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Body Paragraph #3 – Lupe is… hard working or a good sport.

Students will write a body paragraph that includes a topic sentence, at least ONE evidence sentence, several analysis sentences and a concluding sentence.

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  1.     Lupe is a hard worker. She does many things to get better in marbles. Trying to get better in marbles Lupe developed a thumb muscle. Also she practiced with her brother and a neighbor kid Alfonso. She even did push-ups on her fingertips! The main character is one who works hard.

    • Nice paragraph Chris. I like how you indented and used a few types of Sentence Variety. I liked how you referred to Lupe as the “main character.”

    • Chris! That was an excellent recording. You had good expression and you paused at periods. Your voice was very clear.

  2. Lupe is a hard worker. she keeps rubbing an eraser,and 20 push-up.The reason why she is doing that cause she is having a marble champ.Lupe kept shooting the marble to get accurcy. When it was time she went to the marble champ and she beated 2 girls and 3 boys.At the end Lupe got two awards cause she beated 2girls ,and 3 boys

    • Jet, thank you for blogging. Next time, please indent. Many of your sentences don’t make sense. Please correct them. Also, you need to make sure you have a space between the period and the next letter.

  3. Lupe is a hard working girl. She works hard for like marbles. The girl is triying to be good at a sport. She triys her best to be good at a sport and she is osome. She won lots of trophs she won a music trophy . She nose lots of things even if she is sick Lupe still goes to school. Lupe is so good at sports her mom and dad took her to selebrate . Lupe is the best person at marbles.

  4. Lupe is a nice girl. She is a verey good sport. When Rachellost to Lupe she had nobody to cheer for her so Lupe asked Rachel if she would join her. lupe did not gloat evrey time she beated someone at the championships. The marble champ is a nice girl.

  5.     Lupe is terrible at sports.Lupe is terrible at sports because she doesn’t have any sports trophies.At school,Lupe could not beat anyone in the fifty-yard dash.Sadly,she kicked a soccer ball in her own goal.She can’t even keep a hula hoop on her hip!The main character of the”MARBLE CHAMP”is not good at sports at all.

  6. This story is about a girl who is a very good sport.She is a good sport because she does not cheet at tests.Lupe never missed a day of school.She is a very good sport.She cares about others.She is nice to people.She’s a straight A student.

  7. Lupe is a hard worker. She practices to be better at marbles. She squeezes an ereaser 100 times. She does push -ups on her finger-tips. In her backyard,She practiced with herself. She worked so hard that she took two marbles out. Lupe really worked hard.

  8. Lupe works all day.Lupe is a vevry hard worker.Shedoes 20 push ups on her finger tips.Shealso squishes an eraser 100 times a day .Ather home home shr practice even at night.HapplyLupe wouldbeet her brother and the neighbor kids.Thatswhy Ibelive Lupe is a vevry hard worker.

  9. In this story The Marble Champ is about a girl who is not good at any sports but she is good at any sports but she is good at other things like math,science, and reading contest to.She does not know how to play soccer.she’s not good at marbles either .Lupe won the spelling bee contest.At the end of the story Lupe knows how to play a sport.

  10.     Lupe is hard worker. Lupe practice a lot. Lupe practice with her brother on marbles to get a good accuracy. Lupe Squeezed an eraser so her will get stronger. Lupe did 100 push ups a day on her finger tips to make her wrist stronger. Lupe is the main character in the story ‘MARBLE CHAMP’.

  11. In the begging of the story Lupe’s hand is weak.Lupe practice for three weeks and it is starting next three weeks.Lupe practice sqeeze an eraser and her mom,and dad thought her thumb got swarm .But Lupe said ”no I was practice all day.” When she went to the marble champion ship Lupe won three boys, and two girls .At the end Lupe won awards cause she beated two girls,and two boys.

  12.     Lupe is hard worker. Lupe practice a lot. Lupe practice with her brother on marbles to get a good accuracy. Lupe Squeezed an eraser so her thumb will get stronger. Lupe did 100 push ups a day on her finger tips to make her wrist stronger. Lupe is the main character in the story ‘Marble champ.

