try to focus all on school, To spend time with my parents and siblings are fun, We also go to arcades and go out to eat, When i am at home i play on my tablet, It is Valuable to me. my family , tablet, and my school is important to me.

       &nbsp The important part of my life is school. Learning is a good skill for students and adults. I can go to a college that i wanted to go. Also, it can help away to my future. It can help with my grades. Sometimes school can help with your skills. Math is my favorite subject in school. Also, writing is my other favorite subject. School is Valuable to me.

       &nbsp My family is valuable to me. We spend alot of time together. We always go to the park. Also, the arcades to. Mainly, we have a family dinner at diners. My family is part to me. They are
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  11.         At home I usually go on my ipad after homework. Happily, I play board games when I get tired of playing with my ipad. Spending time with my family, I create happy memories. Important aspects of my life is technology, games, and mostly my family.

            One thing that is important to me is technology. I use lots of electronics everyday. After homework I play with my ipad. When I need to be up-to-date on news my desktop is there.Technology is an important portion of me.

            Another important piece is books. Without them my story wouldn’t be so colorful. If there were no such things as books I would have plenty of free time on my hands. With so much fee time my life would be rather dull. Books are another part of me.

            The most important part of me is my family. If my family was to cease to exist I would not be here either.

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  12.     To learn new things in school gets more interesting.Thinking of new recipes to try cooking for my family sometimes because sometimes my mom isn’t home. Mostly playing the panio relax me from anger because I get in to the beat of the song. All of those subjects school,cooking, and play panio are important to me.     What’s important to me is school. To have good grades is very impotant to me. Having good grades means I can get anything I want like a phone,labtop or a tablet. When I go to school every week days and do my work it will be on my reputation for when I grow up. My reputation will be seen when I have a job how good or bad I did.Importantly school means everthing to me.    Another important

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  13.      The three thing’s that are important to me are math,school and P.E.

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  14.         Creativly, I discovered new ways to draw. In my mind, I dream fairytales I made up. Enjoying music includes being attracted to instruments such as pianos. Did you know that being artistic, thinking of fantasies, and taking a liking to tunes are all very important to me.

            Sketching is one thing important to me. Because I enjoy art, I also enjoy drawing. For the regular type, I mostly drew humans and animals. Abnormally, with animal or power futuristics, I drew mixed DNA humans. Being artistic has its amount of significance.

            Dreaming means a lot to me. To dream causes me to come to love fictions. During a quick daydream, I have a quick tale that involves magic. Did you know that dreaming holds a great deal of urgency.

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  15.     Being apart of school activities is very interesting to me. I get to do things like being in a play or recycleing around the school. To do these things make me feel important. Joyfully, I love to spend time my friends and have fun with them. My family encoureges me to be who I am and do what I love. Scool, my friendship, and my family are the most important things to me.
        There are many things that are important to me. School is a big part of my life. At school I hae many responsabilities, like NEHS is a way I help the school. A way I get rewarded is leadership. Leadership is when you pick a club and you go after school to have fun. I don’t get to these things without working. I have too be at school evreyday and be on task. Working hard is what will keep me in these programs. If I do my best I will get to do more activities.
        Friendship is very important to me. My friends are part of what complets my life. Amazingly we have each others backs all the time no matter what. My friends are really fun to hang out with anytime. I can always talk to my friends easily. Friends are here till the end.
        My parents are an amazing part of my life. They are what make me who I am. I can count on them to advise me on hard choices. They have have showed me what’s right and what’s wrong. My loving parents take care of me and make sure I have

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  16.         Happily,I like to spend as much time as possible doing stuff with my family. To practice my flute makes my mom proud that I’m getting better. Constantly studying helps me improve my grades in class. Spending time with my family,having my education,and doing my music are all important to me.

            Something important to me is my family. I spend a lot of time with my family. At amusement parks me and my family have a great time. We also go to restraunts together. My family is one thing important to me.

            Another thing important to me is my education. I want to get into a good college. To study in my room makes me get a better education in school. Education is another thing to me that is important.

            The last thing that is important to me is my music. Happily,I play the flute. I have a recital with other people. Practicing in my room 4 days a week for 15 minutes helps me get better. My music is the last thing important to me.

