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30 Responses to “Storyboard/Movie: Sarina’s The Magnificent Tape”

  1. eettalfonso says:

    Sarina is a natural actress! She can ham it up pretty well too. The look of surprise on Benjamin’s face is priceless. You could work on not allowing extra noise to not be filmed during a shot. It got pretty loud during one of Benjamin’s lines. Excellent effort and it made me laugh!

  2. Avina says:

    Really funny ,good acting , emotion, and you dont need to do anything or fix anything.

  3. Jazmine says:

    I really liked the music choice and the emotion.The diretor cut one of the actors out of the scene.

  4. Johnny C. says:

    It was really funny. I liked the exprecion on benjamin’s face. There was a strang noice in the backround.

  5. Michael says:

    Sarina knew Kathryn in one sene but not in the other what happened? There was great expression by Sarina and Benjmin.

  6. Sarina says:

    There was a weird noise in a shot. But I like the music was cool.

  7. Litzy says:

    One of the part of the head got cut off. Great expression, great edited, good shots.

  8. kyle says:

    I liked how Sarina called Benjeman “little boy” and it is very funny when Benjamin made his face at the tape when Sarina came in to the scene.It was such a L.O.L. movie.

  9. Rachel says:

    I liked how Sarina used expression when she was talking about the tape AND BENJAMEN’S FACE WOOOOOOOOOOOO.

  10. Christina L. says:

    The look on Ben’s face made me laugh, it looked like he was really amazed. There was one scene that it got really loud, so I couldn’t really hear what he Ben said. Your commercial was great!

  11. Crystina A. says:

    Sarina,Katherine,and Benjamin used great expression. In the backround there was some noise. It was well edited.

  12. Gabriella says:

    The movie was very funny!
    I heard a noise in the backround.
    It was filmed very good!
    Benjamin’s face was very funny!

  13. Melissa says:

    I like how Sarina says her lines and I love the music. It’s funny when Benjamin opens his eyes wide open. LOL! I like the shot. But in one of the shots your head was cut ,so you needed to bend down. In the first shot we put the script under the ripped paper.

  14. Araceli Barron says:

    I like it, it’s so FUNNY!! What was that noise?

  15. Diana says:

    They said their lines clearly:)Good acting:)They remembered their lines :)
    When Benjamin was talking there was sort of a rustling noise in the background:(

  16. Adrian says:

    I thought it was really good.
    I don’t think it needs anything to
    work on.

  17. Emily says:

    I lik the part that Benjamen did a surprise when Sarina pop in with the tape.

    Thanks for re-submitting a comment with better spelling Emily. I appreciated that.

  18. Sarina says:

    Thanks I like that part too!

  19. Joanna says:

    Hi! I thought the acting was great. The line about how the ridges on the dispenser make a clean cut is fabulous. I also really liked your use of music. I would have liked to see a shot of the tape being torn from the dispense–a nice close up of the action.

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