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Body Paragraph #2 – Lupe is not good at sports.

Students will write a body paragraph that includes a topic sentence, at least ONE evidence sentence, several analysis sentences and a concluding sentence.

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  3.     Lupe is a hard working girl. She is great at working at stuff. Lupe squeezed an eraser on her thumb a lot of times. She never stops practicing. Lupe gets a lot of trophy at her school. she does push ups and never forgets about doing push ups. Lupe worked really hard to get good at marbles of doing all these stuff that she did to win in the marbles champ.

  4. Lupe is an hard working girl. She be hard working cause she is a good person .she is hard working cause she is good at spelling bee’s and good at the science fair and really good at at the reading contest . And good on the piano recital. Lupe is a very intelligent.

  5.     The 5th grade girl Lupe is not a good sport.She doesn’t know how to play sports. Miss.Medrano is very bad at soccer one time she kicked the ball into her own goal she’s also bad at football,basketball,softball,and hula hoops.
    Miss.Mendrano is very horrible at sports

  6.     Lupe is a very hard working person. these are resins why Lupe is a hard worker. She squishes eraser 100 times for more muscle. she practiced at night time. She started rilly bad but she worked hard and won the marble championship that was only tow weeks away. Lupe is not a quiter

  7. Lope is a hard working person. Althouah she was not good sport she did not trying. To strengthen her wrists, she decided to do twenty push-ups on her fingertips, five at a time. She squeezed a rubber eraser one hunderd time thund. There fore Lope will win anything she work hard for.

  8.     Lupe has many strengths, but she also has weaknesses. She is bad at sports. In the 50m dash, no matter how hard Lupe tries she can never run faster than any other girl. Playing soccer, Lupe even scored a point for the opposing team. Also she had a hard time keeping a hula hoop stay on her hips. Another thing is that she only chanced roller skating when holding her father’s hand. She learned to ride her bike when she was 11years old, but even then she still had to use training wheels! Ms. Medrano is absolutely terrible at sports.

  9. Lupe is not good at sports. She dose not train for sports . The girl is only good at music. She is bad at sports becase she does not do any sports. the girl enterd the marble championship and she won it she even enterd the boys marbles championship.Lupe was so exited that she won both championship .

  10.     Lope is a hard working person. Althouah she was not good sport she did not trying. To strengthen her wrists, she decided to do twenty push-ups on her fingertips, five at a time. She squeezed a rubber eraser one hundred time thumd. There fore Lope will win anything she work hard for.

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  11.     Lupe is terrible at sports. Lupe is terrible at sports because she doesn’t have any sports trophies .At school, Lupe could not beat anyone in the fifty-yard dash. Sadly, she kicked a soccer ball in her own goal. She can’t even keep a hula hoop on her hip! The main character of the”MARBLE CHAMP”is not good at sports at all.

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