            Studying for my education,happily being with my family,and practicing my music all mean a lot to me. These three things all make me who I am. What things are valuable to you in your lif

  17.     Going to school is really good for all of the students that is going to David Reese so that they all can get a good edication when they grow up. Having life is really good to me cause if we didn’t have mother nauture and would not be alive.Wile being with my family that makes me happy to be with them. By playing games with my family is a joyful thing we do.

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  18.         Happily,I like to spend as much time as possible doing stuff with my family. To practice my flute makes my mom proud that I’m getting better. Constantly studying helps me improve my grades in class. Spending time with my family,having my education,and doing my music are all important to me.

            Something important to me is my family. I spend a lot of time with my family. At amusement parks me and my family have a great time. We also go to restraunts together. My family is one thing important to me.

            Another thing important to me is my education. I want to get into a good college. To study in my room makes me get a better education in school. Education is another thing to me that is important.

            The last thing that is important to me is my music. Happily,I play the flute. I have a recital with other people. Practicing in my room 4 days a week for 15 minutes helps me get better. My music is the last thing important to me.

            Studying for my education,happily being with my family,and practicing my music all mean a lot to me. These three things all make me who I am. What things are valuable to you in your life?

  19. Their are three things are important to me.Is running,scooder racing,family are important to me.Running is important because running is heathly for you to get energize.Running is important to me. Scooder racing is important because if you race more you will get better at it. Scooder racing is important to me.Family is important because you get to send time with my family.Family is important to me.Running,scooder racing,family is important.Running help you get energize. Scooder racing help you get better at scoider racing.Family helps you because your family can get together.

  20. Being apart of school activities is very interesting to me. I get to do things like being in a play or recycleing around the school. To do these things make me feel important. Joyfully, I love to spend time my friends and have fun with them. My family encoureges me to be who I am and do what I love. Scool, my friendship, and my family are the most important things to me.
    There are many things that are important to me. School is a big part of my life. At school I hae many responsabilities, like NEHS is a way I help the school. A way I get rewarded is leadership. Leadership is when you pick a club and you go after school to have fun. I don’t get to these things without working. I have too be at school evreyday and be on task. Working hard is what will keep me in these programs. If I do my best I will get to do more activities.
    Friendship is very important to me. My friends are part of what complets my life. Amazingly we have each others backs all the time no matter what. My friends are really fun to hang out with anytime. I can always talk to my friends easily. Friends are here till the end.
    My parents are an amazing part of my life. They are what make me who I am. I can count on them to advise me on hard choices. They have have showed me what’s right and what’s wrong. My loving parents take care of me and make sure I have a great life. Most of all they love me and I love them. My mom and dad are great at being my parents.
        To be able to have speacial school privleges, hang out with my friends, and be with my loved ones makes me feel uniqe. Amazingly they complete my life. Whithout these things in my life I would be a diffrent person today.

  21. Joyfully, my family takes me to eat and i have lots of fun. Going outside is really important, not only will I stay fit but, I might learn something new about nature or something else. To go to soccer games and practices is important for me.My family, soccer, and going outside are all important to me.
    There is lots of things that are important to me. One thing that is important to me is soccer. Playing this sport helps me relieve stress. To play it, helps me stay active and in shape. At some point of my life, I might even have a soccer career. One thing that is important to me is soccer.
    It is also important for me to go outside. Going outside is pretty helpful. One reason why it’s important is that going outside helps me stay away from video games. Also I might even learn something new or cool about nature or other things. Going outside is not only important for me but for other people.
    My family is also important to. Actually, they are the most important part of me. They are so important because without them I would be lonely. Also I would not be who i am right now. Without a family i would just not be smart, living in a house, or experiencing life and it’s dangers. My family is the most important part of me.
             Going to soccer games, hanging out with my brothers, mom, sisters, dad,and going outside to play instead of playing video games are all important to me. Without these things that are important to me, I will be a fat, slow, and a poor kid. What things in your life are valuable or precious to you?

  22. Being creative is important. Soccer is also important. The last important thing is video games. Those three things are important to me.
    It is important to me to be creative. I made some food. I made up the manwitch. I also made a cool hairstyle. I like to call it the unicorn. Being creative is important to me.
    Soccer is also important to me. I like to play at the park. I go to the park every Saturday and play soccer. I also play at home. I built goal-posts in my backyard. One important thing to me soccer.
    The last important thing is video games. I usually spend a lot on video games. Sometimes I spend over $300 on video games. I play with my friends. I play online with them. Video games are the last important thing.

