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What Ended the Revolutionary War?

Students will write a paragraph which will include topic sentence, evidence and analysis sentence, and concluding sentence about why the war ended.

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  1.     The American Revolution ended because British forces were tired of fighting. After fighting for 6 years the British gave up. The British General Charles O’Hara presented his sword to General Benjamin Lincoln and he tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. After a long time of fighting, the British army surrendered to the American army, ending the American Revolution.

  2.     The American Revolution ended when the British surrendered. After six years of fighting the British finally gave up. The British officer presented his sword and the American tapped it for the acceptance of surrender. The American Revolution ended once the British surrendered to the American.

  3. The American Revolution ended because the British gave up fighting. The British gave up fighting because they were tired fighting for 6 years. The British personally surrender to General Washington by letting him touch the sword. The war ended because the British were tired fighting.

  4.      The American Revolution ended because, the British gave up. After over six years British General Charles O’Hara, surrendered to General Benjamin Lincoln. The British officer presented his sword, and the American tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. The British gave in, then the war ended.

  5. The Revolution was over because the British soldiers gave up fighting. They got tired of war. The British Officer passed out his sword and the American tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. Because the British gave up fighting, the American Revolution was over.

  6. The American Revolution ended after the British surrendered to the Americans. The British fought for six years and soon got tired of fighting. They surrendered, and a British officer presented his sword and the American tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. The Revolution ended because the Redcoats gave up to the Americans.

  7.     The American Revolution ended after the British surrendered to the Americans. The British fought for six years and soon got tired of fighting. They surrendered, and a British officer presented his sword and the American tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. The Revolution ended because the Redcoats gave up to the Americans.

  8. The American Revolution war ended because british armygave up after six year. British army was tire after fighting for six years. British officer presented his sword and was acceptance of surrender. The American Revolution war ended after six years.

  9. The American Revolution ended because the British got tired of fighting and gave up. The British gave up because they were tired of 6 years of fighting. The British gave up by letting the American tap the sword of Charles O’Hara to show that they surrendered. The war ended because the British surrendered after 6 years of fighting.

  10.     The American Revolution ended because the british gave up after six years of fighting the colonists. British general Charles O’ Hara surrendered to the american forces and presented his sword. The American general tapped the sword and accepted his surrender. The Revolutionary war stopped because the british gave up.

  11. The American Revolution ended with the british solders giving up! The british solders gave up after fighting for six years. the british solders offerd the Americans to tap the sword as a sigh of serenader. British solders gave up fighting for six years ended the American Revolution.

  12.      Fighting in the revolution had to stop. The revolution ended when they got tired. The British and American forces were at war for six years so they had to do something. Fighting in the revolution have been tiring.

  13. The American Revolution ended because the British gave up to American forces. News of the surrenders spread throughout the states by messenger, newspaper, and broadsides.After the war ended they celebrated with cannon salutes, bonfires, and also fireworks. It took until September 1783 for the final peace to be written.

  14.     The American Revolution ended because the british surrendered to the American army. Over six years of fighting the british was tried. So General Charles O’hare presented his sword as a surrender to Benjamin lincoln. The American Revolution ended because the british General charles presented his sword to Benjamin lincoln.

  15. The American Revoulution ended by the British Army surroundering. The Redcoats army is tired of fighting. The British General presented his sword and the American General tapped it in acceptence of giving up for over 6 years. The Revoulution ended by the Redcoats giving up to the Patriot.

  16. The american revolution ended because of the British soldiers surendered because theyve been fighting for six years. After six years of fighting the british finally got tired so, they gave up. The british soldier presented his sword and the american tapped it as an acceptance of surrender. And after a long time of fighting, the british finally gave up.

  17.      The Revolution War ended because the British grew tired of fighting so they surrendered. A British Officer presented his sword then the American taped the sword. When the American tap the sword it means they accept to surrender. In September 1783 the final peace! A treaty in Pairs ended the American Revolution! The British gave up they didn’t want to fight because they were tired of fighting.

  18. The war ended when the patriots sneak up on them and started fighting until 2pm the british gave up. The war ended when the british gave up to the American Force. The british gave up when the American Force sneak up on them at 2pm, 1781 at Yorktown Virgina. In six years the redcoats gave up and the war ended because the patriots sneak up on them.

  19. The war ended because. The British ormy gave up. Because the libet got seek and the British cudent fight weth owt hem. thats how the British sojers lost the wor.

  20.      The American Relvotion ended because the british were tired of fighting after that six years.That is why the war ended because the british gave up.Then a british officer presented to tap the sword of acception of surrender. After that british agreed to peace not to fight.

  21. the revolution ended because the british army gave up to the army american force. the british army was tired of six years of fighting so they gave up.and cause the british tap his sword to gave up.so the british army gave up cause there were tired. and after that british agreed to peace not to fight.so the that why the british gave up and tap is sword.

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