  13. Lupe is an intelegent girl. She has many strengths. She has never missed a day of school,and is good at chess She also got a ribbon for an award from a science fair. Lupealsohas a couple of weekness. She can not do many sports li

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  14. Lupe is a girl who works very hard. Miss Medrano tries to be good at marbles. At her school, she practiced three hours straight. Squeezing a eraser 100 times made her finger start to get muscular. At the marble competition, everyone thought she had broken her thumb. Because of her hard work, she won the marble competition

  15.      Lupe is a hard working girl. She is trying to play marbles so she can be good at a sport. At home,Lupe would squeeze an eraser 100 times so that her thumb could get stronger. Silently,Lupe would do push-ups on her finger tips in her room. Practicing with her brother,Ms.Medrano would get better with her accuracy. The champion from,”The Marble Champ” is an industrious girl.

  16.     Lupe is a girl who works very hard. Miss Medrano tries to be good at marbles. At her school, she practiced three hours straight. Squeezing a eraser 100 times made her finger start to get muscular. At the marble competition, everyone thought she had broken her thumb. Because of her hard work, she won the marble competition. The main character is a person who believes who and that achieves

  17.     Lupe is very hard working. She is industrious because she practices really hard. After school, Miss Medrano would practice 3 hours straight, without doing her homework. Practicing, the 5th grade girl did thumb exercises such as fingertip push-ups and squeezing an eraser 100 times. To squeeze an eraser 100 times made Lupe’s thumb feel stronger. The character, Lupe from “Marble Champ”, was proven diligent.

  18.     I pick hard working because Lupe practice at the marble champ. And Lupe is getting good because she beat her brother and the neighbor kid Alfonso at marble. And she won all of the trophy for other stuff but not sports because she is weak at sports but she got better. And she also exrcise her thumb to loch the marble.

  19.     Lupe is a hard working girl. She is so smart she has awards and trophies. Lupe earned it by doing good in school and never missed one day of school even if she was sick. She won trophies on winning the spelling bee champion trophy. She is trying to be good at a sport and it is the game Marbles. She flexes her thumb to hit the marbles powerfully. She practice finger tips push ups. Lupe dad put lights up to let her practice in the garage. She goes to the game and people said “how can you play with a broken thumb.” But then she bets all the girls and boys so she has two trophies. This is how i can tell she is a hard worker.

  20.      In the story Marble Champ, the character Lupe is this.Lupe is hard working. At home after school Lupe practices for 3 hours. Confadintly Lupe squeezed an eraser 100 times .Lupe also did push ups on her fingertips. She practiced after dark. The main character in the story Marble Champ is very hard working.

  21.     In the story Marble Champ the character Lupe is this. Lupe is hard working. At home after

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  22.      Lupe is a hard working girl. She has many achievements and awards. Lupe won the marble championship because she worked hard. She also won a lot of trophies because she worked hard. Lupe really worked hard.

  23.      Lupe is an hardworking girl. She be hardworking cause she is a good person. She is hard working cause she is good at spelling bee’s and good at the science fair and really good at the reading contest. And good on the piano recital. Lupe is a very intelligent.

  24.      Lupe is a hard worker. She does may things to get better in marble. Trying to get better, Lupe would squeeze an eraser 100 times a day and Ms.Mendrano beat her friends in her neighborhood. The Main Character is the one who is hard working.

  25.     Lupe did lots of things so she could be good at marbles. Lupe is a hard worker.

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  27. Lupe is a hard working girl. She is great at working hard at stuff. Lupe sqeezed an earaser on her thumb a lot of times. She never stops practiceing. Lupe gets a lot of trophys
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  28. Lupe did lots of things so she could be good at marbles. Lupe is a hard worker. Quickly, Lupe did 20 push ups on her finger tips. Lupe also squeezed an eraser 100 time. Her brother gave her lessons on how to shoot a marble too. The main charater of the “Marble Champ” has a weakness like everyone else, and she works hard for it.

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