    Thinking of ways to be creative, energeticly , playing soccer, keeping my eyes on screen and playing video games are things that I care about. Those three define who I am. I am a creative thinker,soccer player ,and a gamer. What do you value about yourself.

  23.      My family is inportant to me. They are inportant to me because they are the ones that creatid me. They also INCOMPLETE

  24. To learn new things in school gets more interesting.Thinking of new recipes to try cooking for my family sometimes because sometimes my mom isn’t home. Mostly playing the panio relax me from anger because I get in to the beat of the song. All of those subjects school,cooking, and play panio are important to me. What’s important to me is school. To have good grades is very impotant to me. Having good grades means I can get anything I want like a phone,labtop or a tablet. When I go to school every week days and do my work it will be on my reputation for when I grow up. My reputation will be seen when I have a job how good or bad I did.Importantly school means everthing to me. Another important subject that means a lot to me is cooking. Most of the time I cook for my self to eat. What I mostly cook is ramen, fried rice, eggs, and sushi. I get cooking classes with my mom thats how I know how to cook. What I do in classes I cook with my mom and write it down in my cooking book.Thats

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  25.         Creativly, I discovered new ways to draw. In my mind, I dream fairytales I made up. Enjoying music includes being attracted to instruments such as pianos. Did you know that being artistic, thinking of fantasies, and taking a liking to tunes are all very important to me.

            Sketching is one thing important to me. Because I enjoy art, I also enjoy drawing. For the regular type, I mostly drew humans and animals. Abnormally, with animal or power futuristics, I drew mixed DNA humans. Being artistic has its amount of significance.

            Dreaming means a lot to me. To dream causes me to come to love fictions. During a quick daydream, I have a quick tale that involves magic. Did you know that dreaming holds a great deal of urgency.

            Music carries a lot of value! One reason I take pleasure in music is because they include piano notes. Pianos contain a very soothing tune. Enjoying music, I was able to get piano lessons every Thursday or Friday. To me, music is as well important.

            Thinking of ideas to doodle, imagining stories I thought up, and loving tunes means so much to me. These three valuables describes me as an artist, an author, or a musician. What things would you recall really special to you?

  26.     Going to school is really good for all of the students that is going to David Reese so that they all can get a good edication when they grow up. Having life is really good to me cause if we didn’t have mother nauture and would not be alive.Wile being with my family that makes me happy to be with them. By playing games with my family is a joyful thing we do.     Wile going to school is what makes me happy and feel safe.When school is out I go to after school. Life is good to have animals,plants,even nauture. Being with

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  27.         At home I usually go on my ipad after homework. Happily, I play board games when I get tired of playing with my ipad. Spending time with my family, I create happy memories. Important aspects of my life is technology, games, and mostly my family.

            One thing that is important to me is technology. I use lots of electronics everyday. After homework I play with my ipad. When I need to be up-to-date on news my desktop is there.Technology is an important portion of me.

     &       Another important piece is books. Without them my story would not be so colorful. If there were no such things as books I would have plenty of free time on my hands. With so much free time my life would be rather dull. Books are another part of me.

            The most important part of me is my family. If my family was to cease to exist I would not be here either. Without them I wouldn’t be successful. I have had my saddest and happiest memories with my family. My family always goes first for me.

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  28. Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down. Honestly having lessons is the best part because it’s fun. I get to meet people I really enjoy having over. Being a great musician player important to me.
    Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down.
    Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down.

    INCOMPLETE Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down. Having lesson’s is the best part because it’s fun. I get to meet people I really enjoy having over.
             The last but not least important to me is school. School is important because I need a bright future.

