Here’s a comment left by a student that is FANTASTIC! It’s very helpful to the writer.

I READ YOUR STORY AND IT WAS GOOD BUT IT NEEDS CAPITALS,PUNCTUATION AND INDENT WHEN YOU START A PARAGRAPH.OK I STILL LIKED IT BUT I DIDN’T GET IT IN THE FIRT PARAGRAPH WERE IT SAID : THAT ONE DAY ANITA GOT TIRED SHE HAD A SISTER NAMED ARISTA SHE WAS NICE SHE TOLD HER SHE WAS BUT TOLD ARISTA NOT TO TELL ANITA ALSO HAD TWO FRIENDS LINDA AND MORGAN SHE ALSO TOLD THEM SHE TRUSTED HER BEST FRIEND.

OK I LIKED IT STILL OK !!!!