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Third! The Abacus Contest: Different Lifestyles

We are practicing writing a paragraph with a topic sentence, supporting details, and a concluding sentence. In this paragraph, we are comparing how Gao Mai’s life is very different from our experiences.

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  1. In the selection,”The Abacus Contest”, Gao Mai’s lifestyle is very different from mine. Here are some things that are different from me and Gao Mai. Gao sleeps on the floor and I don’t, I have legs supporting my mattress. For breakfast one day Gao Mai had eel, dried meat, and pickled cucumbers (with rice as well). When she goes outside she saw a open market, a farmer selling sugarcane, and a fish in a shallow pan filled with water. Gao Mai also has to wear uniform, greet her teacher when he arrives in class, and she uses an object called an abacus. Gao Mai’s lifestyle is very different from mine.

  2. In the selection The Abacus Contest Gao Mei life is very different from us. Gao Mei eat’s different food from us. In front of Gao Mei house there is people trying to sell things for money. When Gao Mei goes to shool she has to go threw a market to get to school. Li Zhi won’t let Gao Mei win her on the abacus contest. Gao Mei family eats food from the bowls and we eat food from plates. Gao Mei family’s use chopsticks and we use forks and spoons to eat our food.

  3. Gao Mai’s life is different from mine and this is why. Gao Mai family’s anceastor are honered in an altar

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  4. In the selection “The Abacus Contest”,Gao Mai has different things
    from us.She eats different.What she eats is dried maet,eel and pickeled cucumber.When she gets out of her apartment,she

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    • In the selection “The Abacus contest” Gao Mai has and does different things from us.Oh!She even eats things that are different from what we eat.Her culture eats:dried meat,eel and pikeld cucumber.Also when we walk out into the streets, we don’t see a farmer spreding a piece of burlap on the pavement and pilting it high with cut sugarcans or see alive fish swimming in a shallow metal pan.We also don’t sleep on the floor,well mabe some do but I can tell you this I don’t it hurts my back.Gao Mai’s school wears uniforms.The only school I’ve been to that i have to wear uniform is in Woodlake Elementary.Their desks are put together unlike us.To me that would be weird.In this selection,”The Abacus contest”

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  5. In the selection ”Abacus Contest” how is Gao Mai lifestyle.First of all Gao Mai lifestyle is different because her school wear uniform and my school doesn’t wear uniform.Second of all she eats different for us and we eat different for her to.Third of all

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  6. In the selecttion the abocus contest gaio mai is gifrl who,m wants to win the abocus to make her parents happy .At school when they were doing the abocus contest everyone was as quiet as could be .When gao mai turned the page the pages were stuck together she pulled them apart very slowly then she heard a page turn and she thought oh no lea zige is catching up to me and she knew that her parentents wanted her to win the aboucus contest then shev saw a boy place his math sheet on the teachers desk and gao mai was very sad. then at recess everyone ask if she wanted to play with them and she didnt say anything to them then the bell rang and everyone went inside then the teacher said the boy got 1 anwer rong and he said that gao mai and last years 2 place winer one frist place to and that was lei zige and then gao mai said it is agood day to come to yourhoue after all.

  7. Gao Mai’s life is different from mine and this is why. Gao Mai family’s anceastor are honered in an altar and mine aren’t. And plus she sleeos in the floor and eats eel, dreid meat, and pickled cucumber. Another reason is because she doesn’t use a canculater but an abucas for math. Another way she is different because when she goes to school and uses an uniform. These are the way Gao Mai’s life is different.

  8. In this story Abacus Contest Gao Mai hope that she going to win first place in the Abacus Contest. Last year she got second place and Li Zhi got first by one second. incomplete

    • In this selection Abacus Contest Gao Mai hope that she going to win first place in the Abacus Contest. Last year she got second place and Li Zhi got first place by one second. But at school she is going to do the Abacus Contest.

  9. In the selection ”The Abacus Contest” this is how Gao Mai lifestyle is. Gao Mai lifestyle is different for us because her school wear uniform and my school doesn’t wear uniform.Second of all, Gao Mai eats different food for us because I eat different food to. Last of all, Gao Mai lives somewhere else and we live in the United State. This is how Gao Mai lifestyle is. INCOMPLETE

  10. In the selection “TheAbacus Contest”, Gao Mai has and does different things from us.Oh!She also eats different things from us.Her and her family eat:dried meat,eel and pickled cucumber.When we walk out in the streets we don’t see a farmer spreading a piece f burlap on the pavement,and piloting it high with cut sugarcane,or swimming fish on metal pan.when the teacher gets in the classroom the kid shave to stand up and say “Good Morning”.We don’t have to do that.They have wooden desks that are put together with long benches to.This selection “The Abacus Contest ” they do,have and eat different things than us.

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