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  29.         Walking, in school makes me think about collage. In my house I spend all the time i have with my dog or mom,dad,aunt,and brothers. Happy, gaming and working out gets me exited. Going in collage,spending time with my family, and gaming,working out is important to me.
            School is important to me. Schools important to me because I want to go to collage. I want to go to collage because my dads brother is in collage,also so I can have a bright live. Studying is also why school is important to me. Because if I study I can get better grads then I every did. In school I can try to do this.
            Another thing thats important to me is my family and dog. My family is important to me because we do family nights. Basically my family just go’s and buys a movie, ice cream,and chips we also have some fun. My dogs important to me because shes only 8 weeks and a half. Feeding her is important because she could die of hunger,I also have to take care of her. My dog and family is important to me.
            The last thing thing thats important to me is gaming and working out. Gaming is important to me because I do not want to be board all the time. I mostly like to play my phone. Working out is important so I can be good. In my house I can do some sit ups and push ups.So games and working out is important to me.
            Always thinking of going to collage,being with my mom,dad,aunt,brothers and dog,working out, and gaming is important to me. These three things are what makes my days. I am kid who loves his family,likes gaming,working out,and wants to go to collage,and have a great life. What things in your life are important to you?

  30.      The three things that is important is math,school and P.E. When I grow up I will still do the same things I did as my self as a kid. As a kid I did do school and it was actully fun so I did P.E. when I was in 4th grade I used to play dodge ball with my 4th grade teacher I enjoyed doing running which is increasing my stamina. Doing math is important either sometimes I enjoy it a bunch I may also do fraction’s by adding the fractions.
         Doing P.E. by playing dodgeball with help me have strength so when I grow up I’ll be strong. Also by running I may increase my stamina also

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  31.         Growing, up i bought a variety of animals.To travel all around the world with my family makes me happy.Secretly, i love my family and my mom is glad to know that i do.
            Animals are important to me.I have a big amount of animals.I have 2 dogs,2 cats,and 2turtles.I always give them what ever.Every time i go to the store i get them two things each.In a month i spend about $28 dollars on them.To have animals is expencive and important to me.
            Traviling, is important to me.I love to travel.Traviling i spent over $800.exitingly, i travel alot with my family. I’ve traveled to 11 places.
            My family is very important to me.I have a reason why i love my family.Without my mom and dad i would not have a house,clothes,and i would not be here
    I also love every one else to.If i did not have brothers,sisters,nece,and
    nephew who would i talk to when i’m bored and who would i baby sit.
    To have a family is excellent to have.
            Travillin

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  32.         Helping out, my family makes me feel great. To spend my time with my family makes me feel proud. At home, you have to do your home work to get good grades and that is very important to me so I can go to collage. Those are my very most important things to me.
            The most important thing in my life is my family. The things I do with my family is important, is to celebrant traditions. One of the tradition we celebrant is diwali.We put candles in each room, and we also eat sweets on that day and the left over too for the other days. The other part to my family is to take care my family. The most I take care from my family is my mom, because she pregnant, and we are having a baby brother to take care of. We sometimes play a game with my family to spend time together. The game we play mostly is called snake and ladders. We have to go up and down mostly in that game. It is very important to spend a lot of time with my family.
            The other important thing is helping out with my family. One of the thing I do to help out is to do chores. One of the thing I do is cook. It is very hard to cook. Washing dishes is the other thing, it is easy to wash dishes but be careful to not break the dish. The lats chore I do is folding clothes, it is easy to fold clothes but be careful to not rip it. Helping out, with my family is a great and important thing.
            The last important thing is homework. In homework you can learn a lot of thing that you learned in class. The MOST IMPORTANT thing to learn is writing, because it is the most hard thing to do. The other MOST IMPORTANT thing is GO MATH, we didn’t do go math at all in fourth grade so it is better to learn go math in class and also at home. The other important thing is spelling. Spelling is easy but some words are just hard for us. The most important thing to me is homework because it is kind of hard with go math.
            The important things to me are my family, helping out, and homework. To spend my time with my family makes me feel so proud and intelligent.At home, I do my homework
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  33.     To go to school will give me a great future.Swimming is my favorite sport. Happily after school and swimming I will go on vacation. School, swimming, and vacation are all important to me.

        A very important thing to me is going to school.If I go to school I will get an education. If I go to school and get an education I will be able to get a good job.I will also learn a lot of things if I go to school.School is a very important thing to me.

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  34.      Helping out, my family makes me feel great. To spend my time with my family makes me feel proud. At home, you have to do your home work to get good grades and that is very important to me so I can go to collage. Those are my very most important things to me.
        The most important thing in my life is my family. The things I do with my family is important, is to celebrant traditions. One of the tradition we celebrant is diwali.We put candles in each room, and we also eat sweets on that day and the left over too for the other days. The other part to my family is to take care my family. The most I take care from my family is my mom, because she pregnant, and we are having a baby brother to take care of. We sometimes play a game with my family to spend time together. The game we play mostly is called snake and ladders. We have to go up and down mostly in that game. It is very important to spend a lot of time with my family.
         The other important thing is helping out with my family. One of the thing I do to help out is to do chores. One of the thing I do is cook. It is very hard to cook. Washing dishes is the other thing, it is easy to wash dishes but be careful to not break the dish. The lats chore I do is folding clothes, it is easy to fold clothes but be careful to not rip it. Helping out, with my family is a great and important thing.
         The last important thing is homework. In homework you can learn a lot of thing that you learned in class. The MOST IMPORTANT thing to learn is writing, because it is the most hard thing to do. The other MOST IMPORTANT thing is GO MATH, we didn’t do go math at all in fourth grade so it is better to learn go math in class and also at home. The other important thing is spelling. Spelling is easy but some words are just hard for us. The most important thing to me is homework because it is kind of hard with go math.
        The important things to me are my family, helping out, and homework. To spend my time with my family makes me feel so proud and intelligent.At home, I do my homework, when you do your home-work at home you can get a lot smart at home and you can do practice at home too.

  35.         At home I usually go on my ipad after homework. Happily, I read books when I get tired of playing with my ipad. Spending time with my family, I create happy memories. Important aspects of my life is technology,books, and mostly my family.

            One thing that is important to me is technology. I use lots of electronics everyday. After homework I play with my ipad. When I need to be up-to-date on news my desktop is there.Technology is an important portion of me.

            Another important piece is books. Without them my story wouldn’t be so colorful. If there were no such things as books I would have plenty of free time on my hands. With so much fee time my life would be rather dull. Books are another part of me.

            The most important part of me is my family. If my family was to cease to exist I would not be here either. I’ve had my happiest and saddest memories with my family. My family always goes first to me.

            The three important things to me is technology, books, and my family. Without them I wouldn’t be who I am today. I cherish them, what do you value in your life?

  36.     To spend more time with my family makes me happy. Learning in school will help me a lot in the future. Smoothly, I can play the flute. Three thing that are important to me are my family, school, and music.     One of the things that is important to me is my family. I try to spend time with my family. When it’s summer I can go visit my family. My family means every thing to me.
        Another thing that is important to me is school. We learn many things in school. Learning in school will help me in the future becuse all the jobs need you to know math most of the jobs need you to know english some need you to know science and social studie. I really want to get good grades so I can get a better job.
        The last thing that is important to me is music. I like to play the flute. It’s fun and intresting. It’s fun because when you play very fast when you mest up and we all laugh then we practice and practice then finally we did it.
         Spending time with my mom, my dad, sister, and brother, learning in school, playing music are the things that are valuable to me. All those things is something I enjoy. What are the things that means a lot to you?

  37. Before fishing I get my fishing stuff ready. Happily my family and I spend time together. Also with my friends we hang outor go to the park and play football. The most important thing to me is fishing, family, and friends.
    One basic part about me. I like to go fishing. Fishing is like a hobby to me. I go fishing because it is relaxing and it is for to go out doors. Also it is fun catching fish and release it into the water. Fishing is important to me.
    The second basic thing about me. Spending time with my family.With my family we like to go out and eat. We also go to the park and play on the playground. My family is important to me.
    Finally it is my friends. I like hangin out with them. With my friends we go to the park and play basketball. Also we just play football at my house. My friends are important to me.
    Doing new stratagies at home like fishing, family, and friends being with my grandma going fishing and spend time with my family and brother are valuable to me. All of these three thing makes me be me. T am also brother and a student in school. What things in your life mean alot to you?

  38. Marlyna says:

    February 27, 2014 at 10:14 am

    Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down. Sometimes having lessons is the best part because I get to meet people I actually enjoy having over. Being a muusician is important to me.
             The last but not least thing important thing to me is school. School is so super important to me because I need a bright future. To have a bright future is important because I need to succeed in life. I also need to be a role model in the future. The final important thing to me is school.
             Always going to school , trying to think of great things, spending time with my realitives, and simply pushing myself to become a great music artist are the most special things to me. All these things explain me. I love music, family, and education/school.

  39.     The three things that is important is math,school and P.E. When I grow up I will still do the same things I did as my self as a kid. As a kid I did do school and it was actully fun so I did P.E. when I was in 4th grade I used to play dodge ball with my 4th grade teacher I enjoyed doing running which is increasing my stamina. Doing math is important either sometimes I enjoy it a bunch I may also do fraction’s by adding the fractions.
    Doing P.E. by playing dodgeball with help me have strength so when I grow up I’ll be strong. Also by running I may increase my stamina also by doing dodgeball will make it fun. Math will help my grades go higher.      Also by doing P.E. i have plenty of fun In P.E. So I decided to do P.E. at my house by streching Also by doing it with a group It will still help me do

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  40.     My family is importent because there the ones that creatid me. Also they are fun to play with INCOMPLETE

  41. Going to school is really good for all of the students that is going to David Reese so that they all can get a good edication when they grow up. Having life is really good to me cause if we didn’t have mother nauture and would not be alive.Wile being with my family that makes me happy to be with them. By playing games with my family is a joyful thing we do.

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  42. To learn new things in school gets more interesting.Thinking of new recipes to try cooking for my family sometimes because sometimes my mom isn’t home. Mostly playing the piano relax me from anger because I get in to the beat of the song. All of those subjects school,cooking, and play piano are important to me.
         What’s is mostly important to me is school. To have good grades is very important to me. Having good grades means I can get anything I want like a phone,laptop or a tablet. When I go to school every week days and do my work it will be on my reputation for when I grow up. My reputation will be seen when I have a job how good or bad I did.Importantly school means everything to me.     Another important subject that means a lot to me is cooking. Most of the time I cook for myself to eat. What I mostly cook is ramen , fried rice, eggs, and sushi. I get cooking classes with my mom thats how I know how to cook. What I do in classes I cook with my mom and write it down in my cooking book.Thats why I think thats important to me.
        Importantly my favorite subject is piano.

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  43. Going to school is important to me, learning will help me go to college, Also, it can make my grades go higher, Mainly, I focuss on learning how to my homework,To spend time with my parents and siblings are fun, we go out to eat and go to arcades. when im at home bored i play on my tablet, It is a vaulble thing to me. All of these three things are important to me. INCOMPLETE

  44. Marlyna says:

    February 27, 2014 at 10:14 am

    Being able to be a great educational makes me happy. To become a great musician player makes my family proud. Usually spending time with my family makes me joyful. Spending time with my family, being a great musician player , and school are all important to me.
    One thing imortant to me is family. To spend time with my family is fun. Usually we sing songs together. Also we would go on road tripsand play car games. Another reason family is fun and important because we liketo have family fun nights witch gives us a chance to bond with eachother. An important thing to me is family.
    To be a great musician player is another important thing to me. Becoming a great musician player is awesome. Sometimes playing music and instruments calm me down. Sometimes having lessons is the best part because I get to meet people I actually enjoy having over. Being a muusician is important to me.
    The last but not least thing important thing to me is school. School is so super important to me because I need a bright future. To have a bright future is important because I need to succeed in life. I also need to be a role model in the future. The final important thing to me is school.
    Always going to school , trying to think of great things, spending time with my realitives, and simply pushing myself to become a great music artist are the most special things to me. All these things explain me. I love music, family, and education/school. What things are

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  45.     To go to school will give me a great future. Swimming is my favorite sport. Happily after school and swimming I will go on vacation. School, swimming, and vacation are all important to me.

        A very important thing to me is going to school. If I go to school I will get an education. If I get an education from going to school I will get a good job. School is a very important thing to me.

        Another important thing to me is swimming. swimming is a very good exerzise. When I swim I have a lot of fun. I also don’t feel like I’m sweating and I really like that.Swimming is important to me.

        The last important thing to me is vacation. Vacationing is really fun. When I vacation I get to go on a plane. I also get to visit my family when I vacation. It’s not often I get to vacation. Vacation is the last important thing to me.

        Going to school and getting an education, having fun

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